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described some suggestions to be applied on the company under his research, but it should have
been included before conclusion. In addition, the weakness of the writer is lack of indicating
clearly the number and kind of people whom the questionnaire is delivered and what type of
findings has been collected.
Part Six: Further Development
In our opinion the techniques the author has been used are good to some extent but they should
be strict and company concerned. Because we recognized there are multiple numbers of
techniques used in this research but not clear and neat to understand.
The researcher should use neat and clear writing styles in order to meet his study’s aim. The
author didn’t show the possible inter-relationship between compensation and performance of
employees in the end of study of his conclusion part. That means, the increase in the
compensation will be followed by an increase in employee performance. Performance may
improve if the compensation of employees increased. Labor disciplines also a positive effect on
employee performance. The increase in labor discipline will be followed by an increase in
employee performance.