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Understand the differences between formal academic style and informal spoken style
Develop strategies for dealing with longer texts and unknown words in the context of reading
Tasks
The task you will complete in this unit is:
Write a paragraph on some of the difficulties of learning English and peer edit a classmate’s
paragraph.
▪ Discuss the meaning of culture and consider cultural differences in society, and
What is Culture?
There are many definitions to describe culture and its features. The online Cambridge dictionary
(Culture, 2019a) defines culture as “the way of life, especially the general customs and beliefs, of a
particular group of people at a particular time” and dictionary.com (Culture, 2019b) say it is “the ideas,
customs, and social behaviour of a particular people or society”.
With a partner, brainstorm what you think are the features of culture. Add your ideas to the following
mind map.
Language
Culture
1)
2)
3)
4)
5)
6)
7)
Did you have all of these on your mind map? Which extra aspects of culture did you add? Share this with
your class.
Discussion
In what way can you see, hear or experience culture? How do you know if a group or someone is from a
different culture to yours?
Can you try to explain the concept of the cultural iceberg to a classmate. How do you think this impacts
on the way people think about different cultures? How do you think this concept impacts on cross-
cultural differences and the way people from different cultures interact? Discuss with the class.
Choose several of the different features of culture in the above diagram (both visible and invisible), and
complete the following chart:
Culture Shock
Open the following link on your device by going to Weekly Online Materials on Blackboard and clicking
on the link:
https://college.adelaide.edu.au/blog/5-stages-of-culture-shock-and-how-to-deal-with-them/
Read the information about the 5 stages of culture shock and discuss the following questions with your
group:
Read the text below, which gives directions for a classification task. In order to complete the task,
you will need to construct a diagram like the concept map template that follows:
Assemble this collection of common objects found in the home, office or classroom: wooden clothes-
peg, piece of yellow “post-it” paper, metal teaspoon, drawing pin, paper clip, piece of cotton wool, piece
of soap, sewing pin, five-cent coin, wooden pencil, empty matchbox, match, elastic band, Kleenex
tissue, plastic “screw-on” cap from cool-drink bottle.
First choose a characteristic by which you can divide all the objects into two or three groups.
Within each of these groups, choose a characteristic by which you can further subdivide the objects
and so on.
Try to end up with several groups each containing no more than 2-3 objects. A classification scheme
showing a possible division for the first two levels is given below. In this scheme, three groups are further
divided into sub-groups with particular characteristics. You could use this scheme, or you could develop
your own scheme. For example, you could begin with only two groups and you could develop a second
level of sub-groups.
Adapted from School of Social and Cultural Studies, 2003
Characteristic 1 Characteristic 3
Example Example
Group 1
Example Example
Characteristic 1
Characteristic 1
Characteristic 3
Characteristic 3
Example Example
Develop a classification scheme for the objects and construct a diagram of the scheme on a blank
sheet of paper. Include names for all groups and characteristics and add the objects that fall into
each category. Then construct a second map, but this time do not include the objects themselves.
Give your classification scheme to another member of your class and ask them to classify the objects
using the scheme you have just constructed.
Check if the objects were classified in the same way, in other words, placed under the same groups
and characteristics as in your original map.
i. Animals are divided into: (a) belonging to the Emperor, (b) embalmed, (c) tame, (d) suckling pigs, (e)
sirens, (f) fabulous, (g) stray dogs, (h) included in the present classification, (i) frenzied, (j)
innumerable, (k) drawn with a very fine camelhair brush, (l) et cetera, (m) having just broken the
water pitcher, (n) that from a long way off look like flies.
Jorge Luis Borges, cited in Foucault 1970
ii. Animals can be classified in groups according to characteristics that distinguish them from other
groups of animals. The most well-known groupings of animals are insects, fish, amphibians, reptiles,
birds and mammals. Insects are distinguished by having exoskeletons. Fish are distinguished by
living in water and breathing through gills, while amphibians are distinguished by living in both land
and water environments. Reptiles are distinguished by being cold-blooded. Birds are distinguished
by the ability to fly, with the use of feathered wings. Finally, mammals are distinguished by giving
birth to live young. Despite similarities between all groups of animals, such as sharing many similar
organs, it is these unique characteristics that distinguish them.
