Writing Task 1 - Practice 1

The two bar charts compare the percentages of Australia’s residents who live in urban, rural
and town over two periods of time (1995 and 2010). At first glance, it can be seen that the
number of people who lived in rural areas declined significantly regardless of the place they
were born.

During 1995 and 2010, the proportion of people living in cities were higher than those living in
towns and rural areas, however in 2010 people who were born in Australia accounted for just
over 60% and those who were born outside stood at 80%, these percentages exceeded those
accounted in 1995 by around 20% for both cases (people living in and outside Australia).

In contrast to 1995, the proportion of people living in rural areas in 2010 was not the second
largest, in fact it had declined significantly representing just under 20% for people who were
born in Australia and less than 5% for people who were born outside.

On the other hand, proportion of people living in towns had remained the same throughout
the five years.
Correction from Chat GPT:

The following is a corrected version of your essay:

The two bar charts compare the percentage of Australia’s residents living in urban, rural, and
town areas over two periods of time: 1995 and 2010. At first glance, it can be seen that the
number of people living in rural areas declined significantly, regardless of where they were
born.

In 1995 and 2010, the proportion of people living in cities was higher than those living in towns
and rural areas. However, in 2010, people who were born in Australia accounted for just over
60% of the population, while those born outside of Australia stood at 80%. These percentages
exceeded those recorded in 1995 by approximately 20% for both groups.

In contrast to 1995, the proportion of people living in rural areas in 2010 was not the second
largest. In fact, it had declined significantly, representing just under 20% of people born in
Australia and less than 5% of those born outside of Australia.

On the other hand, the proportion of people living in towns remained the same throughout
the five-year period.

I would rate this essay a 6/10 for the IELTS exam. The essay has clear ideas and a good
structure, but there are some errors in grammar and vocabulary that need to be corrected for
a higher score.

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore,
developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial
aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You should write at least 250 words.

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Words 467

As a person who has spent most of his 27 years living in a poor country and surrounded by it, I
will definitely say that financial aid from rich countries is and will be useless if this doesn´t
come with other kind of help.

In order to answer this question, let´s analyze my country, it’s a good example because I think
most of the poorest countries in the world face the same issues, one particular thing and what
all of them have in common is that, they in fact are rich in terms of natural resources. Perú, my
country, has an incredible amount of minerals copper and gold principally, almost ten years
ago the demand and therefore the prices of this minerals raised significantly, the logical
thought about this was that it will be beneficial for the country and its people, but it did not
happen. What happen was that foreign companies and 2% of privileged people took advantage
of this and became even more richer. It takes us to the second thing that most of the poorest
countries in the world have in common, Corruption.
Corruption is not an issue that jus affects poor countries it has spread all over the world since
small organizations to big and developed countries, but what makes difference between them
and the poorest countries is that they are not completely infected by it. Peru as just as most of
the poorest countries in the world have an enormous level of corruption. This will make that
any financial help that comes from anywhere goes directly to the wrong people, maintaining
the rest in poverty.

In conclusion, I think that any help that comes from rich countries should concentrate in
reducing the level of corruption of the nation that they are trying to help, this will have a
bigger and significantly impact in poverty because the resources that poorest countries already
have will be well managed and redistributed to the people who really need.

Correction by GPT

Here's your corrected essay:

As someone who has spent most of their 27 years living in a poor country and surrounded by
poverty, I can firmly say that financial aid from rich countries is and will be ineffective without
other forms of assistance.

To illustrate this point, I will use my own country, Peru, as an example. Many of the poorest
countries in the world, including Peru, are rich in natural resources. In the case of Peru, it has a
large amount of copper and gold. However, when the demand and prices for these minerals
increased a decade ago, it did not benefit the country and its people as expected. Instead,
foreign companies and a privileged few took advantage of the situation and became even
wealthier.

Another common factor among the poorest countries in the world is corruption. Although
corruption is not limited to these countries and affects organizations of all sizes, including
developed countries, it is more widespread in poor countries. In Peru and other poor nations,
corruption is rampant, which means that any financial aid will end up in the hands of the
wrong people, perpetuating poverty.

In conclusion, I believe that any help from rich countries should focus on reducing the level of
corruption in the recipient country. This will have a more significant and lasting impact on
poverty as the resources of poor countries will be managed and distributed to those who truly
need it.

Score: I would give this essay a score of 6.5-7.5 for the IELTS exam. The essay demonstrates a
clear understanding of the topic, and the argument is well-structured and supported by
relevant examples. However, the language used could be more varied and sophisticated, and
there are some grammatical errors.
Writing Task 1 - Practice 2

Words 1095

The given chart illustrates how many tourists had visited three different areas in a European
country over period of two decades counting from 1997 to 2007. At first glance, we can see
that the number of tourists visiting that country had been increasing significantly since 1987 to
2007.

Comparing the three categories from the chart Its evident that tourist had more preferences
for visiting the country’s Coast. There are just a few years around 2002 where tourist visiting
lakes slightly exceeded those visiting the Coast. The pattern of tourist visiting the mountains
seems to be fixed and without movement, although it had increased from approximately 15
thousand visitors since 1987 to 2007. These visual effect in the pattern is caused because the
others had a fluctuated pattern over the 20 years period.

At the end of the period, tourist visiting lakes were the second largest but it is the category
which had experimented the major increase in the number of visitors going from
approximately 10 thousand to 50 thousand visitors.
Words 1267

Achieving international sports and gaining important international medals it’s a big goal for any
country so it’s natural that countries develop some strategies in order to achieve their goals.
Building specialized facilities to train top athletes it’s one strategy that could be seem as
discriminated one, but in fac, it is not. Of course, that not every athlete could be able to use it,
but it does not mean that it is discriminating.

The first and the most important advantage of having specialized facilities is that there are to
many sports that necessarily required those kinds of facilities in order to help athletes to raise
their level, get better score, get better times and so on. These improvements in the athletes’
skills and the possibility of gaining an international medal will not be possible without an
adequate infrastructure.

In the other hand, the only disadvantage that comes to my mind about building specialised
facilities is that it could be perceived as discriminated because it won´t be open and free to use
by everyone. But the restrictions that comes with specialised facilities are totally
understandable, not every one even athletes are prepared for it. It will required a certain
experience and master about the sport in order to know how to correctly use it. But this also
could works as motivation for the athletes because they will put all their effort in mastering a
sport and be able and allowed to use it. As a consequence of this, the country will gain many
elite athletes which would be well prepared and could represent the nation in international
sport events.

In conclusion, I believe that building specialised facilities will cause a beneficial impact not just
for the country’s athletes, this also will be inspirational for the regular people and children
who would dream to become an elite athlete and represent their country.
Writing Task 1 - Practice 3

Words (1586)

The given two pie charts compare the amount of time employees spent doing different
activities over two different periods of time. Overall, it can be seen that employees destinated
most of their time to work in both years 1958 and 2008.

At 1958 employees spent one third of their time working while in 2008 it increased accounting
for just over two fifths. An increment of 6% in traveling to work is reasonable considering that
employees spent more time working in 2008. Time playing sports and doing other activities did
not change too much, the gap between the two period is just 2%.

On the other hand, time spent by sleeping and going out with friends and family declined,
going from almost one third in 1958 to one quarter in 2008 and from 19% to 6%. These
decreases were also expected considering the activity with major increase (Working).
Writing task 1 – practice 4

The diagram explains the hole process involved in collection, purification and treatment of
rainwater to be later consumed as a drinking water in an Australian Town. Overall, it can be
seen that the process of getting drinking water is quite simple.

To begin, the rainwater is collected by drains, which are located on the floor, just in one side of
the house, this collection would not be possible without the assistance of pipes which conduct
the water from the rooftop to the drains and next to the water filter. Following, the filtered
water, which is now free of impurities, is storage in a big tank.

In the subsequent stage, storage water goes to water treatment (through a big and large tube).
Hence, chemicals are added and mixed with the storage water, after this, which started as
rainwater is finally able to consume by humans as drinking water.
Cooperate with your pairs and team work are essential abilities that are learned and
interiorized in childhood. As someone who grew up practicing team sports, I can firmly say that
it is one of the most effective ways to teach a kid cooperation.

Be part of a group or a team gives you a sense a of community, a feeling of acceptance and the
satisfaction of knowing that you belong to something that is bigger than just you, besides that
it also helps you to make friends and build relationships that probably are going to last for a
long time and definitely mark your life. However, be part of team or group also demands you
to do your part, in a sport team every member have a designed function or task to do, the
other members team rely on every one and trust that every one are going to do their part.

As a member of a sport team, you will experience many situations where you will have to work
with the other members in order to achieve a goal, this could sound quite easy but in reality,
it’s not. Working with someone is challenging because you required to understand, emphasize,
communicate and in many cases get an agreement with your partner. Every person is unique
so it makes harder the process of working together.

In conclusion, cooperation and other social skills are improved if you belong a sport team,
because you will be in an environment where you will be practicing and learning how to
cooperate and communicate with other person. The younger you start to learn these abilities
the more natural it will become.

Review by Chat GPT

Here is my review of your essay, taking into account the IELTS Task 2 criteria:

Overall, your essay presents a clear argument and is well-structured, with a good introduction
and conclusion. You provide a personal perspective and examples to support your main points.
However, there are some areas for improvement in terms of grammar, vocabulary, and
sentence structure.

Grammatical errors:

"interiorized" should be "internalized".

"sense a of community" should be "sense of community".

"definitely mark your life" should be "that will definitely leave a lasting impact on your life".

"every member have" should be "every member has".

"rely on every one" should be "rely on everyone".

"an agreement with your partner" should be "agreements with your partners".

Vocabulary:

You could use more diverse vocabulary to express your ideas more precisely. For example,
instead of "quite easy" you could use "simple" or "straightforward".

Try to avoid repeating the same words too much. For example, you use "cooperate" or
"cooperation" several times. You could use synonyms such as "collaborate", "work together",
or "teamwork".

