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In part 1 candidates are asked to write an essay. The question in part 1 always has a discursive
focus. Discursive writing (1) is a style used in academic writing and it requires the high level of
language competence appropriate at C2 level. In addition, the ability to identify key points
from a text is considered important at C2 level. The CEFR states that at this level candidates
“should be able to summarise information from different sources, reconstructing arguments
and accounts in a coherent presentation of the overall result”.
In part 1, candidates are required to base their answers on input material which will take the
form of two texts, of approximately 100 words long each. Each text will present contrasting or
complementary views on a topic. It is important that students identify the key points in each of
the texts, as these points will form the basis of a candidate’s essay. Candidates must integrate
a summary of these points, an evaluation of the abstract arguments involved and their own
ideas on the topic in a coherent essay. (2)
Candidates may, of course, use key words from the question, but must avoid “lifting” whole
segments of the input. No credit will be given for language or ideas that have not been
appropriately expanded on or integrated into their writing.
A discursive essay
A discursive essay is a piece of formal writing which discusses a particular issue, situation, or
problem. There are three main types of discursive essays: for and against, opinion, and essays
suggesting solutions to problems. You may choose any of these to go about your CPE essay.
✅ Use topic sentences followed by supporting sentences. (A sentence we use at the beginning
of the paragraph that summarises what the paragraph will be about. The supporting sentences
provide reasons and examples for our topic sentence)
✅ Well- known quotations (As writer Somerset Maughman once said, “It is bad enough to
know the past; it would be intolerable to know the future”), rhetorical questions (If people
today are not concerned enough about tomorrow, will the future still be there for man?) or
thought-provoking statements are useful devices to make your composition more interesting
(The fact is that one’s future is what one makes it. There is no such thing as chance)
✅Use a formal style (avoid contractions, colloquial expressions and strong language)
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✅ Use formal, impersonal style (passive/ addressing the reader directly) PEOPLE/ ONE
✅ Use generalisations
❌Use over-generalisations
Formal style
(Although it is widely accepted that compulsory military service, which provides an army
with abundant manpower, is beneficial to a country’s ability to defend itself, closer analysis
of military efficiency suggests that it is advanced weaponry which plays a crucial role in…)
(Were this true, we would…/ Never has this been more obvious)
❌ Short forms
❌ Colloquial expressions
❌Simplistic vocabulary
In the early 1960s, a new wave of romantic enthusiasm and innovation – political, spiritual, and
cultural, or rather, countercultural – broke over the Western world. At first, only a few social
and aesthetic radicals were involved in what presently came to be called the Youth Culture.
The majority of right-thinking persons were offended or bored by the new music, the new arts
and the new politics, but a shrewd* of fashion, observing what was being worn on the streets
of Europe and America, might have predicted that in a few years youth would be adored and
emulated everywhere; that, indeed, simply to be under 30 would be accounted a virtue.
*Shrewd: having or based on a clear understanding and good judgment of a situation, resulting
in an advantage
It has been argued that the “youth culture” that began in the 1960s was the product of
manipulation of impressionable young people by commercial interests, that youth culture is
really no more than the range of products available specifically for the young. Others have
tried to explain youth subcultures, not in terms of mindless consumption, but in terms of
genuine style innovation, and the generation of styles which “say” something about the social
and economic conditions in which those young people live, their experiences and their
aspirations.
Similarities/ differences
When you are writing the discursive essay, reference to the main argument in the text must be
made. This is not optional. Phrases like the ones that follow can be useful to make reference to
the text:
To assess means to agree or disagree wholly, or partially with the views expressed.
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Expanding means to provide more information, other views, other angles or other examples on
the topics so you can form an opinion on the issues discussed. This means you will need to
expand some of the ideas provided by the text. Here is language that can be useful to do that:
Paragraph 4: conclusion
The conclusion should be a balanced account of all the aspects dealt with in the body. The
conclusion can be personal (referring to yourself as a writer) or impersonal (using impersonal
structures such as “passive voice” and “introductory it”). The second method is more academic
and hence preferred over the first one.
The essay should start with a reference to the gist of the textual prompts given to you, and
then be followed up by developers and finished by means of a conclusion.
