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DISCUSSTION ESSAY

Introduction

 Paraphrase đề: Nêu 2 quan điểm đối lập qua việc paraphrase (Không cần thêm
thắt gì khác)

 Thesis statement: Nêu quan điểm cá nhân

Body 1: Quan điểm bạn không đồng tình

 Topic sentence: Chỉ ra những người đồng tình với quan điểm này có lý do của họ

 Explanation: Đưa ra luận điểm hỗ trợ cho quan điểm

 Example

Body 2: Quan điểm bạn đồng tình

 Topic sentence: Đồng tình với quan điểm này vì một số lý do

 Explanation: Đưa ra luận điểm hỗ trợ cho quan điểm

 Example

Conclusion: Paraphrase answer

( discuss and give opinion )

Bodies:

 Body 1: On the one hand, nêu ra 2 lí do vì sao người ta lại ủng hộ quan điểm thứ
1.

 Kèm ví dụ & câu giải thích cho 2 ý kiến ấy

 Body 2: On the other hand, nêu ra 2 lí do vì sao người ta lại ủng hộ quan điểm còn
lại

 Kèm ví dụ & câu giải thích cho 2 ý kiến ấy.


Some individuals opine that celebrities performing pop music should be paid higher
salary in comparison to those majoring in classical music, while others are not in
consummate accord with the aforementioned idea. This essay would delve into
discussing the two perspectives as well as stating my support for the former one.

It is reasonable for classical music performers to earn more money due to their huge
effort in mastering instruments and traditional values that they preserve. Chief among
these is that those who pursue traditional music has spent a plethora of time and attempt
to be adept at using instruments and the specific style of each category of classical music.
Obviously( rõ ràng) , traditional music requires not only thorough understanding of its
nature but also the talent as well as constant practice to deliver the best piece of music
enjoyed by the public. Concerning the second viewpoint, classical music plays a
paramount importance in preserving traditional values of a country. It is true that the more
money artists performing classical music can earn, the more possible that they would not
change jobs. As a result, there are chances that future generations can still enjoy one of
some masterpieces in music field.

Nevertheless, I strongly believe that more financial means should be paid for pop
celebrities due to their short-term contribution and great attempt in maintaining positive
images. With regard to the former, the majority of pop stars have to face the challenge of
a short-lived career since the entertainment industry is constantly changing.
Consequently, for around one or two decades of contribution, most of those well-known
artists would be replaced by other more talent and dynamic ones. Another point is that
performers of pop music always trying to set good examples especially when presenting
in public. Since they aware of their significant impact on people, particularly teenagers,
great effort in creating and maintaining favourable figure has been made by these
individuals. Therefore, it is logical that stars performing pop music should earn more
money.

In conclusion, although artists of classical music have to make great


attempt in mastering their skills and retaining traditional value, I suppose that pop
performners should be paid with higher salary due to their contribution in a short period
of time and their responsibility maintain positive images.

COMPARE AND CONTRAST ESSAY

Introduction
 Paraphrase đề

 Thesis statement

Body 1: Đối tượng/Luận điểm 1

 Giải thích, ví dụ

Body 1: Đối tượng/Luận điểm 2

 Giải thích, ví dụ

Conclusion: Paraphrase answers

OPINION ESSAY

Intro

Paraphrase the topic: It is a common belief that S + V

Thesis: I completely agree (disagree) with this view for several reasons

Body 1: Supporting idea 1

 Topic sentence 1: The first argument given to support my opinion is


that S + V.
 Explanation | Cause-Effect
 Example

Body 2: Supporting idea 1

 Topic sentence 2: Another rationale behind my belief is that S + V.


 Explanation | Cause-Effect
 Example

Conclusion

Paraphrase the Answer: In conclusion, I strongly believe that S + V partly


because [idea1] and partly because [idea2]..
It is suggested that each country should be autonomous in terms of food production,
importing as little as possible. This essay strongly disagrees with this suggestion for
several reasons.

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