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A. MEANS OF ASSESSMENT
400 marks
B. REQUIREMENTS
This paper focuses on the ability to make meaning of texts. Language and
grammar questions will therefore be focused on the function of, and reasons for,
using certain grammatical forms or language conventions across a range of
texts. A variety of text formats will be used.
2 prescribed poems
A question on at least two prescribed poems will be offered. Poems may
be linked through a similar theme or visual. [15]
4. An unseen poem
There will only be one question set on contemporary verse. Learners
could be asked to consider more than one text in a poetry question. This
could take the form of an extract from another prescribed poem or a
visual. [15]
Questions 5 and 6
This paper focuses on the ability to create meaningful texts across a wide variety
of formats and for a range of purposes, contexts and audiences. The questions
will focus on what style is deemed appropriate to a given context and why.
SECTION A LITERATURE
Learners will be required to write a literary essay. This question focuses on the
ability to state and defend a position in an essay of approximately 600 words in
length.
Candidates must study one of the two prescribed novels. There will be a
compulsory essay question set on each novel, and candidates should answer
one of the two optional essay questions on the novel they have studied (2.1 or
2.2 for the first novel and then 3.1. or 3.2. for the second novel).
Essay topics on each work may incorporate a quotation from the novel, or be
rooted in a critic's comment. This question focuses on the ability to write a literary
essay of approximately 600 words.
Questions 4 and 5
• Editorial
• Blog
• Obituary
• Eulogy
• Articles – newspaper and magazines
• Newspaper Column
• E-mails and letters – formal; editor; application, open
• Speeches
• Reviews
confidently and consistently able to confirm that work they assess is the
learner's own. Clear guidelines must be given in any task as to the amount of
help and guidance that is permitted. Penalties for malpractice must be known,
in advance, by the learners. Tasks must be set in such a way that learners
have to include their own perspective on an issue or process and use the
knowledge appropriately. Learners cannot merely download information and
reproduce it as found.
Two pieces of extended writing of 500 – 600 words are required. Essays must
demonstrate the candidate’s versatility as a writer, and must be distinctly
different in terms of style or genre. Literary Essays cannot be included in this
section.
The national SBA moderator will set the task outline and supply the criteria
against which to assess the task. The task must be internally set and
moderated by the cluster, according to the CAT guidelines for that year.
The final essay piece must be written under controlled conditions. The
teacher/s will assess the task, according to the marking guidelines provided
by the IEB, and the marking must be moderated both internally and externally.
Schools must study any two films, focusing on the following outcomes:
• Learners will be able to explain the role that cinematographic techniques
(visual, audio, and audio-visual) such as the use of colour, subtitle,
composition, dialogue, music, sound, lighting, editing, framing, styles of
shot, camera techniques, camera movement, foregrounding, and
backgrounding, play in meaning-making.
• Learners will be able to summarise the film’s stance on a particular theme
or topic, and explain how this is conveyed to the audience, as well as how
the audience is positioned in relation to the theme.
• Learners will be able to compare and contrast their own perspectives on
the theme or topic with those presented in the films.
• Learners will be able to analyse and evaluate both the messages and
themes in the films, and the design and performance choices made in
conveying those messages and themes.
The assessment task/s must assess all of these outcomes, and the total
length of the required response should be between 1000 and 1200 words.
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The task should seek to explore the genre in a way that results in an
alternative form of assessment. Inter-textuality is strongly encouraged.
This genre should not be studied in the same manner as those that will be
examined in Paper I or II.
Teachers may decide whether they would prefer to do one dense, rich task
to encompass the demands of this section, or whether they would like to
subdivide the 60 marks allocated to this section into two or three smaller
tasks.
Each school must inform the IEB of the films selected for 4th Genre Study by
28 February each year (D1 p11/21).
The three tests are selected from the following areas and should reflect a
range of skills that indicate the full range of the curriculum has been covered.
ADDITIONAL NOTES
1. Schools must certify that all work in each file is the candidate's own work.
This does not imply that all exercises must be done under test conditions
or that homework may not be included, only that the school must be
confident that the work has not been unduly influenced by others.
3. All work in the learner file must be assessed by the teacher and given
a mark. Where applicable there should be appropriate feedback to the
learner provided by the teacher. It is important to note that the pieces of
work in each learner file should, as a whole, give a representative picture
of the ability, aptitude and application of the candidate.
4. Tasks should clearly indicate the skills being assessed in the task/test.
The rubrics for the tasks/questions should indicate the level of
competence of the learner. Tasks and questions should be carefully
constructed so that marks achieved link directly to the competence
descriptions and the rating code. Each candidate must be given a total
mark by the teacher, expressed as a percentage. This percentage should
adequately reflect the ability, aptitude and application of the candidate
and not merely be an aggregate of all the pieces.
6. The IEB will arrange for the regional moderation of the SBA assessment.
Please refer to the SBA Checklist (D12 p11/35-36) for assistance in
ensuring that learners' SBA files are compliant.
Prepared speaking
Speaking strategies
The mark may be based on more than one conversation opportunity. Topics
selected for the assessment should allow for a both breadth and depth of
interpretation, so that candidates are afforded ample opportunity to
demonstrate their conversational skills. Topics might include things like
current affairs, or texts the candidates have read, so long as there is
opportunity for the expression of independent opinion and thought.
Oral moderators will need to see the range of assessments that have
taken place to compile the final oral mark. English departments should
use a standardised spread sheet to make the process easier for the
purposes of oral moderation.
See Guidelines.
C. INTERPRETATION OF REQUIREMENTS
1. PRESENTATION
• The SBA file submitted should be easily accessible for the SBA file
moderator.
The pages must be secured and dividers must be used for each
section. Plastic sleeves or flip files may not be used.
• The candidate's examination number must be clearly written on the
front of the SBA file. Learners' names must appear on the pieces of
work contained in the SBA file.
• Work should be neat and legible, and written in blue or black ink only.
Work may be typed or handwritten, but the pieces written under
controlled conditions must be clearly indicated.
• A variety of work must be presented in the SBA file.
• The order of pieces in the folder must correspond with the order on
the SBA file coversheet.
• Pieces of work in each of the required categories should be filed
together with clear dividers between each section.
• The SBA file is intended to support the teacher's assessment of the
candidate's ability in school-based assessment. The teacher must,
therefore, ensure that, apart from the CAT, the other two sections
(extended writing, and the Section D choice) are correctly
represented, and that a range of work is submitted. Overall, the
school-based assessment in the SBA file should be characteristic of
the candidate's general level of competence.
• The teacher must ensure that the same principles are used in
selecting work for the SBA file of each candidate. It is not necessary
for each candidate to have the exact same work, but all tasks that
could have been submitted must be included in the Educator SBA
file.