ASSESSMENT True, to a large extent,… (Introduce developers, agreeing* to some extent with
the author) EXPANSION Nonetheless, there is more to… than…. (shift the focus to the
expansion of other ideas). If you agree/disagree with the writer’s views, it is a good idea to
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disagree with them by introducing a different angle. (For instance, it is also crucial to…/
However, X is also an intrinsic aspect of Y/ X should also be considered when it comes to…/ As
far as X is concerned, it goes without saying that Y cannot be underestimated.
*It is a good idea to agree with the textual prompts to some extent. This will give you the
possibility to introduce concession clauses (although, nonetheless, etc.) which will help you
expand using your ideas more easily.
ASSESSMENT: In fact, doing/ being/ thinking about X in this light or way (introduce developers)
EXPANSION: Also/ What is more/ Furthermore/ Even though X may often be the case, it is also
no less true/frequent that…/ One may also see/interpret this as
When considering a topic you need to expand on, you may refer to the discussion clock, which
will help you think of ideas while planning your essays. Referring to the discussion clock is a
useful “brainstorming” technique, as it helps you examine a topic from various viewpoints and
decide on ideas/ points to include in your essay. Keep in mind that a topic may not relate to all
the aspects present in the discussion clock.
Introduction
Body (p.1)
Body (p.2)
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Conclusion
To assess:
The topic of … has proven to be a highly controversial one/ highly contentious in the
current situation/ political climate.
The topic of… has been gaining momentum (gain momentum= to become gradually
stronger)
Allegedly… (used when something is said to be true but has not been proved)
Allegedly, two oil companies spent $6 million trying to free two surviving grey
whales trapped in the Arctic ice.
Supposedly… (used to show that you do not believe that something you have been
told is true) There were rumours of a rift between him and his colleagues, supposedly
because they were jealous of his relationship with the Duchess.
Presumably… (used to say what you think is the likely situation) The remaining 143
presumably include the handful that were later identified as Chinese airspace
incursions.
To introduce concession:
Be that as it may (used to mean that you accept that a piece of information is true but
it does not change your opinion on the subject you are discussing) Building a new
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children's home will cost a lot of money but, be that as it may, there is an urgent
need for the facility.
Albeit (used instead of “although”) The evening was very pleasant, albeit a little
quiet.
Irrespective of (used instead of “regardless of”) The legislation must be applied
irrespective of someone's ethnic origins.
Regardless of (despite) The plan for a new office building went ahead regardless
of local opposition.
Having said that (in spite of) He forgets most things, but having said that, he
always remembers my birthday.
Yet (despite) The US government has made it clear that they will strive to control
those citizens who carry guns. Yet, nothing has been done to prevent
indiscriminate gun selling.
Still (despite) Human rights should be acknowledged by every country. Still, some
seem to be favouring policies which clearly turn a blind eye against them.
(But) then again (used when you have had a new thought that is different from or
the opposite of what you have just said) Then again, mainstream economics is
built on the erroneous assumption that humans are rational.
To add emphasis
HARDLY Hardly had I got into bed when the telephone rang
NEVER Never had she seen such a beautiful sight before
SELDOM Seldom do we see such an amazing display of dance
RARELY Rarely will you hear such beautiful music
ONLY THEN Only then did I understand why the tragedy had happened
NOT ONLY BUT Not only does he love chocolate and sweets, but he also smokes
NO SOONER No sooner had we arrived home than the police rang.
SCARCELY Scarcely had I got off the bus when it crashed into a tree
ONLY LATER Only later did she really think about the situation
NOWHERE Nowhere have I ever had such bad service
LITTLE Little did he know he had lice.
IN NO WAY In no way do I agree with what you’re saying
ON NO ACCOUNT On no account should you do anything without asking.
UNDER NO Under no circumstances should you talk to strangers.
CIRCUMSTANCES
NOT UNTIL Not until I saw John with my own eyes <did I really believe he
was safe>
NOT SINCE Not since Lucy left college had she had such a wonderful time
ONLY AFTER Only after I’d seen her flat did I understand why she wanted to
live there.
ONLY WHEN Only when I arrived home did I feel calm
ONLY BY Only by working extremely hard can we afford to buy new
clothes.
3. Inversions in conditionals
First conditional
We can create a more formal version of a first conditional by inverting “should” and the
subject of the “if clause”.