Discuss the first classification in more detail with your partner and decide which of the following
reasons explain why it is not logical.
a) There is no logical reason why those items were chosen, instead of other items
Apart from the fact that most of the items in the first classification are too specific, there is also a
lack of general terms to indicate the groupings in which the items could belong. Discuss the
diagram on the following page with a partner and fill the empty boxes with possible terms. Does
the complete diagram help you to make sense of the classification?
Possession
Belonging
Owned to the
Emperor Having just
broken the
water pitcher
Condition Tame
Actual
Embalmed
Fabulous
Animals State Fictitious
Sirens
Drawn with a
Represented very fine camel
hairbrush
Number Innumerable
Suckling
Young
pigs
characteristics
insects
characteristics
fish
characteristics
animals reptiles
characteristics
birds
characteristics
mammals
characteristics
amphibians
CLASSES TERMS
astronomical bodies
climatic zones
natural environments
organisms
biological products
elements
compounds
processes
concepts
4) Discuss the words you marked with an (x). If you are unable to place the words into a category,
try to think of another category that these words could belong to and list a few additional
terms that could also be placed into the category you devise.
5) Another way to organise words is according to collocations. Collocations are groups of words
that are commonly used together. Match the words in the table below to form collocations
commonly used in environmental science.
6) Begin to develop similar word taxonomies and collocations for terms in your discipline area
and build on these throughout the course.
One of the challenges faced by international students is studying in Australia. Write a paragraph
about some of the difficulties facing international students when they study in an Australian
environment, based on your own experience and the experiences of other students in the class.
There are a number of strategies that form the basic steps in academic writing and which will enable
you to write effective paragraphs, essays and research papers.
Brainstorming
Researching
Planning
Drafting
Editing
Final Draft
In this unit, you will follow each of these steps to write one paragraph in the context of a longer essay.
You will not be required to write the whole essay.
Look at the second sentence in the essay question again and identify the following:
Instruction words which are words that tell you what to do. These are often verbs or verb phrases.
Topic words which indicate the main topic and subtopics. These are often nouns or noun phrases.
Limiting words which limit the topic to particular kinds of things such as areas, places and groups
of people. These are often adjectives or adverbials of time and place.
Topic Sentence
Concluding Sentence
A paragraph is a series of sentences (more than one and usually less than ten) which discusses one main
idea.
1. Topic Sentence
5. Concluding sentence
The most important part of a paragraph is the topic sentence. The topic sentence has several functions:
It clearly indicates how the paragraph relates to the main point of the essay
It typically expresses the main point of the paragraph
It indicates the general content of the paragraph
Usually appears as the first sentence of a body paragraph and is made up of the topic and the
controlling idea (the main point that the writer wishes to express)
The next most important parts of a body paragraph are the supporting sentences. These function to
support or develop the idea expressed in the topic sentence.
The body paragraphs also contain examples, which act to explain or provide evidence for the supporting
points.
Finally, the concluding sentence is a summarising sentence which ties all the ideas in the paragraph
together.
Now, write a topic sentence for your paragraph, based on the ideas you have developed. Then,
complete the following outline by writing in your topic sentence and organising your ideas into
supporting points and explanations or examples. Add extra supporting ideas, if necessary.
PARAGRAPH OUTLINE
Topic sentence:
Explanations/Examples:
Explanations/Examples:
Explanations/Examples:
Concluding sentence:
Write a first draft of your paragraph. In the first draft, you should follow your outline but try to let
your sentences flow freely. Think about the organisation, but do not worry too much about the
grammar.
Once you have completed your first draft, read it several times to make sure that it is well organised
and that it makes sense.
Exchange your first draft with your partner. Read your partner’s paragraph and underline any
sections that do not seem to be well organised or that you cannot understand. Use the editing
handout provided by your teacher to help you to understand your feedback.
Write the second draft. Once you have finished, use the correction guide on the handout provided
by your teacher to check the grammar, spelling and other features. Exchange with your partner once
more to double-check.
Here is a checklist to use later in the week when you edit your partner’s paragraph:
Understanding Style
Read the following explanation and then discuss your understanding of style with a partner.
