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It is reasonable for classical music performers to earn more money due to their huge
effort in mastering instruments and traditional values that they preserve. Chief among
these is that those who pursue traditional music has spent a plethora of time and attempt
to be adept at using instruments and the specific style of each category of classical music.
Obviously( rõ ràng) , traditional music requires not only thorough understanding of its
nature but also the talent as well as constant practice to deliver the best piece of music
enjoyed by the public. Concerning the second viewpoint, classical music plays a
paramount importance in preserving traditional values of a country. It is true that the more
money artists performing classical music can earn, the more possible that they would not
change jobs. As a result, there are chances that future generations can still enjoy one of
some masterpieces in music field.
Nevertheless, I strongly believe that more financial means should be paid for pop
celebrities due to their short-term contribution and great attempt in maintaining positive
images. With regard to the former, the majority of pop stars have to face the challenge of
a short-lived career since the entertainment industry is constantly changing.
Consequently, for around one or two decades of contribution, most of those well-known
artists would be replaced by other more talent and dynamic ones. Another point is that
performers of pop music always trying to set good examples especially when presenting
in public. Since they aware of their significant impact on people, particularly teenagers,
great effort in creating and maintaining favourable figure has been made by these
individuals. Therefore, it is logical that stars performing pop music should earn more
money.
Introduction
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OPINION ESSAY
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Thesis: I completely agree (disagree) with this view for several reasons
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