• Schools are responsible for their internal moderation across the
different classes. Work included in the SBA file must show clear
evidence of both internal and external moderation. In single-
teacher departments, teachers need to make contact with a
colleague from within the region to moderate the work.
• All work in the SBA file, excluding the tests and examinations, must
be thoroughly assessed by the teacher and given a mark and detailed
comment. Tasks set for film study must be academically challenging.
There must be evidence of filmic language and film technique having
been understood. The test on the 4th genre may be a task similar to
the prescribed works questions in the final external examinations, but
the Section C task should be different. An inter-textual focus is
recommended, and should require candidates to make comparisons
and evaluations, in a manner that both looks at the genre techniques
and explores the issues involved.
Please note that no credit will be given for decorated files or work.
2. CONTENT
The examination requirements are fairly specific about the kind of writing
that should be represented in the file. In addition to this, the following
should be considered:
• The Common Assessment Task will include one written task for
the SBA file. The length and format will be clearly stipulated.
• Teachers should ensure that the accepted layout requirements of
letter writing are understood by the learners, but should not
encourage over-rigid treatment of other forms of transactional
writing. Learners should be flexible with regard to the layout and
structure of the short pieces in order to deal with the particular
requirements of a task. (In particular, teachers should be careful
that the elaborate company report layout is not used for short
reports, for which predetermined headings are seldom
appropriate.) The emphasis should be on suiting style, register
and lay-out to the purpose of the writing task.
• It is important that the learner's own voice shows in the writing.
Where sources have been used they should be acknowledged
and a reference list included where appropriate. Plagiarism must
be severely penalised. If a teacher is in doubt as to the
authenticity of a piece of writing, this piece should not be
included in the SBA file. Furthermore, teachers should ask their
IT Department to assist them in running a check to ensure
authenticity. Teachers must take care to set tasks that require
more than mere repetition of research findings.
3. ASSESSMENT
a) General Comments
Assessment of a writing task should aim to determine the success
of the piece of writing as communication. This includes using all
the resources of language, structure and imagery to make
communication effective. 'Creativity'' is a problematical element: it
is difficult to measure; it is not always present; it can be used as
an excuse for obscurity, self-indulgence or inappropriate register.
In assessing a piece of writing, it is more practical to consider the
level of linguistic competence, and the effectiveness and clarity
with which the intention of the writer is communicated.
Furthermore, effective communication depends on a clear
understanding by the writer of the intended reader or audience.
Thus the register employed should suit the target audience.
c) Recording of marks
The marks for the pieces included in the SBA file must be recorded on
the mark-sheet provided, according to the instructions which accompany
it (D9). The marks given should be supported by the evidence in the SBA
file. In addition, each school must prepare the mark-sheet (D10) giving
the examination number and final mark (%) of each candidate in rank
order of their marks.
d) Moderation
The majority of SBA files will be regionally moderated between the
15 September and the 15 October. Based on the recommendations of
the regional SBA moderators, a school's SBA file might be called for
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The variety of listening and speaking skills should be targeted in tasks and
activities through the year. This includes such things as impromptu speaking on
an unprepared topic, engaging in conversation, responding to questions,
speaking and answering questions regarding the prescribed work chosen for
internal study, and participating in an interview.
In addition to the ability to speak and read, the learner's ability to listen to what
is being read or said and to comment critically on it is also being assessed.
The prescribed works chosen from Section D (i.e. films) may be used as
the basis for some of the oral assessment. Clearly, knowledge and
understanding of the chosen work cannot be separated from the learner's ability
to talk about it, but the emphasis in the oral component is on the ability of the
learner to talk about what he/ she has read or seen, his/her ability to express a
personal response, rather than correctness of fact and interpretation per se.
However, the learner does need to show familiarity with the text.
The IEB will arrange either for the moderation to be completed online, or for
moderators to visit schools from September to mid-October for the purpose of
standardising the school assessments for oral work. Schools will be informed of
the dates on which they will be visited. On his/her arrival, or in advance of an
online moderation, the moderator should be presented with:
• A list of all candidates and the final mark (out of 100) for oral, arranged in
rank order, so that the moderator may select candidates from the entire
range of ability (D3)
• The mark-sheet for the class showing details of how the oral mark was
composed according to the IEB breakdown.
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The function of the moderator is to ensure that the prescriptions of the syllabus
and Examination Requirements have been followed and that standards are
similar across different schools. On the basis of the moderation conducted, the
moderator will make recommendations to the IEB whether the marks for the
school as a whole should be accepted as they are or adjusted in some
systematic way.
The moderator may also advise schools of areas of strength and weakness in
the candidates, and may offer suggestions for improvement. Where the
moderator and the educator's assessment of certain candidates is very
different, this discrepancy should be discussed in order to determine whether
certain circumstances have resulted in the candidate's giving a performance
that is markedly different from usual.
A. READING
Prepared reading
• The passage chosen should be two-thirds to three-quarters of a page
long and the level of language and thought should be mature and
sophisticated.
• Reading aloud is for entertainment and/or persuasion.
Communication with the audience is of the utmost importance.
• Learners should use a suitable tone, which shows understanding of
the passage. Facial expression should enhance the quality of the
overall reading.
• The reader should make full use of pause, variety in pace, as well as
in pitch and volume.
• Eye contact is essential. The reader should look up to his or her
audience on significant phrases and at the end of some sentences
where there is natural pause.
• Readers should hold their texts up to facilitate eye contact and not
read to the table.
• The learners must give an introduction of some kind before reading –
indicating the source, some background detail, and the reason for
choice of passage.
• A passage that includes dialogue is useful as it gives the learner more
opportunity to show reading skills.
• Learners should carefully consider their choice of passage to ensure
that it gives them the best opportunity to demonstrate their reading
skills.
Unprepared reading
B. PREPARED SPEAKING
• The guiding rule here is that learners should talk to their audience,
not at them.
• Learners should choose a topic that is important to them. Sincere
enthusiasm and personal conviction about the subject
automatically aids the quality of the presentation. Stock or
common topics should be avoided: to be successful, these need
an individualised approach.
• The speech should not be a mere collection of facts gleaned from
one source or other: it must present a point of view and be
persuasive. Facts should be clearly integrated within the fabric of
the speech.
• Ideas must be presented in a clearly structured way, with an
effective introduction and a firm conclusion.
• Content should be enriched with sufficient information and ideas.
• Language should be sophisticated without being overly formal
and\ should display a good vocabulary.
• The prepared speech should not be presented in a 'public
speaking manner'. While the speech should be well rehearsed to
ensure confidence, it should never be learned off by heart or read
from full notes. A spontaneous manner and the confidence from
knowing the topic well are what the audience appreciates most.