Sentence structure:

There are some sentences that are too long and complex, making them difficult to follow. For
example, "Be part of a group or a team gives you a sense a of community, a feeling of
acceptance and the satisfaction of knowing that you belong to something that is bigger than
just you, besides that it also helps you to make friends and build relationships that probably
are going to last for a long time and definitely mark your life."

Some sentences could be rephrased to make them clearer and more concise. For example,
"The younger you start to learn these abilities the more natural it will become" could be
rephrased as "The earlier you learn these skills, the more natural they will feel."

In terms of rating, I would give your essay a band score of around 6.5 to 7 out of 9, based on
the IELTS Task 2 criteria. Your essay has good coherence and cohesion, but the errors in
grammar, vocabulary, and sentence structure may lower the score slightly. However, you have
presented a clear and well-organized argument, which is a strength of your essay.
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The given table shows an estimation of the population’s quantity (number) for four countries
around the world. Overall, it can be seen that by the year 2050 population will raise (rise) in
three out four countries. The figures are represented in millions.

According to the table, the estimated number of people living in Indonesia increases
approximately by 44 from 2003 to 2025 and 38 million from 2025 to 2050. The largest
increments showed in the chart correspond to this country. Argentina, is the country which
has the second largest (highest) increments (increase) in the number of estimated
populations. It accounted a (for) raise of 14 million in 2025 and a similar increment by the year
2050.

In comparison to (with) Indonesia, Republic of Korea will have a very small positive increase in
its population, which will account for just (is projected to increase by just) 4 million in the two
estimated periods. In contrast to these countries, the European country will experience (is
projected to experience) a small decrease in its population, going (expected to decrease) from
54 million in 2003 to 45 million in 2050.

Review by CHAT GPT

Based on the IELTS Writing Task 1 criteria, your essay has the following strengths:
You have provided an overview that accurately summarizes the main trends shown in the
table. Your essay is well-organized and easy to follow, with a clear introduction and body
paragraphs that focus on specific details.

However, there are a few areas that could be improved:

The grammar and sentence structure could be more varied and precise in some places. For
example, there are a few sentences that could be rephrased to sound more natural and clear.
You could have used more specific details from the table to support your observations. For
instance, you could have mentioned specific years or numbers to provide more context.
Your conclusion is brief and does not add much to the essay. It would be helpful to summarize
your main points and restate your overall observation about the data.
Overall, I would rate your essay as a Band 6 or 6.5. With some additional attention to
grammar, specific details, and a stronger conclusion, you could potentially raise your score to a
7 or higher.

In some countries like mine, getting a major degree could be extremely difficult and it’s not
because citizens are not capable of achieve it, it is due to the enormous amount of money that
you need to get, in order to go to college. As someone who had studied thanks to government
help, I believe universities fees should be free, but no to everyone.

Major education needs to be free or at least there has to be an option for people who couldn´t
afford it. To illustrate this point let´s take my country as an example, when people finish high
school and they want to go to college, they have two options: the first one is going to a private
university where they will be required to pay a monthly fee, but like me and many of the
people who couldn´t afford it, there are one more option, public university. Get in and study in
a public university requires to take and pass successfully the entrance exam, which is not easy,
people have to prepare for it. It took me like 1 year to approve that exam, but it could be
more.

In my country, public university gives an opportunity to study for free to everyone, it doesn´t
matter where part of the country you come from or your economic situation. You just have to
prepare enough to approve it. I think this process makes you appreciate the place where you
go to study. But most important, public university changes lives through education. Many
people, in many cases excellent students, wouldn´t have been able to study if it was not free.
As an example, Mario Vargas Llosa, the first Peruvian in winning a Nobel prize, studied in a
public university.

In conclusion, university fees should be paid by the government. However, this financial help
has to be destinate to everyone who really deserve and appreciate it. It could be a once life
opportunity and change a life.
Writing task 1

The given bar graph depicts the fluctuations in global sales of four different digital games over
a period of six years, counting from 2000 to 2006. At first glance, it can be seen that 3 out 4 of
these games had grown / “three out of the four games experienced growth”. The figures are
represented in billions of dollars / “The figures are in billions of dollars”.

By the beginning / “At the beginning” of the period, there were just / “only” 2 digital games in
market, console games and handheld games, which accounted for approximately 6 $ bn and
just under 12 $ bn respectively. In 2001, online games is showed / “are shown” for the first
time in the graph, accounting for an sales amount near to $ 0 bn, while the other two digital
games almost remained at the same.

From 2002 to 2005, mobile games and online games have / “exhibited” a very similar sales
behavior, increasing from just 1 billion to almost 6 billion. During this time, handheld games
showed a slightly increase accounting for around 13 billion in 2005. In contrast, console games
showed a decreasing pattern going from 6 bn in 2000 to approximately 3 bn in 2006.

By the end of the period, and in comparison with / compared to the previous year, handheld
games and online games increased by approximately 2 billions, while mobile phone games
increased just by around 1 billion. In contrast, console games continued with it’s / their slightly
decreasing pattern.

CHAT GPT CORRECTION

Overall, the essay provides a clear and accurate summary of the bar graph. The structure of
the essay is appropriate, and the ideas are presented in a logical sequence. The essay includes
an introduction, an overview, and detailed information on the fluctuations in global sales of
digital games over a six-year period.

However, there are some errors in grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure that affect
the clarity of the writing. Below are some suggestions for improvement:

Instead of "3 out 4 of these games had grown," it would be clearer to write "Three out of the
four games experienced growth."

In the sentence "The figures are represented in billions of dollars," it would be more
appropriate to write "The figures are in billions of dollars."

In the sentence "By the beginning of the period, there were just 2 digital games in market," it
would be more accurate to write "At the beginning of the period, there were only two digital
games in the market."

In the sentence "In 2001, online games is showed for the first time in the graph," it would be
more appropriate to write "In 2001, online games are shown for the first time in the graph."

In the sentence "From 2002 to 2005, mobile games and online games have a very similar sales
behavior," it would be more appropriate to write "From 2002 to 2005, mobile games and
online games exhibited similar sales behavior."

In the sentence "During this time, handheld games showed a slightly increase accounting for
around 13 billion in 2005," it would be more appropriate to write "During this time, handheld
games showed a slight increase and accounted for approximately 13 billion in 2005."

In the sentence "By the end of the period, and in comparison with the previous year, handheld
games and online games increased by approximately 2 billions," it would be more appropriate
to write "By the end of the period, compared to the previous year, handheld games and online
games increased by approximately 2 billion dollars."

In the sentence "In contrast console games continued with it’s slightly decreasing pattern," it
would be more appropriate to write "In contrast, console games continued with their slightly
decreasing pattern."

In terms of the Writing Task 1 IELTS exam criteria, the essay demonstrates an ability to present
a clear and organized overview of the given data. The essay covers all the key features of the
graph and provides a summary of the trends in sales for each of the digital games. The essay
also includes appropriate data descriptions and comparisons, as well as clear and accurate use
of numbers and figures. Overall, the essay would score well in terms of task achievement and
coherence and cohesion. However, the grammar and sentence structure errors may affect the
score for lexical resource and grammatical range and accuracy.

CHAT GPT RATE

Based on the content and structure of the essay, I would rate it as a Band 7 according to the
IELTS Writing Task 1 criteria. This is because the essay adequately covers all the key features of
the graph and provides a clear overview of the trends in global sales of digital games over the
six-year period.
However, there are some grammatical errors in the essay that may affect the score for
grammatical range and accuracy. Some examples of these errors include:

"3 out 4 of these games had grown" - incorrect subject-verb agreement

"online games is showed" - incorrect verb tense

"handheld games showed a slightly increase" - incorrect noun-verb agreement and missing
article

"by approximately 2 billions" - incorrect use of plural/singular and missing article

"it's slightly decreasing pattern" - incorrect use of possessive pronoun

Overall, these errors do not significantly affect the clarity or coherence of the essay, but they
may lead to some minor confusion or ambiguity. To improve the grammatical accuracy of the
essay, it would be helpful to review basic grammar rules and proofread the text carefully for
errors.

Introduction

Bullying could be one of the major problems that schools are facing in these days. Year after
year, higher numbers of bullying´s cases are reported even though all the efforts that parents
and teachers are making to control it. In this essay, causes and possible solutions of this issue
will be detailed.

I am not an expert in education or psychologist, but I believe that one of the causes of bullying
might be related to a psychological troubles that the bully kid is going through. Bully kids
present an aggressive behavior, which is not normal for a healthy kid. Indeed, aggressiveness is
a result from the mistreatment abuse that the bully kid is going through or had been going
thought. Sadly, In many cases, this mistreatment comes from someone near to the kid,
brothers, uncles or even their own parents. Another possible explanation to a bullying
behavior could be related to the exposure to violence that kids are facing. Nowadays, kids all
over the word spend more time connected to internet, consuming all kind of content without
any restriction or adult supervision. Violence learned by Bully child has to come from
somewhere and if it is not coming from their family, it is very probable that it comes from
internet.

In my experience, I noticed a particular thing about bullying in schools, most of the cases in a
classroom from 25-30 students, there is just one bully kid, who has one or two friends, the
victims of bullying used to be 3 other kids at maximum and the spectator are always more than
88% of the total students in a classroom. I firmly believe that spectators could make a huge
change helping to stop bullying. Teachers and school authorities should focus on them,
teaching and encouraging them to report and help a bully’s victim. Once the Bully is identified,
school should give him or her phycological assistance and follow the case.

