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 Main idea 1: They believe that others judge us based on our outward appearance,
including our clothing choice. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ
"appearance" tiếng anh
 Supporting idea: One of the things that help them remain motivated to work hard and
concentrate on what they need to do is dressing in nice clothes.
 Main idea 2: Another significant reason is a greater sense of confidence.
 Supporting idea:
 For those who are smartly dressed, there is a high chance that they can make great
first impressions with others, and their self-confidence in their appearance helps
them bond with like-minded people.
 As a result, this can build a successful personal and career life, thus providing a sense
of fulfillment.
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 Main idea 1: They believe that others judge us based on our outward appearance,
including our clothing choice. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ
"appearance" tiếng anh
 Supporting idea: One of the things that help them remain motivated to work hard and
concentrate on what they need to do is dressing in nice clothes.
 Example:
 Main idea 2: Another significant reason is a greater sense of confidence.
 Supporting idea:
 For those who are smartly dressed, there is a high chance that they can make great
first impressions with others, and their self-confidence in their appearance helps
them bond with like-minded people.
 As a result, this can build a successful personal and career life, thus providing a sense
of fulfillment. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "as a result (of)" tiếng anh
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 Main idea 1: Young people enjoy fashionable clothes and like keeping the pace of
trends. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the younger generation arguably
considers clothes to be part of their identity, a way to show their personality)
 Supporting idea:
 Younger people are prone to trendy clothes; in other words, they would love to follow
fashion trendsetter to determine their styles; for example, rock chic, grundge or hip
hop style.
 They want to have the newest, the most up-to-date look.
 Example: Some of them like to wear provocative clothes such as super-short skirt
with the tight, low-cut, clingy top for girls and jeans revealing underwear for boys
 Main idea 2: Compared with the young, old people prefer to
wear traditional and comfortable clothes, and they don’t spend
much on clothes.
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 Women are more fashion-conscious than men.
 Women’s clothing styles change every year, forcing them to update their wardrobes
so as not to appear behind the times.
 Men have always interacted with trends at a much slower pace than women.
 To males, trends come and go over the course of years, rather than seasons. Instead of
jumping from trend to trend, men have a tendency to invest in fewer, better pieces.
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In my oppinion, it does not really need to spend much money on clothing. to be
fashionable according to me is selecting the right colours that suit your personality and
matching them aptly. You need not always go with the top end brands like Calvin Klein,
Louis Vuitton, …. Moreover, you should care about For me fashion is the right attitude and
confidence that you carry when you dorn the clothes. So, to say to be fashionable it isn’t
really necessary to spend much money