子琁 111 公私立第三次 手寫題檢討

學測目標 20/28
翻譯

1. Affected by the epidemic, the tourism industry has suffered huge losses and must
be lay off employees. (3.5)
2. People can’t wait for the day when the border will be reopened to come soon so
that they can travel abroad.(3.5)

作文

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 From the two pictures, we can see that there are obvious differences between the
two preschools.
It can be seen from the poster of Bright Beginnings Preschool that it pays attention
to the cleanliness of equipment, kids’ hygiene habits and safety protection measures.
In addition, the entertaining activities are carried out indoors.
 From the poster of Bright Beginnings Preschool,
 school faculty n. 學校教職人員
 school administration n. 學校行政單位
 school’ s policy n. 方針  the school’s policy is aimed to …… 目標在於…
多加一點 轉承詞

On the poster of Happy Trails Preschool, it can be seen that they lead their
childrens to learn in a more life-oriented way, so that they can actually operate and
have more outdoor activities.
 On the other hand, the policy of Happy Trails Preschool is aimed to lead their
children to learn in a more life-oriented way so that they can actually have hands-on
lessons and have more outdoor activities, such as reading books on the mother
nature or strolling in woods.

It can be seen
it can be seen that
 避免重複句型的發生
 想一下  不同的主詞  不同的動作  不同的句型

第一段
From the two pictures, we can see that there are obvious differences between the
two preschools. It can be seen from the poster of Bright Beginnings Preschool that it
pays attention to the cleanliness of equipment, kids’ hygiene habits and safety
protection measures. In addition, the entertaining activities are carried out indoors.
On the other hand, the policy of Happy Trails Preschool is aimed to lead their
children to learn in a more life-oriented way so that they can actually have hands-on
lessons and have more outdoor activities, such as reading books on the mother
nature or strolling in woods.
第二段
I think Happy Trails Preschool is more suitable for children. First, many children
like outdoor activities very much nowadays, which gives them lots of fun and a
chance to get more fresh air in different places, like parks, forests, rivers or beaches.
Moreover, in my opinion, what attracts me about this Preschool is that they have
practical lessons about danger. For example, children can learn how dangerous fire is
when they go camping. This lesson can let children raise their awareness about
protecting themselves at the early age. Last but not the least, the idea of learning by
doing is also marvelous. Let children do drawing, dancing and singing, etc. During the
process, they can explore and know what they really like. In conclusion, if I were a
parent, I would choose this preschool for my children to attend.

結構化 
 1. go outside  good /// fresh air
 2. learn about danger
 3. learning by doing
轉承詞

let  換字  換結構
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