Lately, school bullying cases has been increasing because consciousness about this issue is
growing. Bullying’s causes should be identified and particularly analyzed in every school. The
spectators would play a key role in stopping bullying if they know how to act when they are

Introduction

Changing, as ironic it could sound, is probably the only constant in our life. Now more than
ever, we live in a changing world and the last 100 years are a god example of it. As humans,
every aspect of our life has dramatically changed during this time from the way we travel to
the way we communicate. In a changing word like ours, would not be normal that everyone
seem change as a positive thing?. In this essay, I will discuss about changes and why it could be
perceived as good or bad thing.
Doing the same thing repeatedly allows a person to master any activity, which is good because
they become efficient and more important, it gives a person the feeling of being good at
something. Another advantage of always doing something in the same way is that you don’t
get stressed while you are doing any activity, because you have already mastered it. Workers
use to experience it, when changing takes place in a company, in most of the cases they are
against and reluctant to change at first. Avoid change always, could be a huge problem for any
person because most of the improvements that a person makes are due to change. Even
though people do not like it at first, changing gives the opportunity to get better.

Get used to change and get adapted are essential abilities, which are well appreciated by
companies. However, to many changes in a short period of time could be a sing of instability or
lack of planification in a company. To illustrate this point, I will take my own experience as an
example, few year ago when I was working as an accountant assistant in a firm, our manager
quit his job and a new manager took his place. Since the moment he appeared he tried to
make too many changes in every aspect, from the way we communicate with clients to
working ours. I had to admit that most of the changes he made were good however some of
them even didn´t have sense because he hadn´t known the business well yet. Instead of seem
him as good leader we perceived him as someone who was just improvising and figuring out
what was working or not.

In conclusion, we lived in a changing world that requires us to get used to changes. Avoid it
could be considered as a big disadvantage in our current environment. Conversely, making
changes is a process that needs to be analyzed carefully, if we do not care enough it could turn
into a big trouble instead. However, I think that in a way every change is good because besides
the good or bad experience that it give us, it also will teach us.

CHAT GPT CORRECTION

Certainly, here are some of the grammatical errors and awkward phrasings in your essay, along
with suggested corrections:

1.- "god" should be "good" in the sentence "the last 100 years are a god example of it."

2.- "In a changing word like ours" should be "In a changing world like ours."

3.- "Would not be normal that everyone seem change as a positive thing?" should be
"Wouldn't it be normal for everyone to see change as a positive thing?"

4.- "Workers use to experience it" should be "Workers used to experience it."

5.- "Avoid change always, could be a huge problem for any person" should be "Always avoiding
change could be a huge problem for any person."

6.- "Get used to change and get adapted are essential abilities" should be "Getting used to
change and adapting are essential abilities."

7.- "However, to many changes in a short period of time could be a sing of instability" should
be "However, too many changes in a short period of time could be a sign of instability."

8.- "Instead of seem him as good leader we perceived him" should be "Instead of seeing him as
a good leader, we perceived him."
9.- "Besides the good or bad experience that it give us" should be "Besides the good or bad -
experiences that it gives us."

CORRECTED VERSION

Changing, as ironic as it may sound, is probably the only constant in our lives. Now more than
ever, we live in a changing world, and the last 100 years are a good example of this. As
humans, every aspect of our lives has dramatically changed during this time, from the way we
travel to the way we communicate. In a changing world like ours, it would not be normal for
everyone to see change as a positive thing. In this essay, I will discuss changes and why they
could be perceived as a good or bad thing.

Repetitive practice enables individuals to achieve mastery in a given task, which is good
because they become more efficient and, more importantly, it gives a person the feeling of
being good at something. Another advantage of always doing something in the same way is
that you do not get stressed while doing any activity because you have already mastered it.
Workers used to experiencing it, when changing takes place in a company, are usually against
and reluctant to change at first. Always avoiding change could be a huge problem for any
person because most of the improvements that a person makes are due to change. Even
though people may not like it at first, change provides an opportunity for improvement.

Getting used to change and adapting are essential abilities that are well appreciated by
companies. However, too many changes in a short period of time could be a sign of instability
or a lack of planning in a company. To illustrate this point, I will take my own experience as an
example. A few years ago, when I was working as an accountant assistant in a firm, our
manager quit his job, and a new manager took his place. From the moment he appeared, he
tried to make too many changes in every aspect, from the way we communicated with clients
to working hours. I have to admit that most of the changes he made were good. However,
some of them did not make sense because he did not know the business well yet. Instead of
seeing him as a good leader, we perceived him as someone who was just improvising and
figuring out what was working or not.

In conclusion, we live in a changing world that requires us to get used to changes. Avoiding it
could be considered a big disadvantage in our current environment. Conversely, making
changes is a process that needs to be analyzed carefully. If we do not care enough, it could
turn into a big trouble instead. However, I think that in a way, every change is good because,
besides the good or bad experience that it gives us, it also teaches us.
Writing task1

The two given charts displays how India’s population and France’s population are structured
considering age and gender over the year 1984. At first glance, we can clearly see that in India,
the older the age group, the smaller the proportion of the population, while in France it is
more balanced.

In detail, the percentage of French people from 0 to 35 years old are roughly similar, they
accounted for around 4 percent for both genders. These percentages are completely different
for Indian population, where kids from 0 to 5 represent the largest population accounting for
approximately 7% and 6% for male and female, respectively. From here to the older age
groups is noticeable a pattern of dismiss by 0.5% for each Indian age group with an exception
of the last group (people whom are older than 70).

It must be noticed that gender distribution in India is close to equal for all the age groups
showed, while in France the percentages of males older than 60 years old are exceeded by
females.
Introduction

The idea of knowing where you came from, or who was your family and what they did in the
past is kind of exciting. Nowadays, thanks to technology and other advances is possible to find
out your own family history. In this essay, I will try to explain what motivates a person to
investigate about their past and analyze if it will be positive or negative having such
information.

I believe that people who try to know about their family’s past are motivated principally by
curiosity, you really have to be a curios person to make such an effort in tracking your family
history. Knowing about you own history will be priceless and it will totally worth all the
resources invested. In my particular case, trying to know who were the parents of my
grandparents will be almost impossible because they did not have any identification. They
were born in a small village, too far away from cities, where the information’s register was not
common until approximately 1950.

I think that some people are not prepared for knowing what their ancestors did. Is a fact that
not all the people in the past were good, some of them did horrible things, so what could
happen if you find out that was your family who did such things. People probably will be
ashamed and it will affect their humor they could even start to feel depressed. In the other
hand if you find that your ancestor did really good things you will probably feel pride and this
could be inspirational to you.

Even though knowing your family history could be inspirational and make you feel proud of
where you came from, you also have to be aware of the negative effects that it will cause. Also
you need to understand that you will not be defined by the things your family did, every day is
an opportunity to grow up and become a better person, and maybe in the future, you will
make feel someone really proud when they find out that you belong to his family tree.
The given table shows the numbers of people who had gone for international travel over a period of 15
years. The information is ordered by areas and the figures are represented in millions. At first glance,
we can clearly see that there was an increase of the total international traveler’s number, counting from
448.9 million in 1990 to 693.7 million in 2005.

In the given statistics, it’s also clearly seem that the first five years were the period of time were the
areas experienced the highest increase, accounting an increment of approximately 166 million of
oversea travelers. In the other hand, the last five years were the period with the lowest increment,
accounting just 23 million approximately.

By the end of the period, Asia and the pacific was the area which had the biggest growth in terms of
percentages (more than 100%), while Europe had the biggest growth in terms of quantity. It accounted
an increment for around 120 million.
While many people go to university for academic study, more people should be encouraged to
do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified worker such as plumbers and
electricians. Do you agree or disagree?

I strongly believe that more educated individuals will help us to grow as society and it is a fact
that we need good professionals to make researches and discoveries in all the areas. But how
many professionals are truly necessary in a society or a country or even a world? I definitive
think that there has to be a limited number. Our actual economic system and working market
are not structured to support that everyone becomes professional.

I feel that my generation, better known as millennials, are living in a changing and challenging
world, even more than in the past. We live in a world that demands of us adaptation and more
advance skills in order to be able to compete and success, in some way this idea has
interiorized in our minds and made us to believe that the only way to achieve success is going
to college and leaving our dreams and passion for later. As a consequence, we can easily find
underpaid professionals who are not happy doing what they are actually doing and regretting
about that decisions they have taken.

As conclusion, I totally agree with the idea that people should be encouraged to pursue
vocational training, but not just because there is a lack of qualified workers, also and more
important because by doing this we will be changing a person´s life helping them to find that
sense of realization that they wouldn´t find doing other things. As a result, we also help the
working market to get equilibrated and given it the necessary quantity of professional that it
really need it.

CHAT GPT Correction

Sure! Here are some of the grammatical errors in your essay and suggested corrections:

1. "I definitive think" should be "I definitely think."

2. "Our actual economic system" should be "Our current economic system."

3. "We live in a world that demands of us adaptation" should be "We live in a world that
demands adaptation from us."
4. "In some way this idea has interiorized in our minds" should be "This idea has become
internalized in our minds in some way."

5. "Underpaid professionals who are not happy doing what they are actually doing"
should be "Underpaid professionals who are unhappy with their work."

6. "And regretting about that decisions they have taken" should be "And regretting the
decisions they have made."

7. "I totally agree with the idea that people should be encouraged to pursue vocational
training, but not just because there is a lack of qualified workers" should be "I strongly
agree that people should be encouraged to pursue vocational training, not only to
address the shortage of qualified workers."

8. "Also and more important" should be "More importantly."

9. "By doing this we will be changing a person´s life helping them to find that sense of
realization that they wouldn´t find doing other things" should be "By doing this, we can
change a person's life and help them find a sense of fulfillment they might not find
through other means."

10. "As a result, we also help the working market to get equilibrated and given it the
necessary quantity of professional that it really need it" should be "As a result, we can
also help balance the job market and provide the necessary quantity of professionals it
requires."

1. "more educated individuals will help us to grow as society" should be "more educated
individuals will help us to grow as a society."

2. "it is a fact that we need good professionals to make researches" should be "it is a fact
that we need good professionals to conduct research."

3. "definitive" should be "definitely."

4. "Our actual economic system" should be "Our current economic system."

5. "We live in a world that demands of us adaptation" should be "We live in a world that
demands adaptation from us."

6. "in order to be able to compete and success" should be "in order to be able to
compete and succeed."

