COMM 161 Feedback for Paragraph Outline Part 3 5%

Part 1 Included Missing

Part 2 Included Missing

Topic sentence answers the topic Vague/needs a clear Confusing or off Missing
questions clearly focus /Incomplete topic

Supporting points specific/on topic Unclear/confusing Rambling Off topic

or vague
more explanation Some confusing
helpful = too brief Insufficient in parts parts

Language clear/no major some errors errors confuse Too many errors=
errors meaning meaning lost

Reference to reading Clear and Present but needs Present but needs Missing
integrated integration clarification

To do now – Keep up the good Review all material Study all material on
paragraph writing work! on paragraph paragraph carefully

To do now - Sentence structure Word use and form Verbs: tense and Work with a tutor
language incl S+V agreement form
Read carefully

Your grade: 2,5 / 5

Good start! Reading needs to be clearly identified and integrated. Also, the support
needs a clear focus. Avoid repetition and rambling. Revise with a tutor.