BBI2001 FOUNDATION ENGLISH

SEMESTER 1, 2022/2023

WRITING PORTFOLIO 1

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This is an individual task. You have received an email from a friend. Please write a reply email of
at least 100 words.

Instructions:
1. Complete the Reply Email Draft 1 Form.
2. Edit your draft using the Self-editing Form.
3. Write the reply email based on the corrections in the draft.
4. Submit Portfolio 1 in Week 11.

Timeline:

Week Progress

9 Complete Reply Email Draft 1 Form

10 Self-evaluate Draft

11 Submit Portfolio 1

Task

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From: Farhan<farhan@gmail.com>

To: Amir < amir@gmail.com>

Subject: University Life Notes:

Hi Amir!

It has been a while. I cannot remember the last time we spoke.

Update Farhan.
How are you doing?

I heard you are back on campus already. Adam told me that you
are working part time as a research assistant, on top of being
the committee member for the orientation week. I am amazed at
how you are spending your break time. You have always been
so active since high school. How do you manage your time?

Anyway, do you remember that online classes were tough on Provide two tips.
you? Thankfully, the classes are going to be conducted
physically this coming semester. So, how do you feel about
that?

Describe your
By the way, there will be a Music Run event in UPM this feelings.
November. If we register for the event now, we can get the early
bird price which is RM50. Would you like to join?

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Regards,

Farhan Answer Farhan.

Reply Email Draft 1

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From : _______________________________

To : _________________________________

Subject : ____________________________________________

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Introduction

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Body

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_____________________ (Phrasing)

______________ (Signature) ( words)

Self-editing Form

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FORMAT YES NO
Uses a correct email address, clear subject, proper salutation, and signature
Circles all the details
CONTENT (INTRODUCTION) YES NO
Contains information/ idea that directly responds to the note given
Provides elaboration on the information/ idea
CONTENT (BODY) YES NO
Contains information/ idea that directly responds to the note given
Provides elaboration on the information/ idea
CONTENT (CLOSING) YES NO
Contains a concluding line
LANGUAGE YES NO
Uses correct language (run-ons, fragments, comma splices, subject-verb
agreement, tenses)
Circles errors in the draft (if any)
Contains no redundant words
Contains no informal language (contractions, abbreviations, colloquial)
Contains no spelling, punctuation, and capitalisation errors
Uses correct language expressions
REVISION
The 3 most important changes I have to make to my email are:

1.

2.

3.

Reply Email Final Draft

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