Second conditional
We can create a more formal version of the second conditional by inverting “were” and the
subject.
Third conditional
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We can create a more formal version of the third conditional by inverting the subject and the
auxiliary in the “if clause” and leaving out “if”. This is common in formal English only.
<If he had lived for another 20 years>, <he would have seen his work become popular>.
Had he lived for another 20 years, he would have seen his work become popular.
We can use inversions as an advanced alternative to “if clauses”, but we may also use:
On the off chance that (hoping that something may be possible, although it is not
likely) I applied for the job on the off chance that they might like me, but I didn't
seriously expect to get it.
In the event of (if something happens) In the event of a strike, the army will take over
responsibility for firefighting.
We use cleft sentences to emphasise new information. In a cleft sentence, information which
could be given in one clause is divided into two parts, each with its own verb. Compare:
<Vanessa has made the greatest impact> normal sentence. Single clause, one verb.
<It is Vanessa> <who has made the greatest impact> cleft sentence. Two clauses, two verbs.
⚠️in cleft sentences starting with “what” and “the reason why” we can also use a noun instead
of a “that clause”:
⚠️ in cleft sentences starting with “it” we can also use other relative pronouns instead of
“that”.
Expressing certainty
Beyond a/ any doubt The elderly are, beyond a doubt, the ones who bear the brunt of
Covid-19.
Beyond question Police officers should earn, beyond question, much more than they
are currently earning.
Unreservedly Where there is corruption, this must be unreservedly condemned.
It is claimed that…
Someone/ something is said to…
It is widely known that…
Someone is known to…
It is widely agreed that…
It is broadly claimed that…
It is stated that…
It is alleged that…
It is asserted that…
Exemplifying
For instance
Particularly Something must be done in a bid to contain the virus,
particularly/including sticking to social distancing or wearing face masks.
To name (but) a few The ingredients used are drawn from nature—avocado,
lemongrass, and chamomile to name a few
Namely There are some aspects one should take into consideration when discussing
this topic, namely length and width.
Adding points
Furthermore
In addition
What is more
Additionally
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By the same token (used to mean that something you are about to say is also true, for
the same reasons as what has just been said. Similar to “similarly”) I don't think that
prices will go up but, by the same token, I don't see them going down either”.
Likewise (in the same way) The US is sending its military into the Middle East to
interfere in armed conflicts there, likewise the EU is sending arms and supplies as
well.
Come to pass It came to pass that their love for each other grew and grew.
Take place
Happen
Occur
Transpire No one is willing to predict what may transpire at the peace conference.
Sth lies at the root/centre/heart of sth else That’s the issue that lies at the heart of
the present conflict
Sth emerges from sth else
Sth derives from sth else
Sth stems from sth else Global warming stems from pollution
Sth springs from sth else
Sth is a byproduct of another thing (something unexpected that happens as a result of
something else) The deep depression he fell into was a byproduct of his disease.
Spawn (to cause something new, or many new things, to grow or start suddenly) The
new economic freedom has spawned hundreds of new small businesses
Sth prompts sth else (to make sth happen) The bishop's speech has prompted an
angry response from both political parties.
Sth triggers sth else Some people find that certain foods trigger their headaches.
Sth sparks sth else The debate on abortion has sparked controversy all over the
country
Sth leads to sth else
Sth results in sth else
Sth fans the flames of sth else (to make a dangerous or unpleasant mood or situation
worse) His speeches fanned the flames of racial tension.
Fare well/ badly/ better/ worse Although Chicago has fared better than some cities,
unemployment remains a problem.
(not to) go/ run smoothly So far the plan is running/ going smoothly, so there is
nothing to worry about
(not to) go according to plan
Thrive (prosper) His business thrived in the years before the war.
Flourish Watercolour painting began to flourish in Britain around 1750.
Come to/reach fruition (If something comes to fruition, it starts to succeed and
produce the results that were intended or hoped for) His hopes for a new political
party have little chance of reaching fruition
Yield excellent/good/ positive/ satisfactory results
Sth yields catastrophic/ disappointing/ disastrous/ negative results The investigation
yielded some unexpected results.
To go downhill (to gradually become worse) After his wife died, his health started to
go downhill.
Underperform It is highly likely that the new plan to tackle global warming will
underperform.