7. "As a consequence, we can easily find underpaid professionals who are not happy
doing what they are actually doing and regretting about that decisions they have
taken" should be "As a consequence, we can easily find underpaid professionals who
are unhappy with their work and regret the decisions they have made."

8. "but not just because there is a lack of qualified workers, also and more important
because by doing this we will be changing a person´s life helping them to find that
sense of realization that they wouldn´t find doing other things" should be "but not just
because there is a lack of qualified workers, but also because by doing this, we can
change a person's life and help them find a sense of fulfillment that they wouldn't find
in other careers."
Overall, your essay is well-structured and clearly addresses the prompt, and with the above
corrections, it would be an excellent piece of writing for the IELTS exam.
While it is true that dangerous sports could end in a life loss, every individual is conscious of
how much risk they take. Fortunately, we all are free to decide what sport fit with our
personality and what we want to practice it. No sport should be banned because it is
considered risky by certain people.

Considering that every person is unique and have their own opinion and believes, it will be
really hard to determine what will be considered as dangerous sport, so there will be no
consensus basis to select what sport should be banned. Besides that, taking risk is an essential
part of the human being, some people born with and adventure and risky spirit, it would not
be fair for them to banned the activities that make them happy and give them a sense of
fulfillment.

Viewed from a different perspective, people might find useless and unnecessary to practice
and activity that could end in a life loss. They argument that dangerous sport should be
banned because this sports are practiced with no adequate equipment and in an equally
dangerous environment without considering all the security measures. In addition, they think
such activities and sports are dangerous not just for the one who is practicing, it is also
dangerous in some cases for the viewers and spectators.

We each have our own idea about how much risk is too much for us and we are free to decide
what sport we want to practice. However, sportsman should be more cautious about the risk
they are taking and be aware of the consequences of it.

CORRECTION FROM CHAT GPT

1. "every individual is conscious of how much risk they take" - This sentence should be
rewritten as "every individual is aware of the risks they take."

2. "Fortunately, we all are free to decide what sport fit with our personality and what we
want to practice it." - This sentence should be rewritten as "Fortunately, we are all free
to choose the sports that fit our personality and interests."

3. "No sport should be banned because it is considered risky by certain people." - This
sentence is grammatically correct, but it would be more clear to say "No sport should
be banned simply because it is considered risky by some individuals."
4. "Considering that every person is unique and have their own opinion and believes" -
This sentence should be rewritten as "Considering that every person is unique and has
their own opinions and beliefs."

5. "so there will be no consensus basis to select what sport should be banned." - This
sentence should be rewritten as "so there will be no consensus on what sports should
be banned."

6. "some people born with and adventure and risky spirit" - This sentence should be
rewritten as "some people are born with an adventurous and risky spirit."

7. "it would not be fair for them to banned the activities that make them happy and give
them a sense of fulfillment." - This sentence should be rewritten as "it would not be
fair to ban activities that make them happy and give them a sense of fulfillment."

8. "They argument that dangerous sport should be banned" - This sentence should be
rewritten as "They argue that dangerous sports should be banned."

9. "without considering all the security measures." - This sentence is grammatically

correct, but it could be more clear to say "without considering all necessary safety
precautions."

10. "In addition, they think such activities and sports are dangerous not just for the one
who is practicing, it is also dangerous in some cases for the viewers and spectators." -
This sentence should be rewritten as "In addition, they believe that such activities and
sports are not only dangerous for the participant but also for the spectators."

11. "We each have our own idea about how much risk is too much for us and we are free
to decide what sport we want to practice." - This sentence is grammatically correct.

12. "However, sportsman should be more cautious about the risk they are taking and be
aware of the consequences of it." - This sentence should be rewritten as "However,
athletes should be more cautious about the risks they take and be aware of the
consequences."
Childhood is a period of time when kids define their personality and find what activities they
really like and what they don’t. In this period, Parents play an essential role. They have to help
them to figure it out those activities that awakes curiosity and passion in their kids.

The only way to figure it out what activities you like is trying as much activities as you can. Kids
by themselves couldn’t be enrolled in many activities so their parents should help them in this
process and pay attention to them while they are practicing. Its and an enormous advantage
for a kid to find out in what activities they are natural. Most of the greatness athletes and
scientist find their passions when they were kids. Maybe it is one of the reasons of their
amazing success.

After a kid practiced and gave a chance to many activities, they have the background to know
what they like and what don´t. In this time, parents have to support their kids and let them
decide what they want to continue practicing as long as the activity are not in any way harmful
for the kid. Sometimes, finding the activity that fit with your personality and really makes you
happy while take a time, so parents have to be patient and supportive with their child.

I strongly believe, parents should let their kids decide what they want to do in their free time
but kids would take a better decision if their parents have helped them to figure it out what
activities they really like.

Corrected version of Chat GPT

Childhood is a period during which children develop their personality and discover what
activities they enjoy and what they do not. Parents play a crucial role in assisting them in
identifying activities that arouse curiosity and passion in their children.

The only way to determine what activities a child enjoys is to try as many as possible. Children
are often unable to participate in numerous activities on their own, so their parents must assist
them in the process and pay attention to them while they practice. It is a significant advantage
for a child to discover their natural talents and interests in various activities. Many great
athletes and scientists discovered their passions when they were children, which may be one
of the reasons for their exceptional success.

After trying out several activities, children have the experience to determine what they enjoy
and what they do not. At this point, parents must support their children and allow them to
decide what they want to continue practicing, as long as the activity is not harmful to the child
in any way. Discovering the activity that aligns with a child's personality and genuinely makes
them happy may take some time, so parents must be patient and supportive of their child.

In my opinion, parents should allow their children to decide how they want to spend their free
time, but children would make better decisions if their parents have assisted them in
determining what activities they genuinely enjoy.

Grammatical errors

Sure, here are the grammatical errors in the essay:

1. In the first sentence, "define" should be changed to "discover" or "explore".

2. In the second sentence, "They have to help them to figure it out those activities"
should be changed to "They have to help them figure out which activities".

3. In the third sentence, "Its and an enormous advantage" should be changed to "It's an
enormous advantage".

4. In the fourth sentence, "Most of the greatness athletes" should be changed to "Most
great athletes" or "Most of the greatest athletes".

5. In the fifth sentence, "After a kid practiced" should be changed to "After a child has
practiced" or "After children have practiced".

6. In the seventh sentence, "fit with your personality" should be changed to "fit your
personality".

7. In the eighth sentence, "really makes you happy while take a time" should be changed
to "really makes you happy may take time".

8. In the last sentence, "kids would take a better decision" should be changed to "kids
would make a better decision".
The given table shows the amount of milk produced by four different nations in three different
periods of time. Overall, we can see that three of the four nations showed an increase of milk
production in their last period.

Tanzania is the nation that showed the biggest growth in percentage terms. Milk production in
this nation grew more than twelve times going from 87,000 litres in 1990 to 1,550,000 in 2010.
Another country that multiplied almost by four its milk production was Guatemala, going from
26,000 in 1990 to 84,000 in 2010.

In the other hand, Netherlands and Australia showed a little decrease in its milk production
(less than 2%) in the second period. Unlike Australia, Netherlands ended with an increase of
more than 200,000 litres of milk compared with the initial period, while Australia had a
decrease of more than 2,000,00 litres of milk in their last period.

GRAMATICAL ERRORS

 In the first sentence, it should be "four different countries", not "four different
nations".

 In the second sentence, it should be "grew" instead of "growth", and "more than
twelve times" should be followed by "from" instead of "going from".

 In the third sentence, it should be "Another country that multiplied its milk production
almost by four was Guatemala".
  In the fourth sentence, it should be "On the other hand" instead of "In the other
hand", and "less than 2%" should be written as "less than 2 percent".

 In the fifth sentence, it should be "Netherlands and Australia showed a slight decrease
in their milk production" instead of "Netherlands and Australia showed a little
decrease in its milk production".

 In the sixth sentence, it should be "compared to" instead of "compared with", and
"2,000,00" should be written as "2,000,000".

Corrected Version of Chat GPT

Overall, the report presents data on the amount of milk produced by four different countries
over three different time periods. In general, three of the four nations showed an increase in
milk production in their final period.

Tanzania experienced the largest growth in percentage terms, with milk production increasing
over twelve times from 87,000 litres in 1990 to 1,550,000 litres in 2010. Guatemala also had a
substantial increase, with milk production almost quadrupling from 26,000 litres in 1990 to
84,000 litres in 2010.

However, Netherlands and Australia showed a slight decrease in milk production in their
second period, with declines of less than 2%. Although Australia had a decrease of over
2,000,000 litres of milk in the final period, Netherlands ended with an increase of over 200,000
litres compared to the initial period.

In summary, while Tanzania and Guatemala experienced significant increases in milk

production, Netherlands and Australia showed relatively minor changes over the time period.
The given chart displays information regarding three expenditures’ categories, its classified in
four age groups of residents in UK in 2004. The three categories are food and drink, restaurant
and hotel and entertainment. At first glance, it can be seen that for people older than 60,
entertainment and food and drink are their principal expenditures.

Looking the chart more in detail, we can see that the elder the UK residents, the bigger the
food and drink expenditure. For example, people under 30, just expend around 5% of their
budget in food and drink while people older than 76 spend more than 20%.

Entertainment and restaurant and hotel have almost exact opposite patterns. People under 30
to 75 have an increase expenditure pattern in entertainment and a decrease expenditure
patter in restaurant and hotel. But in the last group of people (people older than 75), there are
changes in the patterns, while entertainment expenditure decrease, restaurant and hotel
slightly increase.
The two given charts show data regarding to the number of student who made an exchange in
two periods of time from Australia to Europe and vice versa. At first glance, we can see that
there is a major preference in European students to go to study to Australia than the other
way.

Looking at the charts in more detail, we can see that French universities are the first choice for
Australian students in 2007 and 2009, and the least preferable European country to go to
study is Germany in 2007 and Netherland in 2009. On the other hand, there is a major number
of French students who want to go to Australia to study in 2007 while in 2009 German student
are the major number.

