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Rodriguez
Ruben A. Rodriguez
ENGL 1302
11 December 2023
research analysis, and an argumentative essay. From these essays I reflected on each one to fully
incorporate my new findings and reflect on my writings so that I guarantee that information stays
intact. I was taught many skills that were used to guide and to better me as a writer and as a
student. I encountered many obstacles that stumped my journey throughout English 1302 but
nevertheless I overcame and learned these skills that will carry me throughout college and even
To start off, I wrote three essays an annotated bibliography, research analysis and an
argumentative essay. At the end of the end of the semester we were tasked to make final
revisions on these essays which acted as our final notes on our essays to finish off the semester
with better knowledge we gained throughout the course. The first rhetorical choices I made when
revising my first annotated bibliography essay was rewording my weak sentences and giving
more information pertaining to the statistical side of the article. For example, this sentence in my
last source paragraph of my essay 1, “The authors back this up with stating the consequence of
burning out and the signs that lead up to it such as overthinking, anxiety, and low sleep (2). the
authors performed an experiment. “Participants completed a survey that measured leisure time
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planned physical activity, work related stress, burnout, and perceived life satisfaction (2). The
results were that stress was associated with exhaustion. They found that from exhaustion comes
stress since they were interlinked (2). This would only lead further into the rabbit hole of not
working out (2). This contributes to my article by pointing out how stress and exhaustion work
together against your will to act on physical activity and can contribute on stunting my progress”
[Annotated Bibliography] This paragraph had only two citing’s which was lacking in terms of
the annotation process, so I added two more and changed words around, so it only said what was
necessary. I did a similar thing to my second essay such as this paragraph from my research
analysis, “Studies were tested on kids from 4 to 8 who had already had a healthy pallet
beforehand so that this test would trigger muscle memory (2). “The disruption of lockdown and
other restrictions has impacted the way the public obtain and consume food (Food Standards
Agency, 2020b). The studies were conclusive in showing that during lockdown kids were more
susceptible to letting themselves go with the easy access to junk food and laziness from
quarantine. In conclusion, it was found seven out of eleven kids were on the index ranging from
the 2nd decile to the 7th decile (7) (table 1).” In this revised paragraph I made choices that
paraphrased and limited unnecessary words so that my readings were straight to the point. And
lastly, I made the same rhetorical choices in my last essay such as this paragraph, “What
should’ve been taken into consideration is that most teens who suffered during this period have
been influenced not only by COVID-19 but by other sources such as social media, and upon that
knowledge it is difficult to truly determine the statistics when not taking this into regards.” These
sentences were reworded to seem more real and coming from a person who will argue it with
display to show a neatly designed website for my readers. For example, I used pictures of forests
and mountains to catch my readers eye with color so that they are more kean to reading my
writings. Another choice I made was to section my essays all in their own category so everything
was organized and not cluttered so that the readers may be able to easily scroll through each
essay and all that it entailed. For example, for each section I put my first draft, second draft, and
final drafts along with the full final draft essay on display. This gives readers the ability to
download my drafts and even read them displayed. I did the same routine for my final reflection
essay which has its own category but also is displayed on the home page of my portfolio.
Furthermore, when it came to homework assignments there were q few that helped guide
me and map out my process to start off on my writing journey. For example, the Annotated
Bibliography invention worksheet. This homework assignment helped me map out the steps I
needed to process so that I could fully understand the procedure of writing my first essay. It had
columns with categories titled source, “authors claim, how they support their claim, how it
connects or builds upon other sources, and your analysis of how the author contributes to your
research on the topic”. These helped me organize my thoughts and formally gather my
information to put into its coordinated category. It worked as a table to correctly go at my essay
the right way. Another homework assignment that helped me was the Research Analysis
Synthesis Worksheet. This assignment worked the same as the annotated worksheet except this
worksheet was on ten sources rather than eight sources. This worksheet had the same categories
In addition, English 1302 taught me a lot of skills in terms of writing such as learning
how to write an annotated bibliography, research analysis and an argumentative essay. Form
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these writings i can say that these skills will be used in my other courses in the future such as
business courses. As of now with the semester coming to an end there are no courses this new
knowledge would be of use for, however, for my next semester I am taking multiple business
classes where there will possibly be many writing assignments. Considering these possible
writing assignments won’t be as intense as my essays in this English 1302 course, it will prove
my essays more than useful for my future writings. In terms on which essays would best help me
would be my second essay, my research analysis. This is because this essay guided me in
researching on multiple sources and citing them with getting direct information form the source
to best back up my topic. This would act as steppingstone for my future writings that would deal
on researching sources for business related issues. Lastly the third and final essay I feel would
aid me in my business courses when it comes to making an argument upon sources. This would
In contrast, there were skills that I couldn’t take with me into my other courses in terms
of my writings from this course. This is because my other courses that I took weren’t related to
English 1302. For example, I was taking courses like math and history which didn’t require any
sort of writing involved. This meant that the essays I wrote wouldn’t translate into these courses
which dealt with numbers and memorizing historical events. Unfortunate but in truth there is
only so much that an English course can provide that doesn’t only deal with the inside its
curriculum. This is due to the fact that each course has its own curriculum which defines the
identity of each course. This means that the annotating process I learned is only necessary within
an English course and isn’t asked upon students to write about in other courses, especially my
courses like math and history. In the end this English course has done a lot for me as a writer but
unfortunately not every course asks this from students thus making the annotating process
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useless on my journey to my college degree. It does pain me that it won’t be of use for my future
courses for I spent a lot of time and effort into my writings, but nonetheless I am grateful.