• Learners should use only cue cards with words/ phrases on them.
A full text is distracting and causes learners to read. Reading from
a written text should be heavily penalised.
• Learners should stand in a relaxed manner, and use natural
gestures, body language and facial expression to convey their
meaning.
• Voice needs to be varied in terms of pitch, speed, and volume.
• Pauses should be used between sections. Never rush – the
audience needs time to absorb what is being said.
• Eye contact with the whole audience is essential.
• Power-point presentations can be included here, but should not
replace the speaker. They are an aid to a talk and are not to be
used instead of a talk.
• Learners will also prepare speeches for debates, panel
discussions, chairing meetings, interviews etc.
Impromptu speech
This assessment focuses mainly on the learner's ability to 'think on
his/her feet' and to express himself/ herself fluently with very little
preparation. While learners will be expected to speak spontaneously
during an oral moderation, he/she will not be required to deliver an
impromptu speech.
Class discussions
These provide various opportunities to assess an individual learner's
ability to express a point of view, justify an argument, formulate questions
and structure a response to a question.
LISTENING COMPREHENSION
• The learner should be assessed in a manner that does not involve too much writing
or speaking as then the listening is not the focus. Written texts should not be
longer than 450 words while audio texts should not exceed five minutes in
total. So long as the recommended lengths requirements are met, the
assessment need not be based on one text only. Instead, the assessment
prompts might be comprised of a series of shorter texts on a common theme.
• The process should be as follows:
- The learner listens to the text once
- The assessor reads the questions through slowly.
- The learner listens to the text a second time.
- The teacher reads each question a second time, pausing to give time for each
learner to answer.
- The learner may take notes at any point in the process
• While one word answers and listening for information questions can be included
in listening comprehensions attention needs to be paid to the other assessment
standards. Learners need questions to assess whether they can distinguish
between fact and opinion. Questions for inference, as well as for general
information and specific detail must be included. There must be at least one
question which targets evaluation.
1. When learners speak and write about films, they must show that they are
filmically literate, i.e. that they understand the choices that a director makes in
selecting (and omitting) shots in creating meaning in a filmic text. Their answers
must be unequivocally about a film rather than a novel, and should demonstrate
competency in using filmic language.
Thus, learners must demonstrate, inter alia, that they are able to decode:
• how, and to what effect, the director of a specific film has used his/ her
camera;
• how and why a specific soundtrack has been introduced;
• how casting has operated;
• how filmic techniques, e.g. an angle or editing have been utilised to suggest
a theme; or create a mood or construct various power relations.
What must be stressed is that it is not enough for a learner to be able to describe
a character and his/ her role in a film; the learner should be able to explain how
the director has filmically constructed a character or suggested a certain theme.
2. Learners are not expected to become bogged down in irrelevant, esoteric filmic
terminology. They must, however, be able to demonstrate that they are visually
literate. They should, therefore, be able to:
• identify the various shots and angles and understand their function in a
frame;
• decode how editing operates within a text;
• comment on the basic camera movements (panning, tracking, tilting,
zooming in and out) and the way they function within a sequence;
• comment on the way light and colour are used;
• comment on the use of filmic techniques such as casting, clothing, make-
up and facial expressions;
• comment on the use of the sound track, and its relationship with the visual
track. They should be able to differentiate between the different types of
soundtrack (leitmotif, synchronous or non-synchronous soundtracks,
background music), and the differences in their function;
• comment on the construction of different frames, i.e. they need to be able
to comment on the mise-en-scène within a certain frame, what is
foregrounded, backgrounded, opposed, ignored and so on. It might be
worthwhile to analyse proxemic patterns here.
• employ the terms index and icon (instead of literal/denotative and figurative/
connotative).
The literature essay essentially assesses the interpretative ability of the learner as well
as his/her ability to form an opinion and understand themes, characters, symbolism,
etc. Topics should be open-ended, if possible, to allow for personal interpretations
within the limits of the author's accepted intentions. A definitive reply to an essay topic
should not be decided upon: each essay should be given due consideration, no matter
how 'unconventional' it may appear. It is essential that the essay be introduced at grade
10 level and great care should be taken to explain exactly what is required as far as
format and the establishing of an argument is concerned. Learners will need
encouragement and support as they will initially find the task a daunting one.
There are of course no hard-and-fast rules as far as the writing of a discursive analysis
of a text is concerned. This is a suggested indication of ways in which learners could
write more effective literary essays in Paper 2.
• Length of essays should be between 2½ and 3½ pages (in average handwriting).
• Structure, logic, and organisation of ideas will be assessed as part of the holistic,
final assessment out of 30 marks. The way in which a learner argues is as important
as what the learner is arguing. Introductions should introduce a learner's argument,
provide the essay with clear focus and direction, and demonstrate an
understanding of the chosen topic. The conclusion should 'tie up' the argument
conclusively. Each paragraph should develop the argument and must not simply
be a series of unconnected statements. Examiners want to see evidence of a
stance having been taken.
• Short, pertinent quotations/textual references from prescribed texts should be used
to enrich and substantiate a learner's argument. Learners should be taught how to
integrate quotations spontaneously into their sentences.
• In order to avoid becoming side-tracked from the focus of the essay topic, learners
should be encouraged to refer regularly to the essence of the given topic, hereby
almost reminding the examiner that she/ he has not lost sight of the literary
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The following text(s) have been selected from Section D of the Prescribed Works:
NAME OF SCHOOL:
SIGNATURE OF TEACHER:
DATE:
Preferred name
Prepared Reading
From
By
Pages
Brief motivation for choice:
CENTRE NO
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Preparation:
Content:
Presentation:
Evidence of research:
General:
Listening Comprehension
P.T.O.
Preparation:
Relevance of choice:
Audience contact:
Reading to, rather than at the
audience:
Comprehension:
General:
General discussion:
Other comments:
Areas of excellence:
Areas of improvement:
General comments:
Criteria for Assessing a Level 7 Level 6 Level 5 Level 4 Level 3 Level 2 Level 1
Prepared Speech 80 – 100 70 – 79 60 – 69 50 – 59 40 – 49 30 – 39 0 – 29
Structure The structure is The structure is There is a There is a basic The structure is There is little There is no
flawless. There clear and well sense of structure and lacking evidence of evidence of
Demonstrate planning and is a clear, developed, structure, but evidence of an cohesion. There structure. The structure. The
research skills for oral riveting although there there are times, introduction, is no clear speech has candidate does
presentation introduction and are times when when this is not body and distinction been not seem to
✓ Organise material coherently an insightful transitions well sustained. conclusion. between new sequenced have made any
by choosing main ideas and relevant between ideas There is an However, the ideas. The illogically and effort to prepare
relevant and accurate details or conclusion. could be better. introduction and overall speech speech may ideas do not sufficiently and
examples for support Information is There is a clear conclusion, but lacks logical lack either an follow on meanders
✓ Prepare effective introductions effectively introduction and these are development introduction or a meaningfully through the
and conclusions organised and a pleasing functional rather and cohesion. conclusion. from each other. speech without
✓ Incorporate appropriate visual, new ideas flow conclusion, than enhancing The introduction The speech is any real sense
audio and audio-visual aids (if smoothly from which fulfils the the quality of and conclusion without an of purpose.
required)
one to the function of the speech. do not fulfil their introduction There is no
other. signposting the purpose and/ or evidence of an
speech, as well adequately. conclusion. introduction or
as rounding off conclusion.
the speech
effectively.