In summary, the number of Australian student who wanted to go to study to Europe remains
the same in the two periods of time, while the number of European students showed a slight
increase.
The given plans show the changes that have taken place in a ground floor of a particular
building over three periods of time. At first glance, we can see that this apartment has been
used for different purposes. It was an office since 1958 to 1984, then it became an apartment
for the next fifteen years and finally It has been worked as a Flower shop.

When the floor worked as an office, it had six environments. The manager office, the meeting
room and the kitchen were the bigger ones. There was also a reception area and toilet which
were just next to the entrance. When it worked as an apartment the manager office and the
reception area become the bedroom 1 and 2 while the living room and assistant´s office
turned into the living room.

The most notorious changes can be seen when the floor works as a flower shop, the place
where used to be the assistant’s and secretary’s offices now is full with flowers, the same
happen with the place which used to be the reception area. The only environment that has not
changed over time was the kitchen, it remain the same place over the three periods of time.
The provided diagram shows the changes that have been taken place in the Liverton docks
since 1980. At first glance it can be seen that Liverton docks are not used as a commercial dock
anymore instead it has been worked as a tourist area.

Back in 1980, there used to be 2 warehouse and one crane in the north side and one
warehouse and one Crane in front of them, at the other side of the river. Comercial ships used
to go east and west along the river.

Today there are an education center and a kid´s playing area were used to be the two
warehouse and also there is a sailing club were used to be a Crane. At the other side of the
river, a hotel and a parking were build while the south warehouse was converted into
apartments. Another construction made was the bridge which allows the tourist to go to the
other side of the river just by walking. Finally, Tourist can visit the new ship museum which is
in front the education center.
Grammatical errors found by CHAT GPT

1. "The provided diagram shows the changes that have been taken place" - should be
"that have taken place"
2. "instead it has been worked as a tourist area" - awkward phrasing, could be rephrased
as "it has been converted into a tourist area"
3. "Back in 1980, there used to be 2 warehouse" - should be "2 warehouses"
4. "were used to be the two warehouse" - awkward phrasing, could be rephrased as
"where the two warehouses used to be"
5. "and also there is a sailing club were used to be a Crane" - should be "where a
crane used to be"
6. "At the other side of the river, a hotel and a parking were build" - should be "were
built"
7. "while the south warehouse was converted into apartments" - should be "the
southern warehouse"
8. "Another construction made was the bridge which allows the tourist to go to the other
side of the river just by walking." - awkward phrasing, could be rephrased as "Another
addition was a bridge, which allows tourists to easily cross the river on foot."
9. "Finally, Tourist can visit the new ship museum which is in front the education center."
- should be "tourists" and "in front of the education center."

Corrected version by Chat GPT

The diagram provided shows the changes that have taken place in the Liverton docks since
1980. At first glance, it can be seen that Liverton docks are no longer used as a commercial
dock, but have been converted into a tourist area.

In 1980, there were two warehouses and one crane on the north side, and one warehouse and
one crane on the other side of the river. Commercial ships used to travel east and west
along the river.

Today, an education center and a children's play area have replaced the two warehouses on
the north side. A sailing club now occupies the space where the crane used to be. On the other
side of the river, a hotel and a parking lot have been built, while the southern warehouse has
been converted into apartments. Additionally, a bridge has been added, allowing tourists to
easily cross the river on foot.

Finally, tourists can visit the new ship museum located in front of the education center.
The provided graph depicts the salary for four professions and compares the salary earned by
them when they started and after three years of work. The chart gives us information
regarding the average working hours per week for each profession. At first glance, it can be
seen that the salary almost remains the same after three years of work.

According to the graph, the two least paid professions are nurse and police. Between them
there is a salary gap of 3 thousand dollars when they start to work and 4 thousand dollars gap
after 3 years of work. Police officers earn a little bit more than nurses however they work 2
more hours per week in average.

Looking the graph and the chart in more detail, It can also be seen that there is no correlation
between the quantity of hours worked and the salary between firefighters and underground
drivers. While firefighters work 19 hours per week more than underground drivers they earn
10,000 dollars less.

The provided line graph depicts how many people visited an UK museum during the summer
and winter of 2003. Overall, it can be seen, that the number of summer visitors exceeds the
quantity of winter visitors by far.

Looking at the line graph in more detail, it can be seen that during summer season the
museum is opened to the public from 9 o´clock to six o´clock, while during winter season it can
be inferred that the museum works just until 3 o´clock because it does not receive any visitor
after that time.

From the opening to midday, the figure of summer visitors skyrocketed, reaching its highest
point at 1500 people at 12:00 o´clock. After that, the trend reversed. In the other side, during
winter time, the highest number of visitors received by the UK museum was 600
approximately. It represents less than the 50% of the visitor that the museum had received in
the same hours of the day during summer time.

The provided bar graph gives us information regarding the proportions of evening time spent
by parents taking care of their children in the year 2022 in a particular country. Overall, it can
be seen that mothers spent more time doing activities related with the caring of their children
than fathers.

Looking the graph in more detail, we can see that dressing is the activity where mothers spent
the highest percentage of their time and playing games is the activity where they spent the lest
proportion time (It just accounted around 25%). Compared to mothers, fathers by their own,
almost don’t spend time taking care of their children in the evening. Doing homework is the
activity where they spent more time with their children but it was just 10%. In the other
activities they couldn’t spent even the 5 percent of their evening time with their children.
In the other hand, playing games is the activity where both parents spent most of their time, it
accounted almost the same proportion of time that mothers spent dressing their children
(more than 70%). The second activity with the major proportion of time spent by the two
parents was preparing for bed, which accounted 50%.

The two bar graphs compare the percentages of Australian men and women employed over
three different periods of time. There are three groups of people showed in the graph and they
are organized by age. Overall, it can be seen that men and women from 35 years old to 44 are
the ones who have the major employment rate.
According to the bar graphs, Women from 15 to 19 years old showed an employment rate of
60% approximately in the three periods of time. In the other hand, men from the same age
group experienced a fewer employment rate, they accounted for around 51% in average.

Almost the 100% of Australian men from 35 to 44 years old were employed in the three
periods of time, while women from the same age group just accounted nearly 80% in its
highest rate period. However, women from that age group showed a trend of slightly increase,
they went from around 60% in 1984 to almost 80% in 2014.

The third age group was formed by people from 60 to 64 years old. Men from this age group
had an employment rate of 50% in average. In contrast, women of the same period of time
experienced an employment rate of around 20% in average. However, women from 60 to 64
showed a notorious increase in 2014. The increase in 2014 was more than 20% compared to
2001.

The given chart shows the amount of calories consumed by a person in four different
countries. The chart just takes in consideration three staple foods (wheat, maize, raice).
Overall, it can be seen that that people from Egypt are the ones who consume the highest
amount of calories and Polish are the ones who consume the least.

Looking the chart in more detail, we can see that every country has a different main source of
calories, for example: Rice is the main source of calories for Cambodians, 1445 calories are
provided by this food, while Maize is the main source for Mexicans, it provides around 1083
calories. Wheat is the main source of calories for people from Egypt and Poland, they
accounted a consumption of 1095 and 865 respectively.

It also can be seen that Maize doesn’t take part of the Polish’s diet and wheat just contributes
with 18 calories for Cambodians’ diet. Rice is almost not ingested in Poland and Mexico, they
only contributes with 19 and 57 calories respectively.

Grammatical errors

1. The first sentence should read "The given chart shows the amount of calories
consumed by a person in four different countries" instead of "The given chart shows
the amount of calories consumed by a person in four different country."

2. The second sentence should read "Overall, it can be seen that people from Egypt are
the ones who consume the highest amount of calories, and Poles are the ones who
consume the least" instead of "Overall, it can be seen that that people from Egypt are
the ones who consume the highest amount of calories and Polish are the ones who
consume the least." Here, the word "that" is unnecessary and "Poles" should be
pluralized.

3. The sentence "Looking the chart in more detail" should be changed to "Looking at the
chart in more detail."

4. In the sentence "for example: Rice is the main source of calories for Cambodians," the
colon should be removed and replaced with a comma.

5. In the sentence "while Maize is the main source for Mexicans, it provides around 1083
calories," a comma should be added after "Mexicans" to separate the clauses.

6. In the sentence "Wheat is the main source of calories for people from Egypt and
Poland, they accounted a consumption of 1095 and 65 respectively," the word "they"
is unnecessary. It should be changed to "accounting for a consumption of 1095 and
865, respectively."

7. The sentence "Maize doesn’t take part of the Polish’s diet" should be changed to
"Maize doesn't take part in the Polish diet."

8. In the sentence "Rice is almost not ingested in Poland and Mexico," the word "not"
should be replaced with "hardly."

9. The sentence "they only contributes with 19 and 57 calories respectively" should be
changed to "they only contribute 19 and 57 calories, respectively."

Corrected version of Chat GPT.

The given chart shows the amount of calories consumed by a person in four different
countries. The chart only takes into consideration three staple foods (wheat, maize, and rice).
Overall, it can be seen that people from Egypt are the ones who consume the highest amount
of calories, and the Polish are the ones who consume the least.
Looking at the chart in more detail, we can see that every country has a different main source
of calories. For example, rice is the main source of calories for the Cambodians, providing 1445
calories, while maize is the main source for Mexicans, providing around 1083 calories. Wheat is
the main source of calories for the people from Egypt and Poland, accounting for a
consumption of 1095 and 865 respectively.

It can also be seen that maize is not a part of the Polish diet, and wheat only contributes 18
calories to the Cambodians' diet. Rice is almost not consumed in Poland and Mexico,
contributing only 19 and 57 calories respectively.
The provided bar chart depicts the quantity of visits that a community website had in its first
and second year of use. Overall it can be seen that the number of visitor in the second year is
higher than the visits in the first year.

The number of website’s visits had followed a similar pattern in both years. It started with a
gradually increase in September to October, then it skyrocketed in November and December.
In the first year there were around 10,000 visitors while in the second year there were 18,000.
From January two February there was a decrease, however in the first year the decreased
accounted for approximately 95%.