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Fall short (of sth) August car sales fell short of the industry's expectations.
Ponder The question of whether it is good or bad for humans to go to jail needs
pondering.
Examine
Reflect upon
Delve into (to examine something carefully in order to discover more information
about someone or something) It's not always a good idea to delve too deeply into
someone's past.
Issue
Setback
Hurdle (a problem that you have to deal with before you can make progress)
Vicious circle
Challenge
Woes (huge problems, always plural)
Drawback
Predicament/ dilemma/ catch 22.
Hassle (a situation causing difficulty or challenge)
face/overcome a hurdle The first hurdle she faced entering the job market was one of
confidence.
Sth is a hurdle to sth else Lack of preparation and lack of financing have been the
biggest hurdles to the project's success.
To raise/ debate/ discuss an issue This evening we're debating the issue of the
legalization of soft drugs.
To address/ consider/ deal with/ examine/ explore/ tackle/ clarify/ focus on an issue
We really need to focus on this one issue and not get sidetracked.
To touch on an issue The issue of birth control was touched on, but we need to
examine it in more detail.
To face / clear/ jump/ overcome / pass a hurdle This is perhaps the most difficult
hurdle that we face.
Economic woes The country has been beset by economic woes for the past decade.
Add to sb’s/ sth’s woes Unusually poor harvests have added to the country's woes.
Alternatives to “solve”
Tackle a problem
Approach a problem
Address a problem
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Grapple with a problem Today, many Americans are still grappling with the issue of
race.
Bold action needs to be taken regarding X problem
Downplay
Belittle
Minimize
Downgrade We can't let the management downgrade the importance of safety at
work.
Disregard
Overlook
A pile of
A plethora of (many, even more than what
you can deal with)
A myriad of
OTHER WORDS
Excessively unduly
Completely outright/ entirely/ fully/ utterly/ thoroughly/ wholly/ downright/ altogether (be
careful as they don’t always necessarily collocate with every adjective. Resort to the
collocations dictionary and look for the adjective you want to modify to see what collocates).
Big massive/ large/ colossal/ vast/ Hefty (Again, be careful with collocations)
Connectors
CAUSALITY
CONSEQUENCE
Hence
Thus
Thereby
In doing so/ In so doing
As a result
ADDITION
Furthermore
Moreover
By the same token
On top of that
CONTRAST/ CONCESSION
Albeit
Yet
(but) then again
Though/ even though
However
Nonetheless
Even so
On the one hand/ on the other hand = At first glance… be that as it may…./ On the face
of it… yet, on the other side of the coin….
Regardless of
Notwithstanding sth / Sth notwithstanding
Whilst
Whereas
In the face of She left home in the face of strong opposition from her parents.
CONCLUSION
PARAPHRASING
Put simply
Simply put
In other words
That is to say (i.e.)
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As aforementioned
As forenamed
As previously mentioned
As above mentioned / as mentioned above
OTHER CONNECTORS
THEN:
Years down the line So 25 years down the line, you look back and there's a sense that
it was all better back then.
In the long run
Far in the future
NOWADAYS
IN THE FUTURE
From now on
From this day forward
Hereafter Elizabeth Gaskell's novel "Ruth" will hereafter be cited within the text as
EG.
IN THE PAST
Formerly
In former times
Back in the past
Back then
GENERALIZING
By and large
Broadly speaking
On a broad sense
On the whole
It stands to reason that It stands to reason that if you can eradicate the fear, the
nervousness will subside
(It is) No wonder that It’s no wonder our country has no money left to pay its debt, as
it is spent in political campaigns
It is to be expected that
APPARENTLY
Allegedly
Presumably
Said to be
POSSIBILITY
It is likely that
Chances are that
It might/ may (very) well
It is set to
In all likelihood
Without a shadow of a doubt
Beyond question
PASSIVES
COMPARATIVES
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BINOMIALS
INVERSIONS
CLEFT SENTENCES
SUBJUNCTIVES
It is paramount that + bare infinitive It is paramount that all the members of the
committee be together in the fight against corruption
It’s (high) time + past simple It is high time politicians did something to ensure
economic well-being.
RELATIVE CLAUSES
CONDITIONALS
INVERTED CONDITIONALS
TO + ING