The Journey of a Social Movement: Feedback Form

Your task is to demonstrate through a sequential narrative the progression of breaking down a barrier - a force for change
that begins with the act of a single person and grows into a larger movement or initiative. Exchange your storyboard with
your classmates to gather feedback before moving on to the completion stage of your Breaking Down a Barrier
Assignment.

Your Name Omer Yahya

Name of the Storyboard you Reviewed War Child by Dominic Lussier

The storyboard you are viewing may be on a topic It's about the impact of war on children and what it has done to
them.
or the event that you are not familiar with. Having
looked at the storyboard, give a brief synopsis of
the event being depicted in the storyboard.

Do you think that the most important information is yes i do think that the most important information is included
included?

Is there enough information included? Yes but more could have been better

Do the ideas seem clear to the reader? Yes they do

What part of the narrative seems unclear? Check

all that apply, and explain in greater detail in the
column to the right.
The sequence of the narrative does not I feel like adding more text to the panels would have been better so
that it can be more clearer
flow logically from one panel to another.
There is not enough information given
in the existing panels.
There are too few panels to convey the
narrative effectively.
The visuals don’t align with the text.
Other:

Do you have any suggestions on how to improve

the issues with the narrative structure? Nope, only adding text would have been better.

Comment on what you liked about the way the

process of breaking down a barrier is being I like the way he presented his storyboard. He selected very nice
pictures and the storyboard was very eye catching
conveyed in the storyboard.
nope
Do you have any questions about the process
being depicted in the story?

What elements could be enhanced to improve the just more text

final product?

Other Comments or Suggestions?