In the last 6 months, from march to august there was large increase. For the first year the
number of visit reached its peak in August at 15,000 visit, whereas in the second year the peak
was in July at more than 22,000 visits.

Errors founded by Chat GPT

1. "The provided bar chart depicts the quantity of visits that a community website had in its
first and second year of use." - The word "quantity" is not incorrect, but it is more common to
use "number" instead. Also, the tense should be "has" instead of "had" because the website is
still in use.

2. "Overall it can be seen that the number of visitor in the second year is higher than the visits
in the first year." - The correct phrase is "the number of visitors" instead of "visitor" since it is a
plural noun. Also, the phrase "the visits in the first year" is not correct because visits is a
countable noun, so it should be "the number of visits."

3. "The number of website’s visits had followed a similar pattern in both years." - The
apostrophe in "website's" is not necessary. Instead, it should be "the website visits."

4. "It started with a gradually increase in September to October, then it skyrocketed in

November and December." - The correct phrase is "a gradual increase" instead of "gradually
increase."

5. "From January two February there was a decrease, however in the first year the decreased
accounted for approximately 95%." - The correct phrase is "From January TO February" instead
of "two." Also, the phrase "the decreased" is not correct because it should be "the decrease."

6. "In the last 6 months, from march to august there was large increase." - The correct phrase
is "there was a large increase" instead of "there was large increase." Also, the word "March"
should be capitalized.

7. "For the first year the number of visit reached its peak in August at 15,000 visit," - The
correct phrase is "the number of visits" instead of "visit," and it should be "15,000 visits"
instead of "15,000 visit." Additionally, the sentence is incomplete, and it needs a conjunction
to connect the two parts.

Corrected version of Chat GPT

The provided bar chart depicts the number of visits that a community website has had in its
first and second years of use. Overall, it can be seen that the number of visitors in the second
year is higher than in the first year.

The number of website visits followed a similar pattern in both years. It started with a gradual
increase from September to October, then it skyrocketed in November and December. In the
first year, there were around 10,000 visitors, while in the second year, there were 18,000.
From January to February, there was a decrease. However, in the first year, the decrease
accounted for approximately 95%.

In the last six months, from March to August, there was a large increase. In the first year, the
number of visits reached its peak in August at 15,000 visits, whereas in the second year, the
peak was in July at more than 22,000 visits.
The provided diagram shows all the process that Olives has to go through to become Olive oil
and be ready for sale. Overall, it can be seen that the production process is kind complex and
has seven steps.

Looking at the diagram in more detail, we can see that the production process begins with
olive picking, which is made by humans. Then the olives are carried to a machine where they
are rinsed with cold water. After that, they go through a belt to be smash. Once smashing is
finished, we can obtain two products, olive stones and olive paste.

In the next process, olive paste is bagged in some bags with holes. Then, the bags are pressed
by a machine. After the olive paste is well pressed, it is time to separate the oil from the water.
Finally, the oil is packaged in bottles to be transported to storage for sale.
The diagram provided shows the production process of carbonated beverages. Overall, it can
be seen that the process involves five complex stages starting from water cleaning,
carbonation and mixing until getting the drinks ready for sale.

In the first stage, which is called water cleaning, the raw water goes through a filter to a large
recipe, here chemicals are added. This big recipe is connected with a pump which allows the
water go to the electric heaters. In the beginning of the second stage, the water is heated and
its vapor goes to a large tank through a cooling pipe. Carbon dioxide is added to the tank, as a
result of this, carbonated water is obtained.

In the third stage, the carbonated water is stored in a large mixing tank where some Colouring,
Syrup and Flavor are added and mixed. The resulting water which it has already been
converted to soda goes through filter to be filled in bottles and cans. Filtering and Filling is the
four stage. Finally, these bottles and cans are packaged and sent to supermarkets for its
sale.

Introduction

In the last decade, Technology has changed our world in so many aspects that I couldn´t
mention all of them. The way we communicate is probably one of the biggest changes we have
experienced. Communication is present in almost every aspect of our life so any change in the
way we communicate will have a big effect in our lives and in some cases this effects would not
be positive.

A new way to communicate that didn’t exist before is social media. Besides all of its benefits I
think it is responsible of most of the negative effects the people are facing right now. Addiction
is one them, people spent a big percentage of their day looking at their profiles worrying about
what people would think of them and envying how other people seem to be happier than
them. According to a scientist research, people has never been so exposure to the approval of
their fellows so when they don’t receive the attention or likes they want, they start to feel
unworthy and their self-esteem declines causing depression in most cases. It is a phenomenon
that did not exist before and now it is affecting young people specially.

Other negative effect that I experienced by my own is related to communication in the labor
center. Due to accessibility of it, most companies started to call or send email to their workers
even when they are not in working hours. Some companies demand that their employees
should be connected almost the 24 hours of the day. It is a recently phenomenon which
increased after the coronavirus lockdowns.

In conclusion, I won’t deny that modern devices, like the ones we use today, have made our
live easier than in the past but we also should be aware of the negative effects that are caused
by it. Depression caused by social media and stress caused by companies outside of the
working place are new issues that people are facing thanks to modern communication.
The provided chart shows the activities made by British people when they were unemployed
the last year. At first glance, it can be seen that there are some differences between the
activities made by men and women in the morning and in the afternoon.

Looking at the chart in more detail, we can see some notorious differences between activities
did by men and women. For example, around 22% of men prefer spent their morning looking
for a job whereas only 16% of women spent their morning trying to get a job. There is a gap of
almost 30% between the percentage of women who spent their morning doing housework and
men who made the same activity. Around 26% of women went to shopping in the morning
while just 20% of men spent their time doing the same activity.

There are also some similarities between the activities made by men and women, staying in
bed and watching TV is one of them, 8% of men and women preferred staying in bed in the
morning.

Although, many people would argue that experimentation on animals is a cruel activity
practiced by companies which are just looking for profits. I believe that Experimentation on
animals should be allowed but just for essential investigations nevertheless this need to be
well regulated by authorities. Unfortunately, I think there is no other alternative, at least for
now.

One essential activity, which could justify experimentation on animal is medicine. Many human
lives have been saved by procedures or medicaments that first were proven in animals. I once
read about a research technique which would make possible to growth a human organ in an
animal to be then transplanted in human body. I am not 100% sure if it could work but I really
think that this research has meaningful purpose which at the end is help people. However, it is
well known that the beauty industry has been killing so many animals testing make up on
them. I strongly believe that in cases like that experimentation in animals is not justified. It is
not fair take a life away for such a purposeless activity.

Human beings and animals have systems and organs which can be compared because they
work in similar ways so is logical to test medicines and treatments in animals first. It allows
scientist to know the effectiveness and the possible negative effects so they would be able to
make adjustments and corrections increasing the probabilities that it can work effectively in
humans. Sadly, I do not think that at least for now there are other alternatives.

In conclusion, I think that there some situations where experimentation on animal could be
justified. However, it has to be made in conditions to ensure the animal’s quality of life. I really
hope that in a near future thanks to technology advances we don’t need to made test on
animals.
ERRORS FOUND BY CHAT GPT

Here are the errors that I found in your essay and explanations for the corrections:

1. Although, many people would argue that experimentation on animals is a cruel activity
practiced by companies which are just looking for profits.

Correction: "Although" should not be followed by a comma. Instead, use a period or semicolon
before starting a new sentence.

2. I believe that Experimentation on animals should be allowed but just for essential
investigations nevertheless this need to be well regulated by authorities.

Correction: "Experimentation" should be lowercase as it's not the first word of the sentence.
"But" should be capitalized, and "nevertheless" should be replaced with "However." Also, it's
better to write two separate sentences instead of using "but" to connect them.

3. Unfortunately, I think there is no other alternative, at least for now.

Correction: "Unfortunately" should be followed by a comma.

4. One essential activity, which could justify experimentation on animal is medicine.

Correction: "animal" should be plural, and there should be no comma after "on."

5. Many human lives have been saved by procedures or medicaments that first were proven in
animals.

Correction: "Medicaments" is not a commonly used term, so it's better to use "medications"
instead.

6. However, it is well known that the beauty industry has been killing so many animals testing
make up on them.

Correction: "Testing" should be changed to "by testing." Also, "makeup" should be written as
one word.

7. It is not fair take a life away for such a purposeless activity.

Correction: "Take" should be changed to "to take."

8. Human beings and animals have systems and organs which can be compared because they
work in similar ways so is logical to test medicines and treatments in animals first.

Correction: "Which" should be changed to "that,"

CORRECTED VERSION BY CHAT GPT

Although many people would argue that experimentation on animals is a cruel activity
practiced by companies that are only looking for profits, I believe that experimentation on
animals should be allowed, but only for essential investigations, and regulated by authorities.
Unfortunately, I do not think that there is any other alternative, at least for now.

One essential activity that could justify experimentation on animals is medicine. Many human
lives have been saved by procedures or medications that were first tested on animals. I once
read about a research technique that would make it possible to grow a human organ in an
animal to be then transplanted into a human body. While I am not 100% sure if it could work, I
believe that this research has a meaningful purpose, which at the end is to help people.
However, it is well-known that the beauty industry has been killing so many animals by testing
makeup on them. In cases like that, experimentation on animals is not justified. It is not fair to
take a life away for such a purposeless activity.

Human beings and animals have systems and organs that can be compared because they work
in similar ways. Therefore, it is logical to test medicines and treatments on animals first. It
allows scientists to determine the effectiveness and possible negative effects, enabling them to
make adjustments and corrections, thereby increasing the probability that it can work
effectively in humans. Unfortunately, I do not believe that, at least for now, there are any
other alternatives.

In conclusion, I believe that there are some situations where experimentation on animals could
be justified. However, it has to be done under conditions that ensure the animal’s quality of
life. I sincerely hope that in the near future, thanks to technological advances, we will no
longer need to test on animals.