Style refers to the kind of words and expressions, in other words, the kind of vocabulary and sentence
structure, which are used in particular instances of speech or writing. In speech, the kind of words and
expressions used, as well as the kind of intonation and stress, greatly affect the mood or tone of the
speech. For example, by choosing different words and intonations, a speaker can sound either very
formal or very informal. In writing, where intonation is not a factor, the same effects can be achieved by
different choices of vocabulary and syntax.
Style is largely determined by the distance between the person talking or writing and the listener or
reader. Distance here refers to personal distance rather than physical distance. Academic writing is often
aimed at a wide academic or general audience, most of whom are not present and are not familiar with
the writer, and it therefore tends to be formal by having more distance. In tutorials, on the other hand,
the audience is present and largely consists of peers. Tutorial discussions therefore tend to be less
formal by having less distance.
Technical words
Passive expressions
Noun phrases
Slang
Complex sentences
personal pronouns
Read the conventions of academic writing presented below and teach the points you have been given
to the students in your group of four. You will need to find more examples to fully explain these general
points.
• Be as concise as you can without affecting meaning. That is, try to use fewer words but make the
same meaning. For example, “The teacher demonstrated some of the various ways and methods
for cutting words from my essay that I had written for class.” could be shortened to “The teacher
demonstrated methods for cutting words from my essay”.
Use specific words that convey precise meaning rather than more general words or clichéd
expressions. This means, for example, avoiding words or expressions like “stuff”, “a lot of”, “things”,
and “sort of” and choosing exact expressions instead.
Use inclusive language that does not exclude anyone on the basis of group traits such as gender,
race or ethnicity. Particularly important in academic writing is not to use the pronoun “he” when
you are referring to both genders. Use the plural form of nouns and the pronoun “they” instead, or
use “he” or “she”.
Make sure that each sentence contains a subject and a complete verb. A subject is what the sentence
is about and a complete verb gives the reader a sense of time: past, present or future. “Going to the
shop” is not a sentence because it does not contain a complete verb. “He goes to the shop” is a
sentence, as is “Going to the shop is something he likes to do”.
Use end punctuation to show that you have finished a complete idea. Give examples of incomplete
and complete sentences.
Keep modifiers close to the words they modify. For example, “The Bridging Course that I am doing
is very useful for tertiary study” implies that you are doing the Bridging Course now. “The Bridging
Course is very useful for the tertiary study that I am doing,” however, gives quite a different meaning.
Use word order to focus readers’ attention on your key ideas. Primary placement in a sentence (i.e.
whatever appears first) indicates importance. The active form of a sentence, therefore, focuses
attention on the doer of an action, as in “The researcher places the flask into the cooling chamber.”
Here, the focus is on the researcher. Passive forms focus on the recipient of the action as in “The
flask is placed into the cooling chamber.” In this sentence, the flask is emphasised.
Make sure that nouns and pronouns agree, and that verbs agree with their subjects. Find examples
to teach this point.
Focus on ideas rather than on your own personal relationship with your reader. This means
replacing expressions like “I think” and “you must agree”, with expressions such as “For example” and
“It is clear that.” Find other appropriate examples to add to this teaching point. It also means
eliminating emotive expressions such as “personally”, “actually”, and “you know what I mean?”
Demonstrate the relationships between ideas by using appropriate linking language such as
“another reason why”, and “in addition to this”. Find other examples that connect ideas together.
Conversational expressions like “Well, ...”, “Anyway, ...”, “OK, …”, “Like, …” at the beginning of a
sentence or “...OK?”, “...see?” at the end of a sentence are also inappropriate.
After all points have been taught, as a group look at the following pairs of sentences and decide which
sentence in each pair is acceptable in written academic English and which is not. Discuss the reasons for
your decisions with a partner.
a) It is clear from the evidence presented that questions remain about this hypothesis.
c) Leading researchers became incensed after the media ridiculed their findings publicly.
d) Famous researchers totally flipped when the media laughed at their results.
f) It is clear that if these policies are pursued, there will be poor results.
g) Following the new plan the fitness levels were pretty good.
h) Following the new strategy the fitness levels were much improved.
2. Scientific studies say that deforestation can lead to changes in the climate significantly.
4. You can clearly find the similarities between those two ideas.
7. These environmental laws have been enacted in four countries; The United States, Great
Britain, etc.
8. There are many and various ways of showing and demonstrating how the ways in which
animals survive are being limited.
