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ECN 718
date 17-08-22

Essay 1 :- 62/125

Essay 2:- 58/125

total 120/250

Dear student,
You have very good content and
understanding of the topic. Deviation is
minimum and coverage of dimensions is
appropriate.
Improve a bit on conclusion for fetching
higher marks.
All the Best !
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 Don’t forget
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to mention
topic in the
exam

Good
intro

well
connected
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You
have
very
rich
conten
t.
Keep
it up

not
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very
relevant
points
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Good example
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nicely
explain
ed with
very
good
example
s.
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Crux of
the
essay
!!

solitude
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solitude
conclusion
looks
slightly out
of context it
could be end
with giving
reader a
thought to
ponder or
just the
essence of
essay
highlighting
importance of
both solitude
and
convesations
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very
good
beginnin
g
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very relevant point

Good
understandi
ng!!
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Good
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You can
also
give
examples
from
Indian
start up
space—
how
initial
bunch of
Flipkart
employee
s
created
carious
other
start
ups.
similar
to
Paypal
of US,
whose
employee
s
created
start
ups like
Tesla
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very good
you have very good content
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Good conclusion

You have very good content. Keep it up.

Structuring and flow of essay is good. Grammar and
spellings are near perfect and language is lucid
and easy to comprehend.
You can work a bit on conclusion and coverage of
dimensions for fetching more marks.
Length of essay is on higher side dont increase it
further.
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