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The diagram shows differences in temperature zones between tropical mountains and temperate

mountains. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons
where relevant.
The diagram compares the temperature zones in terms of differences between tropical and temperate
mountains. The diagram compare two different types of mountains in terms of temperature zones at different
heights.
Overall, the tropical mountains are far more higher than the temperate mountains along with a wider
variety of temperature zones while alpine meadows and cool zone are two factors taking up most of the
temperate mountains’ elevation.
With respect to the tropical mountains, the first 600 meters are warm zone where people can plant many
tropical crops and above that is the temperate zones containing coffee and cocoa plantations. Ranging from
1500 to 3000 meters, the cool zone is the dominant region in size in the tropical mountains with the possibility
of grain cultivation. At 3000 meters, broad-leaf trees can be found in the forest while 1000 meters beyond that
height is the alpine meadows zone for pine and firs. Moreover, at 4500 meters above sea level is the permanent
snow whose mountaintop peaks at over 5500 meters, a distance of over 1000 meters higher in comparison with
their temperate counterparts.
Additionally, the starting region of the temperate mountains is the cool zone and it also marks the
general cultivation of grains, potatoes, and flax. Furthermore, the forest begins at 1500 meters and ends at 2000
meters, which are as well the limitations for the appearance of broad-leaf trees and spruce respectively. At 2000
meters marks the transition from forest to alpine meadows zone. Despite being 1000 meters lower than their
tropical mountain counterpart, alpine meadows here in temperate mountains are two times bigger. Finally, in
the uppermost region lie the permanent snow zone ranging from 3000 to 4500 meters.
Comment: Bài viết đúng chuẩn rồi á nè, tuy nhiên là cái overview mình nên nêu ra cái tiêu chí lớn nhất
nha nè, vs xác định đúng cái nào là subject cái nào là criteria á nè (subject thường là những thứ thấy được, còn
criteria là những cái tiêu chí trừu tượng á nè). Trong thân bài thì em nên so sánh nhiều hơn á nè. Bài này anh có
viết rồi nên anh sẽ gửi em cái bài để tham khảo nha nè

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