Content The content has The content has The content The content is The content is There is very Some ideas
substance, is substance, but tends to be mediocre. There very superficial little real content relating to the
Demonstrate planning and thought- this is not adequate or is evidence of and there is and the speech topic are
research skills for oral provoking and- sustained. pedestrian. The research, but very little tends to be evident, but
presentation at times- Some content candidate does the candidate evidence of almost wholly they are almost
✓ Research a topic by referring to profound. The may be have something has not been research. What narrative. It completely
a wide range of sources candidate has superfluous. to say, but the able to research there does not convey undeveloped
selected content has not synthesise the is, is presented the sense of and seem to
appropriate, and been fully research into almost having been emerge by
relevant, developed. the speech. independently prepared and coincidence
content for the Some content is of the speech. the marker has rather than
topic. inaccurate to trawl for design. There is
and/or content. a great deal of
irrelevant. irrelevant
rambling.
Appropriate use of Register and The use of The use of The use of The use of The use of The use of The use of
Vocabulary register is register is register is register is not register is too register is register is
Demonstrate critical excellent and is pleasing and correct, always casual and can incorrect and incorrect and
awareness of language use in sustained very although some appropriate and be deemed tends towards the candidate is
oral situations successfully appropriate. errors in register tends to be inappropriate. slang and an entirely too
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✓ Use and evaluate appropriate throughout the However, the may occur. The either too There are errors overuse of colloquial. The
language varieties, styles and speech. The control of vocabulary is colloquial or too in vocabulary, contractions. candidate's use
registers to suit purpose, level of register is not correct but forced. While context and The candidate of grammar is
audience and context vocabulary is consistently ordinary /or has the candidate grammatical makes flawed and the
✓ Identify and use a wide range sophisticated fluent. The level minor flaws. uses vocabulary structure which numerous vocabulary is
of persuasive techniques and the of vocabulary is competently for hamper errors in inappropriate or
✓ Make inferences and candidate rich and varied the most part, communication. grammar and inaccurate.
judgements and motivate with employs the and the errors in correct the vocabulary
evidence vocabulary candidate usage and is limited.
correctly and employs the context do
meticulously. vocabulary occur.
correctly.
Delivery The delivery is The delivery is of The delivery is of The quality of The quality of The quality of The delivery is
superior and a high standard. a pleasing delivery is delivery is delivery is less very poor. The
Demonstrate the skills of displays flair and However, there standard, but the competent. The lacklustre. The than adequate. It candidate cannot
listening to and delivering individuality. The are some candidate is not candidate may be candidate lacks is difficult to use techniques of
oral presentations candidate has elements relating able to alter the hesitant, or else fluency. There is follow the speech delivery with any
used pace, pause to pace, pause elements of pace, speak too fast. minimal attention because of a success and is
✓ Use and evaluate rhetorical and varied and intonation pause and Pause, pace and to pause, pace halting delivery, often inaudible
devices such as anecdotes, intonation to that could be intonation intonation have and intonation. which is and inarticulate.
rhetorical questions, pauses enhance the improved. Eye effectively. The not been given Eye contact is monotonous. The The delivery is
and repetition quality of the contact is not candidate tries to sufficient very limited and candidate does hesitant and
✓ Use tone, voice projection, speech. Eye always sustained. employ eye consideration the candidate is not employ any stumbling with
pace, eye contact, posture and contact is The candidate is contact, but this which impacts on tending towards eye contact and distracting
gestures correctly and respond convincingly sincere but the is quite sporadic. the overall reading the is reading the movements.
appropriately maintained and delivery lacks the There is often a delivery. Eye speech. The speech entirely or Consequently,
✓ Pronounce words without the audience is overall polish and dependence on contact is limited speech does not constantly the speech is
distorting meaning effectively flair. key cards. This and the reveal a sense of looking for his/her generally
addressed. The affects the candidate is the candidate's place on cue muddled and
candidate is candidate's tending towards personality. cards. The nonsensical.
spontaneous, sincerity and relying heavily on The candidate candidate may
fluent and conviction. key cards. The may employ engage in
sincere. candidate may distracting excessive
move movement, which movement which
unnecessarily, detracts from the serves no
which is overall quality of specific purpose.
distracting to the the speech.
audience.
Criteria for Assessing a Level 7 Level 6 Level 5 Level 4 Level 3 Level 2 Level 1
Prepared Reading 80 – 100 70 – 79 60 – 69 50 – 59 40 – 49 30 – 39 0 – 29
Motivation for choice of passage The candidate The candidate's The candidate's The candidate The motivation is The motivation is There is no
provides a motivation is motivation is does give a too short and is almost non- motivation. The
Demonstrate planning and sincere and well- engaging and pleasing, but the motivation, but very superficial. existent and is candidate does
substantiated sincere, but it explanation has this is generally The candidate vague and most provide a title and
research skills for oral choice of lacks sufficient errors or else is personal and tends to give a superficial. The an author but
presentation passage, which is substance. The quite superficial. does not provide plot summation of candidate does there is nothing
✓ Prepare effective introductions fluently and overview required The overview is appropriate the novel rather not seem to have else. The use of
Demonstrate critical compellingly more detail for competent, but substantiation to than an prepared a register is
awareness of language used delivered. The the audience to lacks flair and provide his/her explanation as to motivation and inappropriate.
in oral situations candidate be able to insight. The views. The why the novel is the use of
✓ Use and evaluate appropriate provides an understand the register is overview is important to register that is
language varieties, styles and insightful context fully. The generally adequate, but him/her. The use employed is
registers to suit purpose, overview that register is appropriate lacks fluency and of register is inappropriate.
audience and context helps the appropriate and although some polish. The inappropriate and
audience the candidate lapses may correct register is tends to be too
✓ Make inferences and
contextualise the uses the chosen occur. mostly employed, casual.
judgements and motivate with
passage. The register but there are
evidence.
register accurately and phrases which
employed is articulately. are inappropriate
entirely or too casual.
appropriate and
enhances the
candidate's
motivation.
