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Proyecto Final English For Writing Business Email
Proyecto Final English For Writing Business Email
Isabel is a software engineering graduate who is sending an email to Allan Meyer, the
owner of an IT company she met at an event last month.
Subject: Job
Hey people, we were thinking of changing a few things around the office. These things have
bothered most ofHey
us and the
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of weeks time
at we take notice
the chamber of these aspects. I
of commerce
Hey peopl
know that we areevent. I wasbusy
all really the one
butlooking for a summer
we should internship.
speak about theseYou’re probably
points in our next meeting.
like, “uh.. What?” Maybe that helps you recall, maybe not. Not
Also, many have not yet submitted
completely the
important, reports and the deadline is coming up in the next couple
I suppose.
of days. So, make sure we all concentrate. Thanks, Benny Markos.
I’d like to work for you at your IT business. You seemed like a cool person
to work for. I’m available to start working on Monday, but I am taking my
driver’s
As you can see here, thistest in June
email and clear,
is not I have since
to practice so I’ll be
it doesn’t absent for
provide a few days.
context, and the subject line
is not informative.I’ve attached my resume. Let me know if you have a job opening for me. If
I don’t respond to your email, you can always find me on FB, snapchat or
insta!
Thank you!
Isabel Mendes
Project part 3
you wrote in the 1st module
This is what you have to do:
Proofread the email you wrote in the 1st module. And write a new improved version of it.
Make sure it follows the structure of an appropriate business email, that is brief, concise and
has a proper level of formality.
This will help you test your knowledge and practice the content we have covered throughout
the course.