Introduction

Although many people would argue that talking about money in daily conversations could be
impolite, I think that it could be educational. Talk with someone about your personal finance
will have a positive effect because you would be able to think about it and realize if there are
problems.

I will take my own experience as an example to illustrate mi point. I grew up in a family where
we couldn’t talk about money so as a Child I thought that money was not a real problem.
When I was teenager I realized that my family were going through economy difficulties but I
couldn’t ask about it. My parents used to say that money were their problem and we their
child don’t need to worry about it. I realized that this was a real problem when I got my first
job because I did not know how to manage my incomes. My best friend was the first person
who though me how to control my expenses and manage my salary.

Talking about and issue helps you because you learn from other people even if they know
much about it. Just by the act of talking your brain start to think about it and these thoughts
will turn into reflection and then the improve and changes will come.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the more we talk about something the more conscious we
become. Talking about your own personal finance could be the first step to make
improvements in your life.

It is thought by some that government is the main responsible of the increasing rate of obesity in
children. However, while I believe that government could play an important role in this issue, I agree
that parents are the main responsible of it.

Lack of exercise in children could be one of the principal causes of rising obesity in children but it is also
a consequence of the few time that parents spend with their children. To illustrate this point, I will take
my own case as an example. When I was a child, my father was the only one who went to work and
support the family so my mon was available to take care of me. She made me go to practice some sports
therefore I ended loving sports even though there were not sports center made by the government.
Nowadays, it is common that both parents go to work so they let their children spent more time playing
online games in order to no be bothered by them. Even though government develop more areas to
practice sports, it will be useless if parents don’t get conscious about it and take some time to take their
children to this sport centers.

Unhealthy alimentation is another cause of obesity in children. Parents play a fundamental role because
they are the only ones who can supervise their children’s diet. However, government could develop
politics to make less easy that families and children get junky food. For instance, one strategy that
worked in my country was to promulgate a law which made companies to add a sticker in their products
if they have a high level of sugar or sodium. Even though it has helped, the positive effect is minimum
because parents still continue not supervising what their children are eating.

To conclude, Although, there are many actions that could be done by the government in order to help to
reduce the obesity rate in children. I strongly believe that parents are the main responsible of their
children’s health.

Correction by Chat GPT

It is thought by some that (government) THE GOVERNMENT is the main (responsible)

RESPONSIBLE for the increasing rate of obesity in children. However, while I believe that
(government) THE GOVERNMENT could play an important role in this issue, I agree that
parents are (the main responsible) MAINLY RESPONSIBLE for it.

Lack of exercise in children could be one of the principal causes of rising obesity in children,
but it is also a consequence of the (few) LITTLE time that parents spend with their children. To
illustrate this point, I will take my own case as an example. When I was a child, my father was
the only one who went to work and (support) SUPPORTED the family, so my (mon) MOTHER
was available to take care of me. She made me go to practice (some) SPORTS; therefore, I
ended (loving) UP LOVING sports even though there (were not) WEREN'T sports centerS (made
by) PROVIDED BY the government. Nowadays, it is common that both parents go to work, so
they let their children (spent) SPEND more time playing online games in order to (no) NOT be
bothered by them. Even though (government) THE GOVERNMENT (develop) DEVELOPS more
areas to practice sports, it will be useless if parents (don’t) DON'T GET conscious about it and
take some time to take their children to (this) THESE sports centerS.

Unhealthy (alimentation) EATING HABITS is another cause of obesity in children. Parents play a
fundamental role because they are the only ones who can supervise their children’s diet.
However, (government) THE GOVERNMENT could develop (politics) POLICIES to make (less
easy) IT LESS EASY that families and children get junky food. For instance, one strategy that
worked in my country was to promulgate a law which made companies to add a sticker (in) ON
their products if they have a high level of sugar or sodium. Even though it has helped, the
positive effect is (minimum) MINIMAL because parents still continue not supervising what their
children are eating.

To conclude, (Although,) DESPITE THERE BEING many actions that could be done by the
government in order to help to reduce the obesity rate in children, I strongly believe that
parents are (the main responsible) MAINLY RESPONSIBLE for their children’s health.

Note: The errors are presented in parentheses, and the corrections are written in capital
letters.

Errors explained by Chat GPT

1. Certainly! Here's an explanation of the mistakes in your essay:

2. "government": The correct term is "the government" because it refers to a specific
governing body.
3. "responsible": The correct form is "responsible" instead of "responsible" to match the
subject-verb agreement.
4. "main responsible": Instead of "main responsible," the appropriate phrase is "mainly
responsible" to convey the primary responsibility.
5. "few": "Few" indicates a small number, while "little" is used to describe a small
amount of time. In this context, "little" is the correct choice.
6. "mon": It should be "mother" instead of "mon" to refer to the female parent.
7. "made by": The correct phrase is "provided by" to indicate that the sports centers
were made available by the government.
8. "spent": The correct verb form is "spend" in the past tense.
9. "government": Similar to the first mistake, the correct term is "the government."
10. "develop": The appropriate verb form is "develops" to match the subject-verb
agreement.
11. "don't": The correct contraction is "don't" instead of "don't."
12. "conscious": The correct term is "conscious" instead of "conscious" to describe being
aware or mindful of something.
13. "this": The appropriate term is "these" to refer to multiple sports centers.
14. "alimentation": The correct term is "eating habits" to refer to the overall dietary
patterns.
15. "politics": Instead of "politics," the correct word choice is "policies" to refer to specific
measures or actions.
16. "less easy": The appropriate phrase is "less easy" to describe something that is not as
easy.
 17. "in": The correct preposition is "on" to indicate that the sticker is added to the
products.
18. "minimum": The appropriate term is "minimal" to describe something that is at the
lowest or smallest level.
19. "Although": The word "although" is not necessary in this sentence. It can be omitted
for clarity and simplicity.

I hope this explanation helps you understand the mistakes and their corrections. If you have
any further questions, feel free to ask!

Although, there are many reasons which make people continue working. I strongly believe,
that money is not the main factor which motivates people to work. I think that there are other
factors like emotional or educational which makes people want to work.

Most of the parents wake up early and go to work motivated by the idea that their children
would have better opportunities if they work enough to afford a better school or give them
better alimentation. Of course that they are conscious that they need money to be able to do
this. But we can realize that it is not money their principal reason because it is very probable
that if they wouldn´t have children they will be doing different. I will take my own case as an
example, my father stop working in the moment I finished high school and I get into college.
He told me that he worked all of those years because he wanted I have a good education and
once I got to the university he left his job and started to do what he really liked.

Another factor that motivates people to work is learning, it is a true, especially for young
people in my country. Recently graduates, prefer to work for a company which gives them the
better opportunity to learn and develop abilities, instead of a bigger salary. They are conscious
that there are things tha could not be bought by money.

To conclude, while money could seem to be the main reason that motivates people to
continue working. I believe that emotional and educational reasons are what truly motivates
people to stay in the workforce.
It is considered by some that suppliers should be the ones who have to take the responsibility
of reducing packaging materials, while there are others who think that customers have to stop
acquiring products with a lot of packaging. In my opinion, both activities complement each
other in order to reduce the amount of plastic and other materials which contributes to
environmental pollution.

It is logical to think that manufacturers and supermarkets should be the ones who have to
reduce the amount of packaging materials because they are the ones which made it. Besides
the environmental benefit of reducing the amount of packaging, there is also a financial
benefit from reducing it. The product’s cost will be lower if less materials are used in the final
product. Working as an accountant in a retail company, I know by my own experience that
especially in retail products, like the ones which are sold in supermarket, a minimum cost
reduce will make the benefits highly increase.

In the other hand, customers have the power of choosing what to buy, so they will be able to
make a change if they really want. If most of the customers take conscious about the negative
effects of packaging materials and choose to buy only friendly environmental products,
companies would not have other option than make the necessary changes.

In conclusion, give the responsibility of reducing packaging materials to just one of the market
players would be useless, because the effects would not be notorious and wouldn´t last.
However, if suppliers and customers made their part, environmental pollution would reduce
significantly.
Although, the increasing development of translation software, many people think that there is
still reasons to learn a new language. I strongly believe that learning a different language has
advantages which will make people stand out especially in labor and social aspects.

Even though there are many software available which will translate for free almost everything,
I strongly believe there are labor opportunities for people who decided learning a new
language. For instance, they could become official translators and help people to translate
official documents. There are many government and educational institutions which require
that all documents written in a different language have to be translated by official translator to
be valid. Besides that, mastering a different language will be a good improvement for you
resume.

Regarding to social aspects, learning a new language could make you be able to communicate
effectively with persons from different cultures. There is no way that a software can help
people to do that. Communication is almost 90% non-verbal, so even you have a device which
make you understand the other person, there are going to be some parts that will be missed
for example, intonation, pauses or the sarcasm which play an important role in every
communication could not be replicated by any device.

To conclude, Although, I believe that the development of software to translate have helped
too much people and companies, I think it always would have limitations especially in
communication so learning a new language will make people stand out in many ways.

Example of a 7 band essay

Despite to the presence of vast amount of translation programs on computers and other
electronic devices, it is still considered more beneficial in terms of learning language itself. In
this essay, I will be describing my total agreement with this dilemma.

The utmost reason for learning new language instead of using various programs is that human
brain makes necessary changes in its structure and produces necessary chemical substances
which in turn gives other functions to the brain. As a result of this human brain gains new
functions in addition to the language skills.

Another benefit coming from directly learning language is the opportunity to express your
beliefs and emotions in that language which is impossible to realize via software programs.
People around the speaker tend to understand the spoken language more easily and get the
speaker's ultimate goal in a more usual and humane way.

The third reason for studying the language rather than carrying a software to translate might
be the possibility of immediately using language. In other words, software programs can not
find the right words according to the situations or conversations among people. As a
consequence of this, due to different meanings which translation devices remain useless in
such cases, huge misunderstandings can occur.

