Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Headline
(Announce the release subject with active verbs and colourful words)
Paragraph 1: Summarise the story - who, what, where, when and why. All key information needs
to be in this paragraph
Paragraph 2: Put in more details to flesh out the story you have outlined in the first paragraph
Paragraph 3: “Quotes from you or someone relevant to the story.” Don’t try to
cram too many points into one quote – each quote should make one point
Ends
Notes for Editors
• Provide background information in case they run a longer story
• Outline what you have to offer: pictures, interviewees
• Outline any additional relevant information or facts and figures, but keep it short.
Contact Make sure you supply numbers where you can be reached day or
night. This can make the difference between your story being covered or not
Name: [type name 1] Tel: [type tel 1] Name: [type name 2] Tel: [type tel 2]
Telephone [type fax no] Fax [type fax no] Email [type company email] Website [type web address]
Press releases and effective writing
For additional information visit our website The style should be formal and
www.pr.automatix.co.uk concise, with nothing irrelevant to
the particular story.
or contact Jerry Turner +44 (0) 1792 536012 (phone),
+44 (0) 1792 536723 (fax).
Date: 21 December
Always include some information
Title: Opening of new production facilities in Johor Fahru, Balanesia
as to how the journalist can get
Addressed to: The trade press
more information about the
Author: Kylie Dawson
CONCLUSION
This would be the headline, telling the reader everything they need to know - the overall message.
This is designed to catch the ATTENTION
FACT
This introduces the main idea and should develop INTEREST
DETAIL
This develops the fact, adding important information. This creates
a DESIRE to continue reading
! ! ! ! ! ! ! REWARD
This concludes the article with an additional piece
! ! ! ! ! of information, often in the form of a quotation
or in the Steve Jobs presentation
- analysis this would be the
«and one more thing»
! ! ! ! ! ! ! This can inspire
! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ACTION