Moreover, this course has taught me a lot as a writer and as a student. I came into it with
very few knowledge on my mistakes due to the mass interruptions I encountered in the previous
coming into English 1302 was quite the challenge for me. My strengths started weak from the
start so my first and second essay weren’t so strong at first. My drafts lacked a lot of information
and paragraphs so at times it was just a couple paragraphs because I again still had a lot of
interruptions that prevented me from giving the attention my work needed. For example, my
second essay was only a couple paragraphs because I had personal things to worry about which
faulted my writing and from that came weaknesses such as structure and citing. My strengths
during my first essay were my ability to annotate and give enough information along with
citations to further back up my annotations. Surprising I was good even though I was so new to
it. There were no draft essays so I only wrote one final draft for my annotated bibliography, and
it came out well, however, I did have some weaknesses such as straying away from the
information so I could drag it out long enough to mee the requirements I needed for each
paragraph. My strengths and weaknesses did not stay the same for my second essay, in fact they
got worse. During my time of writing my second essay I encountered a lot of personal issues
which strained my ability to efficiently write my second essay. My strengths only became my
ability to write the necessary information down that pertained to the topic and my weaknesses
became my weaknesses became my lack of attention to my writing. This led to my drafts and
final draft of second essay being very weak. Fortunately, there wasn’t much needed for the
second essay that wasn’t already asked for in the first. Since all these essays were built on the
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same sources it wasn’t too much of an obstacle to progress towards my third and final essay. On
my last essay my strengths were back to square one and I was strong in my research process and
my ability to argue these articles without fear of critiquing. I wanted to make sure that I wasn’t
sided with all the sources and their studies so I picked the ones that would best create several
arguments to give insight on other opinions. My only weakness in this essay was the time I spent
during its draft phase and the struggle it was to find other sources that best fit my arguments. I
was able to strongly argue my voice without resorting to first person and transfer each paragraph
smoothly to the next paragraph in order stated in my thesis. This made it easier to connect my
Ultimately my strengths and weaknesses were back and forth but I do wish that those
interruptions hadn’t taken place so that I would’ve been able to strive even further into my
writing.
Moreover, when it came time to make my website there wasn’t anything that was
challenging. Given I had already made one in the previous English 1301 course, so I had the
skills to make another one for this course. I’d say the most challenging aspect of the website was
just the time I had to put in to make it. With finals from my other course taking place at the same
time as this course I found it difficult to do all at the same time. One of my courses would take
the fall for I didn’t have all the time in the world to give my undivided attention for each course.
fortunately, I was able to make my website with all its aspects that best fit the rubric, on time.
Another challenging aspect of the portfolio was for example, having to revise each essay. I found
it difficult to make the time for that and to find the right paragraphs to revise. When it came to
the least challenging aspect of making my website, I would say that was organizing each essay
and their drafts along with their reflection essays. For example, I made a category for each essay,
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essay reflection, and essay revision. I added pictures and the script of each essay along with its
files so that it gave options and ease to the readers. Another least challenging thing was having to
find the files that the portfolio required. For example, the drafts and the revisions. This wsa easy
because I named each draft, reflection, and revision beforehand so that when it came to the time
of making my portfolio all I had to do was look for those names and transfer it to my website.
Ultimately, with my knowledge of website making it wasn’t difficult to make this portfolio.
Lastly, I do feel stronger and better as a writer and as a student. Having gone through this
course I can ensure an efficient essay on several new essay genres that I did not know before. For
example, if I ever needed to write a research analysis, I can confidently write one with ease. With
these new skills I find writing to be easier. My identity has been more confident than ever and
with this new knowledge. For example, towards the beginning I was very intimidated to take
another English course again. From my previous one I was very weak in my writing and was not
looking forward to writing again. Coming into English 1302 I found that even though these
essays were more difficult, I had more time and attention to put towards them so that I may
efficiently learn these topics. Transitioning to my second essay I found myself to be stumped due
to personal reasons and form that came a bit weary of what to expect to for my last essay.
Fortunately, I overcame my personal battles and was able to focus on my third essay so that I
may progress further into my identity as a writer. Towards the end of this course, I have become
a better and more confident writer than before. I am thankful of the process I went through to get
here in more ways than one. I truly have come far and for that I can officially say that my
identity as a writer has improved and continues to improve along with my writings.
In conclusion, I encountered many obstacles throughout this course, and from those
obstacles there are some I overcame and some I did not. In truth, I do not know if I ever will
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overcome the ones, I struggled on for my time is divided amongst other things than just writing.
But I can say that given all of that, I have improved and progressed further into my writing than I
ever have before. I learned how to write an annotated bibliography, and research analysis, and an
argumentative essay. From these essays I learned how to annotate, cite sources, and argue my
opinion without resorting to first person. I gained a lot from essays and ensured the knowledge
stayed concrete with the reflection essays I wrote on them. Finishing up my portfolio and final
reflection essay I do feel a sense of relief for I am not the best at writing, nor have I found
pleasure in writing. Given that information, it doesn’t mean that I am not grateful for these
writings. I learned what I needed to and am thankful for everything my teachings taught me, I
can now move on further into my college journey with this knowledge and use it, for I now find
Work Cited
Rodriguez, Ruben, “Essay 2 final draft ENGL 2.” 5 December 2023 ENGL 1302, Texas
Rodriguez, Ruben, “Reflection essay 3 engl 1302.” 12 December 2023 ENGL 1302,
Rodriguez, Ruben, “Essay 1 Invention 1302 Experiment and Research Paper.” 133
December 2023 ENGL 1302, Texas A&M International University, Homework Assignment