In many academic contexts, it is necessary to give and describe factual information, and often it is
necessary to generalise, or make general comments, about the information. However, because these
statements are not true 100% of the time, it is necessary to use a qualifying expression to acknowledge
this fact.
b) Australian students generally feel free to give their personal views and opinions
Study the expressions in the table below and then work in a group to discuss the differences
between your academic cultures again, but this time use qualifying statements.
Generalising words that can come at the beginning or in the middle of sentences
generally speaking
on the whole
normally
usually
often
sometimes
rarely
a large number of
most
In cases …
some
a few
to…..
(Most) Australians appear
seem
Examples
In the vast majority of cases I think that French communication styles are virtually the same as
those used in Australia.
Generally, it appears that Asian students accept the information they are given.
On the whole, I would say that Eskimo communication styles are different from those of
Australians.
Generally speaking, there is a tendency for Asian students to only think about exams.
Often, instructors are seen as ultimate sources of knowledge. Relationships with other students
are also based on hierarchy.
I believe it’s true to say that Australian students tend to be rather informal.
Edit your paragraph draft to ensure that it is written in a formal academic style.
What do you usually do when you come across an unknown English word? Do you go straight to your
(phone) dictionary? If you do this it is likely that the meaning will remain in your phone and will not be
transferred to your memory. There are alternative ways of dealing with unknown words that are more
likely to store the meaning in your brain.
You may have seen part of the word before. Often words you know are hidden inside words you don’t
know. For example,
Sometimes suffixes and prefixes will add to the meaning of the word. For example,
a. I wouldn't mind sharing with Patrick if he didn't act like being a part of the Witherspoon family
entitled him to a piece of everything on campus.
Definition: ___________________________________________________________________________
What clues in the sentence lead you to your definition?
b. Though Joseph was the true king, his uncle usurped the throne and was now ruling the land quite
cruelly.
Definition: ___________________________________________________________________________
What clues in the sentence lead you to your definition?
c. When around his coworkers, Alan said that he agreed with the boss's new policy, but his candid
opinion was that it would drive away customers.
Definition: ___________________________________________________________________________
What clues in the sentence lead you to your definition?
d. The magnanimous judge released the young offender who had been caught stealing bread by
saying, "Everybody has to eat," and slamming down his gavel.
Definition: ___________________________________________________________________________
What clues in the sentence lead you to your definition?
Definition: ___________________________________________________________________________
What clues in the sentence lead you to your definition?
f. The workers wrote an anonymous letter to their boss in which they expressed their grievances: long
working hours, low pay, and dangerous working conditions.
Definition: ___________________________________________________________________________
What clues in the sentence lead you to your definition?
g. The police officer seized the firework from the underage children.
Definition: ___________________________________________________________________________
What clues in the sentence lead you to your definition?
Morton, n.d.
Look at the sub-headings in ‘Chapter 1: Population’ in the Contents section. Notice that there are
two levels of sub-headings, with indentations used to indicate the levels. With a partner, predict
the content of the chapter from the information in the sub-headings.
Read the following statements and questions and match each with a section in the contents page.
1. In a discussion of the changing population of the world, explain what is happening, where growth
is taking place, and why there is movement of population within developing nations.
section 2
2. Discuss the causes of the population explosion, and explain why birth rates are high in less
developed nations.
section 1
3. Discuss some of the main negative features of a rapidly growing population.
4. Discuss the main problems that can be created when a country’s population growth is low and
when the elderly begin to increase in number.
5. Discuss what UN conferences have concluded about the relationship between population growth
and poverty, and how population growth can be reduced.
6. Explain the demographic transition and show the differences between the experiences of the more
developed and the less developed nations with the transition.
9. Explain why some governments have wanted to promote population growth in their countries,
giving some specific examples of such countries and their reasons for having such a policy.
10. When and at what level will the world’s population probably stabilize? In a discussion of whether
the planet will be able to support this population, explain and use the concept “carrying capacity.”
11. What are some of the factors that must be considered when one tries to answer the question “How
many people can the earth support?” Explain why it is difficult to answer the question “What is the
optimum size of the earth’s population?”
12. Identify some of the most likely population-related problems that may occur in the future.
2. Do you understand the differences between formal academic style and informal spoken style?
5. How interesting was your discussion on your culture and culture shock?