Choice of Passage The choice of The choice of The choice of The choice of The choice of The choice of The choice of
passage is passage is very passage is good passage could passage has not passage is poor passage appears
excellent and pleasing and the and the have been better. been carefully and seems to entirely random.
allows the candidate can candidate has While the selected. The have been The candidate
candidate great use the tried to select a candidate does candidate seems decided upon has not given any
scope for a techniques of passage, which seem to have to have chosen because of its thought as to how
memorable delivery to very will enable given this some the passage quite availability rather he/she can
delivery. The good effect. him/her to use thought, the randomly with than because of employ the
variety of Interesting the required passage does not little thought as to its strengths. required
register, dialogue dialogue allows techniques of allow the how the delivery techniques.
and style enables the candidate to delivery in a candidate to techniques can
the reader to change pace and pleasing manner. clearly display be put to best
demonstrate voice to enhance his/her strengths. use.
his/her range of the quality of the
competence. overall reading.
Delivery The reading is The reading is of The reading is of The quality of The quality of The quality of The reading is
superior and a high standard. a pleasing reading is reading is reading is less very poor. The
Demonstrate the skills of displays flair and However, there standard, but the competent. The lacklustre. The than adequate. It candidate cannot
listening to and delivering individuality. The are some candidate is not candidate may be candidate lacks is difficult to use techniques of
oral presentations candidate has elements relating able to alter the hesitant, or else fluency and there follow the reading delivery with any
used pace, pause to pace, pause elements of pace, read too fast. is much because of a success and is
✓ Use tone, voice projection, and varied and intonation pause and There is not stumbling over halting delivery, often inaudible
pace, eye contact, posture and intonation to that could be intonation enough attention words. There is which is either and inarticulate.
gestures correctly and respond enhance the improved. Eye effectively. The to pause, pace little attention to too slow or too The delivery is
appropriately quality of the contact is not candidate tries to and intonation. pause, pace and fast and becomes hesitant and
✓ Pronounce words without reading. Eye always sustained. employ eye Eye contact is intonation. Eye monotonous. The stumbling. The
distorting meaning contact is The candidate contact, but this limited and the contact is candidate does candidate does
convincingly reads well but the is quite sporadic. candidate has minimal and the not employ any not seem to be
maintained and delivery lacks the There is too his/her eyes candidate does eye contact and familiar with the
the audience are overall polish of much closely focused not seem to be loses the passage and
effectively Level 7. dependence on upon the book. fully familiar with audience. does not lift
addressed. The the text. This the nuances of his/her eyes from
candidate's affects the the passage. the text.
reading is sincerity and
riveting. conviction of the
overall reading.
Criteria for Assessing Level 7 Level 6 Level 5 Level 4 Level 3 Level 2 Level 1
an Unprepared Reading 80 – 100 70 – 79 60 – 69 50 – 59 40 – 49 30 – 39 0 – 29
Delivery The reading is The reading is of a The reading is of a The quality of The quality of The quality of The reading is
superior and high standard and pleasing standard reading is reading is less reading is poor. very poor. The
Demonstrate the skills displays great skill the candidate has and the candidate adequate. than adequate. It The candidate candidate cannot
of listening to and of delivery. The communicated the is able to However, the is difficult to follow lacks fluency and use techniques of
candidate has meaning of the communicate the candidate does the reading there is much delivery with any
delivering oral used pace, pause passage fluently content of the not always because of a stumbling over success and is
presentations and varied and effectively. passage communicate the halting delivery, words that the often inaudible
intonation to However, there competently. content of the which is candidate cannot and inarticulate.
✓ Use tone, voice enhance the are some However, the passage clearly. monotonous. The identify. While the The delivery is
projection, pace, eye quality of the elements relating candidate is not The candidate candidate candidate makes hesitant and
contact, posture and reading. The to pace, pause able to alter the may be hesitant, struggles to an attempt to read stumbling. The
gestures correctly and candidate has and intonation that elements of pace, or else read too convey the the passage, the listener struggles
respond appropriately communicated the could be pause and fast. There is meaning of the meaning is poorly to make sense of
✓ Pronounce words varied nuances of improved. Eye intonation insufficient passage and there conveyed. what the reader is
without distorting the passage, as contact is not effectively enough attention to pause, are a number of Punctuation and communicating.
meaning well as the always well to really enhance pace and mispronunciations sentence structure The candidate
content, with great sustained. The the quality of intonation. Eye of vocabulary. The is ignored. There cannot make
flair. Eye contact candidate's his/her delivery. contact is limited candidate does is no attention to sense of the
is well established reading can be The candidate and the candidate not take sufficient techniques of passage.
and the audience deemed most tries to employ is not able to note of delivery and the
is effectively pleasing. eye contact, but engage with punctuation and audience is
addressed. The this is quite his/her audience sentence painfully aware of
candidate's sporadic. While successfully. structure. The the candidate's
reading is the overall reading techniques of unease.
outstanding and is pleasing, the delivery are weak
shows an instant candidate is not and the candidate
grasp of the text's able to make the is unaware of
meaning. passage come his/her larger
alive for the audience.
audience.
Pieces written
Possible Actual under test/
Symbol
Mark Mark controlled
conditions
SECTION 1 1 45
EXTENDED WRITING/
COMPOSITION 45
2
(500-600 Words)
TOTAL FOR THIS SECTION 90
SECTION 2
COMMON ASSESSMENT TASK 1 50 *
This mark sheet must be placed in the front of the file before it is submitted for moderation – either
regionally or nationally by the IEB.
____________________________
SIGNATURE OF CANDIDATE DATE
(This form is available from your academic head in electronic format from IEB online.)
CENTRE NO
Monitoring Comments:
Please note that no monitor may change marks. However, it is important that the monitor
provide some meaningful comment to assist his/her fellow educator.
Additional Comment:
To be sent to teachers, and used by regional SBA file moderators and national
moderators.
Please include a copy of your school's plagiarism policy in your educator SBA file.
No writing in pencil or marking in pencil
No peer assessments
Check additions on the front – show decimal points until total - no rounding until total.
Double checking of totals is advisable.
Check that everything is in the right order with regards to the filing of pieces.
Educators are encouraged to generate new materials and cite all sources please.
The use of stimuli which embrace multi-literacies is encouraged.
Topical issues, recent letters to the press etc. are appropriate.
Rubrics should be stapled to tasks to safeguard the work.
The use of computers is to be encouraged.
Please ensure that the division between each of the sections is clear.
