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Vision Ias: General Studies Comment Sheet
Vision Ias: General Studies Comment Sheet
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EVALUATION INDICATORS
1. Contextual Competence
2. Content Competence
3. Language Competence
4. Introduction Competence
5. Structure - Presentation Competence
6. Conclusion Competence
1. Dear Taqvi,
Good you have attempted all twenty questions, after evaluating the copy certain
feedbacks stated below:
You have written good content, however lacks of contents in some answers such
as 4, 7,9,11,17,18 not written adequately. Refer to micro comments of these
questions.
3.
You have written good language in the answers, meaningful sentences across
the copy.
The structure part is good, however not emphasized on parts, not aligned answer
along with order of the questions. Refer to micro comments of these questions
2,7,14,18 etc.
5.
Your presentation part is good, highlighted key words, legible and readable in the
answers.
You have concluded fairly, not written in these questions no. 3,12,13,16,20 etc.
6.
Taqvi, you have ample potential to enhance your knowledge in answering a
question and scored good marks.