ENG LESSON 5

CRITIQUE PAPER MOCK TEST

distinguish the different parts of a critique paper
---- underline the thesis statement, as well as the reiteration of thesis statement
---- strike through the summary
---- double underline the critical evaluation
---- encircle the topic sentence
---- box the recommendations
---- add a squiggle line for the hook
critique #1:
Do you remember the days when high school was a terrifying place? Now imagine if that high school was filled
with monsters! Monster High is an animated TV series that has gained popularity among children, teenagers,
and even adults. The show is based on the concept of high school, but with a twist of monsters and mythical
creatures as students. Despite its wide fan base, Monster High has been a subject of critique among parents and
critics due to its depiction of gender and body image.
Monster High follows the lives of teenage monsters who attend a high school designed for supernatural beings.
The show focuses on the adventures of the main characters, Frankie Stein, Draculaura, Clawdeen Wolf, Cleo
De Nile, and Lagoona Blue, as they navigate the ups and downs of high school life. Each character has their
unique personalities and backstories, and the show explores their friendships, rivalries, and romantic interests.
The series includes various subplots, including a mystery to uncover the identity of the school's infamous
"phantom," and a focus on the school's sport teams, the Fear Squad and the Roller Maze.
While Monster High has received criticism for its problematic depictions of gender and body image, it also has
several strengths that make it a popular show. One of its strengths is its diverse cast of characters, each with
their unique backgrounds and personalities. The show also explores the importance of friendship, teamwork,
and acceptance of differences, which can be positive messages for young viewers. Additionally, the show's use of
humor and wit in its storytelling can make it an entertaining watch for both children and adults. However, the
highly sexualized and unattainable body proportions of the characters, combined with the focus on physical
appearance, can send negative messages to young viewers about body image and self-worth. Moreover, the
show's portrayal of gender stereotypes and the emphasis on romantic relationships can also be problematic for
young viewers. Therefore, it is crucial to address these issues and promote more positive messages in the show.
In conclusion, while Monster High has faced criticism for its problematic depictions of gender and body image,
it still has the potential to be a fun and educational show for its viewers. However, to promote more positive
messages, the show's creators should take steps to address its problematic elements. By normalizing the
characters' body proportions, avoiding sexualization, breaking away from traditional gender roles, and focusing
on positive messages about self-acceptance and confidence, Monster High can continue to entertain and educate
its viewers while promoting healthy messages about body image and gender. By doing so, the show can become
a positive influence for young viewers, fulfilling its potential as an entertaining and educational program