Copies of all task sheets must be available in the educator SBA file.
½ marks are encouraged where appropriate.
Mark and moderate in different colours for the purposes of clarity.
Please include signed IEB marksheets
Incomplete tasks and absenteeism – are unacceptable and work must be made up. The
practice of ignoring this policy places the school under scrutiny and SBA files may be
discounted.
meaningful comments.
Yes No
General
Teacher's file is logically and systematically laid out
Rank order of final SBA marks for ALL learners has been included
Spreadsheet of ALL learners' marks has been included
Has each task been made clear?
Are the assessment criteria clear?
Have the tasks been evaluated using rubrics or appropriate memos?
Is the assessment visible and valid?
Are the tasks age-appropriate?
Are the tasks rigorous enough for Grade 12
Is there any evidence of design grids for tests and examinations?
Yes No
Topics are fresh, original and relevant to Grade 12 learners
Required 2 pieces are sufficiently different to demonstrate the versatility of the writer
There is evidence of internal moderation or cluster moderation feedback provided in the
teacher file
Yes No
There is evidence of internal moderation or cluster moderation feedback provided in the
teacher file
Yes No
Task set is rigorous
Task draws on inter-textuality or engages the learners in a creative/meaningful way
There is evidence of internal moderation of the task provided in the teacher file
Tests Section:
Yes No
There are at least 3 tests included in the teacher file, one of which is from the 4th genre
The combination of tests is correct
No study guides, exemplars, old examination papers or textbook questions have been used
Tests are summative, at least 30 minutes in length, of a demanding standard, and count for at
least 25 marks
Tests serve a specific purpose and reflect the appropriate standard
Tests are appropriately weighted in terms of cognitive demand
Marking guidelines have been included
Preliminary/Trials Examinations:
Yes No
Both examinations are included
No study guides, exemplars, old examination papers or textbook questions have been used
Preliminary or trial examinations must reflect the final examination layout with regard to mark
breakdown; number of choices etc.
Examinations are appropriately weighted in terms of cognitive demand
Design Grids for both examinations are available
There is evidence of internal moderation in the teacher file
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Yes No
Teacher's file is logically and systematically laid out
Rank order of final SBA marks for ALL candidates has been included
Spreadsheet of ALL candidates' marks has been included
Has each task been made clear?
Are the assessment criteria clear?
Have the tasks been evaluated using rubrics or appropriate marking guidelines?
Is the assessment visible and valid?
Are the tasks age-appropriate?
Are the tasks rigorous enough for Grade 12
Is there any evidence of design grids for tests and examinations?
Yes No
Topics are fresh, original and relevant to Grade 12 candidates
Required 2 pieces reflect the versatility of the writer: creative, discursive,
argumentative etc.
Extended pieces are the appropriate length
Constructive and sufficient feedback has been given
Evidence of process writing
Consistent standards of assessment
Internal and/or cluster moderation has taken place
Yes No
The CAT has been completed with integrity.
There is evidence of internal moderation AND cluster moderation
There is evidence of consistency of assessment
Comments on CAT:
Yes No
Task set is sufficiently rigorous
Task EITHER draws on inter-textuality OR engages the learners in a
creative/meaningful way
Evidence of internal moderation
Tests Section:
Yes No
There are at least 3 tests included in the teacher file, one of which is from the 4th
genre
The combination of tests is correct
No study guides, exemplars, old examination papers or textbook questions have
been used
Tests are summative, at least 30 minutes in length, of a demanding standard, and
count for at least 25 marks
Tests are appropriately weighted in terms of cognitive demand
Marking guidelines have been included
Preliminary/Trials Examinations:
Yes No
Both examinations are included
No study guides, exemplars, old examination papers or textbook questions have
been used
Preliminary or trial examinations must reflect the final examination layout with regard
to mark breakdown; number of choices etc.
Examinations are appropriately weighted in terms of cognitive demand
Design Grids for both examinations are available
Evidence of internal moderation
General Comments:
Criteria
Level 7 (100 – 80%) Level 5-6 (79 – 60%) Level 3-4 (59 – 40%) Level 1 – 2 (39 – 0%)
Introduction (4–5) (3 – 3,5) (2–2,5) (0–1,5)
An excellent introduction The learner has provided The learner alludes to the Learner makes little or no
which is original and a clear introduction which question but has not effort to provide an
expresses the direction signposts his/her provided an explicit introduction in relation to
which the learner intends viewpoint effectively. statement to explain the topic. The introduction
to take in his/her essay his/her viewpoint. is vague and rambling
succinctly and and the focus of the
convincingly. essay is unclear.
Quality of reflection Level 7: (16–20) Level 6: (14 – 15,5) Level 4: (9–11,5) Level 2 (6 – 7)
Strong evidence that the The essay displays The learner’s reflection in The learner’s reflection in
learner reflected thoughtful reflection in relation to his/her chosen relation to his/her chosen
extensively on his/her relation to the chosen texts is adequate and is texts is nebulous. The
chosen texts. There is a texts and has substance. not sustained. The learner’s voice is not
strong sense of the The learner’s voice is learner’s voice is often evident and the writer
learner’s own voice clearly evident and the lost and the learner simply restates facts
contained in original, ideas are thoughtful and sometimes lapses into about the books rather
thought-provoking, contain logical, merely retelling the plot of than reflecting on his/her
comprehensive and considered his/her chosen texts. own experience. Ideas
insightful ideas which are substantiation. While there are some are generalised and
well-substantiated valid ideas, these lack without any
through the use of Level 5: (12 – 13) sufficient explanation or substantiation.
examples and quotations. The essay is competent. examples.
The learner has reflected Level 1 (0 – 5,5)
on the chosen texts. The Level 3: (8 – 8,5) Some ideas relating to the
writer’s voice is evident. The learner’s reflection in learner’s reflection are
There are sufficient and relation to his/her chosen evident, but they are
logical ideas but these texts is pedestrian. The almost completely
ideas are not always fully learner’s voice is barely undeveloped. The
developed or evident and the essay learner’s response is
substantiated. becomes dominated by a fragmented and lacks
retelling of plots. The understanding, clarity and
learner does make an conviction.
attempt to justify his/her
ideas but the
substantiation is
superficial and, at times,
incorrect.
Structure Level 7 (8–10) Level 5 – 6 (6–7,5) Level 3–4 (4 – 5,5) Level 1–2 (0–3,5)
Crisp, clear structure The structure is logically The transitions between The structure is
which enhances the developed and the links paragraphs are often haphazard and the reader
overall essay. The between paragraphs awkward. However, there has difficulty in following
structure allows for an enhance the overall is a sense of overall the writer’s train of
effortless reading, and coherence of the essay. progression in the thought. The essay is
understanding, of the structure and there is written in a very loose and
essay. The cohesion of evidence of cohesion. random manner.
the essay is excellent.