In a conclusion, in addition to the reasons mentioned above, using language by learning it

always seems reliable and more realistic way than using device for this purpose. As I raised my
pure opinion toward gaining language skill earlier I strongly believe that this method has been
the most preferable method for decades and it will be.
It is thought by some people that children result more beneficiated from receiving home
education than going to school. While, there are others who think that children would develop
abilities and social skills that could not be teaching in home. I believe that regular education
will be perfect for normal child, while there are others who need a major grade of attention,
for those learning in home would be the best option.

One evident benefit from teaching children in school is that the student will receive a
personalized education, which would allow the teacher to find out the child’s interest, know
his strengths and work in his weaknesses. This method has worked before, there are many
remarkable scientists who received home education. For instance, Thomas Alva Edison or
Albert Einstein, both of them struggled in school and were considered not capable of learning
by their school teachers. At the end, they demonstrated that school and their teachers were
wrong.

One the other hand, going to school teaches many social abilities to a child that couldn’t be
teach in home. Learning how to socialize, working with a group and make friends is as much
important as any other subject. I recently read an article that mentioned that soft skills, which
are usually learned when we are child, play an important role in the success of a professional.
So learning these abilities could give us an enormous advantage and will help us to stand out.

In conclusion, although both methods have their own advantages, I believe that parents should
pay attention to what their child really needs and choose the best option for them. Each
method will respond different in every child so they have to choose carefully.
News about crime and other forms of violence are presented in media communication like
television and newspaper almost every day. It is considered by some that showing these kind
of violent news can have negative effect in persons and it should be restricted. In this essay, I
will be describing my total agreement with this dilemma.

I believe that violent news should be restricted because it has a big impact in people’s mood.
Due to the big exposure of these news by media communication people are being affected
without even realizing. People exposed to that kind of news start to see life with less hope and
in a pessimistic way, with the sense that everything is getting worse.

Another factor that support the idea that violent news should be restricted is that these kind
of news are well spread by the media, but they don’t differentiate the public who receive this
information. They usually show it in the morning and evening in the news, which make it
available to be watched by all kind of people, including kids. Some people could argue that
people are free to watch and choose whatever they want but what happen when a Child gets
to it. They would not understand the reasons that make a father rapped her kid or what would
make a mother kill to his own son. At least, this kind of news should be presented in a
schedule that makes difficult to be seen by kids.

In conclusion, although people are free to choose and read whatever they want, I believe it
should be more restricted. People’s mood and innocent people like child are affected by it and
in most of the cases they don’t realize the negative effect of this.
The two provided line graphs shows information regarding the amount of overseas students
and local students who enrolled in Australian universities between the period of 2001 and
2010. Overall, it can clearly be seen that the total number of overseas and local students
showed an upward trend. And the number of Local students exceeded overseas students by
far.

Looking at the line graph in more detail, we can see that the total figure of overseas students
increased dramatically from 2001 to 2010. However, the number of commencing students
showed a constantly and gradually increase until 2009. In the last year the figure almost
remained the same.

Going to Local students graph, the trends between commencing and total students are pretty
much different. The figure for total students skyrocketed from 2001 to 2007, after that period
of time it did not showed any increase. On the other hand, the number of commencing
students almost remained the same over the ten years.
The provided line graph compares the percentage of unemployed people in rural and urban
areas in Australia over the year 2012. Overall it can be clearly seen that the unemployment in
rural areas exceeded the urban areas unemployment.

Looking at the graph in more detail, we can see that rural areas unemployment experienced a
downward trend while urban areas showed an upward trend. More than 6% of people living in
rural areas were unemployed at the beginning of the year, then this rate declined to around
5% at the end of the second quarter. After that, unemployment in rural areas remained almost
the same until the end of the year.

On the other hand, unemployment in urban areas gradually increased from around 2% to
approximately 4% in the first semester, then it showed a dramatically drop to 2% in third
quarter of the year. However, in the last quarter, it gradually increased an ended in 5%, which
was almost the same rate that unemployment in rural areas.
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It is considered by some people that students should learn about the science behind food
preparation in school, while there are other who believe that students should spend their time
learning more relevant subjects. In my opinion, I believe that there are important subjects
which need to be learned by most of the students but there are others subjects that should be
chosen by the students according to their own interests.

There are subjects that most of the school students should learn because it will be useful in
their life. Mathematics and language are subjects that people use in their daily life to solve
basic problems and communicate effectively. They are necessary for almost any activity that
the student would like to do in the future and should be taught even if the student plans to
become chef. There is some basic knowledge that most of the students should know and it
includes biology, geometry, history, chemistry and others which are essential for any human.

On the other side, there also some subjects that would seem to be that there are not essential
for students to learn, subjects like cooking, poetry or dance. However, this subjects are the
ones which help the students to find their interests and figure it out what is their passion. Not
all of the students were born to be scientist or mathematicians, there are some that would like
to be an actor or a dancer. Subjects in school should help students to find their truly interests
instead of forcing them to learn something that will be useless in their life.

To conclude, although I believe that there are essential materials that should be taught in
school and most of the students should learn, I agree that there has to be other subjects which
can help students to find their truly interest and passion.
Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers,
whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in education of children.

Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge
or experience.

Answer:

It is considered by some that teachers should not give their students activities to do when they
are at home, while there are others who think that homework is an important factor in
children’s education. In my opinion, Although I believe that homework is a good method which
allows students to consolidate the knowledge that they have already learned in school, I agree
teachers should be careful about the amount of homework that they give to their students.

One evident benefit of homework is that it helps students to put in practice the knowledge
they learned in school. For instance, the best way to learn mathematics is by practicing, so
homework must be required. There are others subjects like this, that need to be practiced to
consolidate the knowledge in the student’s mind. Homework could also work as a good
indicator for teachers, if the students are available to do the homework in an easy way, it
could mean that students understood the lessons.

On the other hand, some people, especially parents, think that homework is useless if the
children did not understand the lesson in school. They think that teachers give bigger amounts
of homework to the students because they did not understand the lesson in school, so by
giving homework to the students they give the responsibility of teaching to the parents. They
also argue that bigger amounts of homework just make students hate the subject and be
reluctant to learn.

To conclude, although homework could be seen as an awful thing to do by students and also
by some parents, I believe that it is an essential part of learning. However, teachers should be
careful that give the exact amount of homework to avoid possible negative effects in students.
The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit.

What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society?

Despite the fact that the negative effect of smoking is well known by most people, including
smokers, a large number of people continue doing this. For some, smoking is a habit, that in
most cases are learned by young people who tried to imitate their parents or some member of
their family. However, there are some activities that we can do to reduce its consumption in
society like teach children in school and charge this product with bigger taxes.

It is well known that smokers start doing this activity jus by imitating some near to them, in
most of the cases is a member of the family. It is considered by young people as a cool activity
to do but then it turns into an addiction which is really hard to left. Imitating people could be
one of the causes. In a survey realized in my country, young smokers said that they start to
smoke because they saw smoking as something cool to do and most of their friends use to do.

One way of reducing smoking in society could be done by teaching children in school, it is not
enough with just telling them the negative effect of smoking, teachers should make them
understand and be aware of the consequences of smoking. The cost of prevention will be
fewer than the cost of rehabilitate someone with the addiction. Another way of preventing
smoking is by tax regulation, if government charge with more taxes this type of products, the
final price will be higher so it would cause a reduction in consumption.

To conclude, smoking is an activity which is principally learned from someone near to the
family who has this bad habit, so we have to focus on teaching about the negative effect in
children and prevent them to generate an addiction.
The provided bar depicts air pollution levels generated by four different countries over the
year 2021. There are three mainly causes showed in the bar graph, electricity generation,
transport and industry. Overall, it can be seen that Australia is the country which generated
the least levels of air pollution in the three categories, while China showed the largest
amounts.

Looking at the bar graph in more detail, we can see that the levels of air pollution from the
three categories in china were in a range between 60 and 80 PPM. Air pollution generated by
Industry in China is the largest one, it accounted for around 80 PPM. Going to America, we can
see that electricity and Industry generated almost the same level of air pollution, they
accounted for around 30 PPM.

On the other hand, Australia was the country which generated the lest levels of air pollution,
the three categories in this country just showed 20 PPM levels of air pollution. However, air
pollution generated by electricity generation in Japan was the category that least amount of
PPM, it accounted for less than 20 PPM.
The provided bar graph compares the amount of money globally made by the selling of four
different digital games over the period between 2000 and 2006. The four different types
compared in the bar graph are mobile phone games, online games, console games and
handheld games. Overall, it can be seen that three of them experienced an upward trend,
while console games sales was the only category which showed and downward trend.

Looking at the graph in more detail, we can see that online games was the category which
showed the biggest increase, there is a gap difference of more than 8 billion dollars between
the sales in 2000 and 2006. Mobile phone games sales experienced a similar pattern to online
games sales, at the end of the period it accounted a little more than 6 billion.

On the other hand, console games sales showed a gradually decrease, they started the period
with an amount of 6 billion in selling and ended the period with less three billion.
The provided graph depicts the number of people who made their commute by car, bus and
train in UK. It showed the result of number of commuters since 1970 and estimation until the
year 2030. Overall it can be see that car and train commuters experienced an upward trend,
while bus commuters showed an opposite pattern.

At the beginning of the period, car was the most preferable means of transport, and train was
least preferable option. Less than 5 million British people were transported by bus in 1970,
while more than 2 million people used trains. Train and bus commuters experienced almost an
exact opposite pattern. It is estimated that the number of train and bus commuter in 2030
would be more than 5 million and around 3 million respectively. It is noticeable that the initial
difference gap between the two transports media remains in the future.

On the other hand, car commuters experienced the biggest increase in the number of
commuters, they started the period with less than 6 million commuters and it is estimated that
it will end with around 9 million commuters.
I am not sure that our actual society are prepared to deal with the increase of

I am really concerned about this issue

I don’t think that, Pension system could not work well if there is not enough young people to
sustain and contribute to the system, maybe some adjustment need to be made. There is no
enough adequate places to support a big increase.

Politics seem no to be care about it.