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Date: April 24, 2022

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My teacher Hind was born on December 1967 in Algeria, her mother was R. Saad and her
father was S. Kal. She has had five siblings and her father was a farmer. She lived such a poverty and
misery life, but she has learned the real sense of life.

In 1980, Mm. H attended University College where she attained a Bachelor of teaching Mathematics.
She also completed several other degrees at the University. Afterwards, she took her PhD in 1999
and applied for her first job as a lecturer at the university.

She has been married to A. Qnaa since 1990, and she has gotten three children.

When my teacher leaves this planet, she will be a remembered as a great genius woman, as a close
friend, as a kind mother. Her work is ideal, she has inspired each person she met whenever she
knows him or not. This woman is extraordinary and deserves to go down in history.

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- A good topic sentence for the paragraph. - Correct tenses.

- Correct Subject/Verb agreement.

- Good spelling.
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- Clear purpose - to explain

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Writing grade for this task 5/5

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