Appropriateness of Level 7: (8–10) Level 6: (7½ ) Level 4: (5– 5 ½) Level 2: (3 – 3 ½)
register and correct use Highly competent use of Competent, at times The candidate displays The register is
of language conventions language conventions impressive, use of knowledge of the inappropriate and there is
and excellent language conventions appropriate conventions, very little evidence of
understanding of and appropriate register but there are lapses in the language conventions
register displayed. but this is not always correct register as well as being applied correctly.
sustained. errors in the accurate use The incorrect use of
of language conventions. language conventions is
Level 5: (6 – 7) distracting with numerous
Average response. Level 3: (4 – 4,5) flaws in grammar and
Pedestrian, but not The candidate tried to punctuation.
seriously flawed. Mostly apply conventions, but
accurate use of language the product is flawed. The Level 1: (0 – 2,5)
conventions. register is either incorrect No evidence of language
OR inadequately conventions being
sustained and there is applied. Inability to use
frequent misuse of correct correct register.
language conventions. Communication marred
due to serious flaws in
grammar and
punctuation.
Total: 45
level 7. Evidence of personal style and Incorporates varied sentence patterns that
voice, although depth and development reveal an awareness of different syntactic
compromised in places/ development structures. May employ liveliness, sincerity or
and depth in evidence but personal style humour when appropriate; the writing at times
lacking or compromised. The supplied may be too casual/ personal/ formal to the
text is used generally as stimulus- demands of the question. Errors do not
limited cutting and pasting integrated impede readability. Some editing is needed.
with own ideas.
AN ADEQUATE (AVERAGE) AN ADEQUATE COMMAND OF
RESPONSE. LANGUAGE AND REGISTER.
An ordinary, predictable response that Use of appropriate language and register,
broadly meets the requirements of the although not always consistently applied.
task. An awareness of audience and Makes some attempt to include different
purpose, although not always sentence patterns but with awkward or
convincing/consistent. Makes an attempt inconsistent success. Occasional errors that
6½ to respond sincerely albeit unconvincing detract from the writing fluency in places. The
5
6 in places. Evidence of personal voice in purpose, audience and register have been
places, although some areas jar with the understood in places. Writing is ordinary.
question requirements. Content
suggests that ideas could have been
developed further. The supplied text is
used as stimulus on occasion –
cutting and pasting integrated with
own ideas.
A LIMITED (BELOW AVERAGE) A LIMITED COMMAND OF LANGUAGE
RESPONSE AND REGISTER
Ideas in the paragraphs may be Register suggests limited awareness of
inconsistently organised. Some audience and purpose. Limited awareness of
evidence of originality, despite limited audience and purpose. Limited range of
success in taking into account different syntactic structures. Uses words and that are
5½ audiences and purposes. Superficial colourless and flat. Language may be
4
5 response. Limited personal style. repetitious. Errors may begin to impede
Development of ideas is limited/partial readability. Editing required for clarity of
and requires further elaboration; ideas. Register is not consistent with
compromised development. Personal question’s demands.
voice is limited. Over-reliance on
supplied text, which hinders
personal response in places.
AN INADEQUATE, COMPROMISED AN INADEQUATE COMMAND OF
RESPONSE LANGUAGE AND REGISTER
Ideas have in instances been Language is flawed and unsuitable for
compromised by insufficient depth, audience or purpose. Language patterns
development and organisation. The flawed, images stereotyped. Errors impede
purpose of the task has been tackled readability; extensive editing required. Vague,
4½ unsuccessfully. Vague in places. An confused sentences. Register inappropriate
3
4 inconsistent or incomplete attempt. for the task.
Limited evidence of personal voice,
albeit unconvincing. The writing is
compromised and lacks focus and
direction. Over-reliance on supplied
text, which hinders personal
response.
A POOR, MUDDLED RESPONSE A POOR COMMAND OF LANGUAGE AND
Little or no originality. Individual ideas REGISTER
lacking. No development and focus. Very flawed product. Erroneous.
3½ Cohesion required. No personal style. Demonstrates lack of control of language
2
3 Reveals no awareness of the purpose conventions, exhibiting frequent errors which
of the task. Voice is flat and impede understanding.
unconvincing/no voice. Relies solely
on supplied text.
EXCEPTIONAL
Highly eloquent response; exhibits academic rigour; strong individual
voice; confident knowledge of text
• The essay that is awarded full marks has greater depth and scope than a
level 7.
7++ 100 30 • Candidate displays an exceptional ability to develop an argument that is
academically superior.
• Resonates a sophisticated tackling of the topic.
• Quotations integrated with exceptional ability.
• Quotations and substantiation build an argument that is logically flawless and
which exceeds expectations.
• The style of the essay is fluid and elevated.
• The essay is error free.
DISTINGUISHED/IMPRESSIVE
(Extended Abstract Level)
EXCEPTIONAL/ELEVATED
SOPHISTICATED/HIGHLY DEVELOPED
A sophisticated and perceptive essay that is commendable and well-
structured; substantiation from text enhances argument
(which requires minor polish for a level 7+)
• Argument is thoroughly developed.
• All aspects of the topic have been addressed with sophistication.
• Candidate displays a thorough, accurate and confident knowledge of
the text.
• Insightful understanding of the novel.
• Excellent ability to select information to develop a succinct argument,
which is clearly focused and perceptive.
• Commendable evidence of candidate’s original voice.
• Demonstrates sophisticated individual thought and understanding
26 through analysing and developing a highly developed argument.
7 80 – 89 25 • Commendably integrates and elaborates on specific textual
24 references/evidence, although at times these could have been used with
greater effect.
• Maintains consistent focus without deviating from the central concern(s)
of the question.
• Candidate is able to construct critical, relevant and consistent
connections between topic question and argument, displaying a
convincing, sophisticated line of logical progression.
• Lucid and focused, although there may be a sense that further logical
development could have enhanced this essay further.
• Commendable development of literary structure; focused introduction
and conclusion.
• Excellent transitions between paragraphs.
• Writing reflects an impressive command of register, spelling, language
and punctuation, although there may be minor stylistic flaws.
• Essay signposted throughout, indicating that the candidate has engaged
with the question with a commendable degree of confidence.
• Transfers knowledge of the question in a commendable manner.
COMPETENT/GOOD TO VERY GOOD
(Extended Abstract Level)
SKILFUL/PROFICIENT
An average response; proficient and skilful; competent and focused;
accurate; sound argument; logical; dips into the text skilfully; minor
lapses
• Argument is developed competently and may have minor lapses.
