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    The document discusses what the author would save in a house fire. In the first paragraph, the author states they would save their hockey shoes. The second paragraph describes the shoes as pink, blue, and gray and that they are comfortable for playing hockey 3-4 times a week. The third paragraph provides reasons for saving the shoes: they were an expensive birthday gift, the author needs them to play hockey, and they were purchased abroad and can't be replaced locally. The conclusion states that in a fire the author would grab their shoes and ensure their family's safety, but if alone would prioritize escaping with their shoes.

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    The document discusses what the author would save in a house fire. In the first paragraph, the author states they would save their hockey shoes. The second paragraph describes the shoes as pink, blue, and gray and that they are comfortable for playing hockey 3-4 times a week. The third paragraph provides reasons for saving the shoes: they were an expensive birthday gift, the author needs them to play hockey, and they were purchased abroad and can't be replaced locally. The conclusion states that in a fire the author would grab their shoes and ensure their family's safety, but if alone would prioritize escaping with their shoes.

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    The document discusses what the author would save in a house fire. In the first paragraph, the author states they would save their hockey shoes. The second paragraph describes the shoes as pink, blue, and gray and that they are comfortable for playing hockey 3-4 times a week. The third paragraph provides reasons for saving the shoes: they were an expensive birthday gift, the author needs them to play hockey, and they were purchased abroad and can't be replaced locally. The conclusion states that in a fire the author would grab their shoes and ensure their family's safety, but if alone would prioritize escaping with their shoes.

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    PORTFOLIO TASK 3 – ARTICLE 1

    if you were on a fire and you have to save something. What would you
    save?

    If I were on a fire I would grab my phone. But, because of being a little bit more creative I
    am going to say that If I were on a fire I would grab my hockey shoes.

    My hockey shoes. They are pink, blue, and gray. They are very comfortable, which is a
    good thing because I use them 3 or 4 times a week. I have had them since 3 months
    ago, so they are brand new.

    I would save my hockey shoes for multiple things, some of them are: They are
    expensive, so it's something that you can't buy every day. Also because without them I
    couldn't play hockey, the sport I am passionate of. They were a birthday gift from my
    uncle. They were bought on E.E U.U and you can't buy them in Argentina because they
    haven't arrived at nike yet.

    To conclude, if there were a fire, I'd probably grab my shoes and run as fast as I can.
    Although if i am with my family it would be more important to be certain that their health
    is good.

    Good job!

    Make sure to print your article with my comments. Below you will find a useful checklist for
    next time 

    WRITING AN ARTICLE - Checklist

     Include a title
     Your article must have:
     Introduction: Here you introduce the main idea of
    your article, that is in this case, the object you
    would save in a fire.
     Paragraph 1: Here you should describe the
    characteristics of such object
     Paragraph 2: Here you should explain the reasons why
    you would take that object
     Conclusion: Here you should summarize the points
    discussed and close your article
     Your body paragraphs must have at least 3 sentences. Also, they
    should be introduced by a sentence that identifies your topic.
    For example, you may begin your first paragraph by saying "To
    begin with, my computer has got unique characteristics", and you
    may begin your second one by saying "There are several reasons
    why my computer is special to me"
     Also, you should link sentences using connectors.
     Use adjectives, adverbs and synonyms to enrich your writing.

    Final Mark: Very Good +


    PORTFOLIO TASK 3 – ARTICLE 1

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