23 • All aspects of the topic have been addressed with conviction OR part of
6 70 – 79 22 the topic has been addressed with depth and sophistication (suggesting
21 that if all aspects of the question had been tackled this essay could have
been awarded a 7 or 7+).
• Candidate displays a competent, accurate knowledge of the text,
although there may be minor gaps that do not impact on the strength of the
argument.
• Proficient understanding of the novel.
• Skilful ability to select information to develop an argument, which is
mostly focused and competent. The argument in instances could
have been developed further.
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SATISFACTORY/ADEQUATE
An acceptable, satisfactory essay that has broadly tacked the question.
An essay that "does the job"; answers all aspects of the topic or part of
the topic tackled well; broad and general in places but voice in evidence;
accurate
• Argument is developed in an adequate manner and may have minor
lapses/some generalisations
• All aspects of the topic have been addressed adequately, although
these may be understood only in part OR part of the topic has been
addressed competently, suggesting that if all aspects of the question had
been tackled this essay could have been awarded a 6).
• Candidate displays adequate knowledge of the text, although there may
be minor gaps that do not impact on the argument.
• Considerable understanding of the novel- there must be a sense that the
text has been read and understood in broad, general terms.
20 • Adequate/sporadic ability to select information to develop an argument,
5 60 – 69 19 which is satisfactory and competent. The argument in instances
18 requires further enhancement and development.
• Some/sporadic evidence of candidate’s original voice.
• Demonstrates adequate individual thought and understanding through
analysing and developing an argument sufficiently. There may be minor
lapses, which could have been enhanced with further development/ the
argument is not fully sustained/ developed throughout.
• Evidence of specific textual references/evidence that is
adequate/acceptable, although at times these could have been used with
greater effect.
• Candidate is able to construct adequate connections between topic
question and argument, displaying a satisfactory progression.
• Generally focused, although there may be a sense that further logical
development could have enhanced this essay further.
• Adequate development of literary essay structure; satisfactory
introduction and conclusion.
• Adequate transition between paragraphs.
AVERAGE = 20
in this category may be one where the candidate displays an ability to
develop an argument that is competent (which would result in a level 6)
but is hindered by major stylistic flaws.
• Essay signposted generally, indicating that the candidate has engaged
with the question in a satisfactory manner.
• Transfers knowledge of the question in an adequate/satisfactory
manner.
MARGINAL/BASIC
(Unistructural Level)
SKETCHY/BELOW AVERAGE/UNDEVELOPED
A basic, undeveloped essay that attempts to engage with the question albeit
limited and/or unsuccessfully in parts; has glimmer(s) of analysis; does
not always dip into the text; padded with narrative; slight evidence of
voice.
• An attempt to develop an argument, although it might be lacking
relevance in parts/sweeping generalisations/narrow or inaccurate in
parts.
• Simplistic interpretation/partly accurate understanding/narrow
interpretation of the topic/vague reference to the topic.
• Candidate displays simplistic/flawed knowledge of the text and the
argument is drawn simplistically. There may be glimmers of analysis
and engagement.
• Broad, general understanding of the text – there must be a sense that the
text has been understood in broad, general terms/comments show
thought, but are not tied to the topic.
• An attempt to develop an argument, which may be successful in parts/
17 unconvincing argument, which lacks substantiation or development.
4 50 – 59 16 There may be some substantiation used without flair.
15 • Slight evidence of candidate’s original voice.
• Demonstrates sporadic/inconsistent individual thought and
understanding through analysing and developing simplistically. There
may be lapses which could have been enhanced with further development/
the argument is not fully sustained/ developed.
• Essay is padded with intermittent narrative and occasional argument.
• Textual reference is unconvincing at times and may be either
inaccurate or flawed.
• Candidate is able to make an inconsistent attempt to use some basic
transition words or phrases, resulting in a superficial progression on
the whole.
• Marginally focused with a sense that logical development could have
enhanced this essay.
• Introduction and conclusion are simplistic and may not point to an
arguable position.
• Writing is simple, unadorned/reflects an inconsistent and limited
awareness of register/inconsistent grammar, spelling and
paragraphing.
• Essay lacks signposting throughout/limited, superficial signposting.
• Transfers knowledge of the question in a simple, basic manner albeit
unimpressively and with limited success.
SIMPLISTIC/SUPERFICIAL/INADEQUATE
14 (Unistructural Level)
13 UNSOPHISTICATED/ONE-DIMENSIONAL/LIMITED
12 A simplistic, superficial/flawed essay that struggles to engage with the
question; evidence that text has been read; thin voice; narrative; just
meets pass mark.
• A weak response but still worthy of a pass.
• Inability to sustain a personal opinion.
• A flawed argument or no argument at all /provides a simple answer to the
question.
• Essay lacks clear and logical development of ideas.
• Candidate displays a simplistic knowledge of the text and there are gaps
in understanding and/or interpretation.
3 40 – 49 • There will be areas in the essay that are problematic or illogical.
• Not much evidence of candidate’s original voice inability to sustain or
develop an argument.
• Little or no substantiation or referencing/flawed substantiation or referencing.
• Critical thinking skills used superficially, if at all.
• Reliance on narrative.
• Absent or ineffective transitions between paragraphs.
• Essay not signposted/ signposted inadequately.
• Introduction and/or conclusion flawed, with further development and synthesis
PASS = 12
required.
• Writing is flawed.
• Weak command of spelling, language and punctuation.
• Does not transfers knowledge of the question and if it does, it will do so with
lapses.
POOR/MUDDLED/VAGUE
(Prestructural Level)
TENUOUS/UNFOCUSED/INACCURATE
A tenuous, poor essay that is muddled and vague and/or inaccurate; no
evidence that text has been read; not worthy of a pass.
• A weak, flawed response, which might be completely off topic.
• Essay lacks coherence
• Inability to state a personal opinion.
11 • Difficult to identify any distinct argument; unfocused.
2 30 – 39 10 • Candidate displays poor/incomplete/flawed knowledge of the text.
9 • The essay is vague, muddled and lacks focus.
• Little/ no/flawed substantiation.
• Paragraph links problematic.
• Reliance on narrative.
• Essay not signposted.
• Introduction and/or conclusion flawed/missing, with further development
and synthesis required.
• Writing is marred by errors, although these do not impede
understanding.
• Weak command of spelling, language and punctuation.
EXTREMELY WEAK/FEEBLE
(Prestructural Level)
INEPT/UNSKILLED
An extremely weak essay; a feeble attempt to engage with the text at times.
8 • A weak, flawed response, which might be completely off topic.
1 20 – 29 • Inability to state a personal opinion.
7
• Difficult to identify any distinct argument; unfocused.
• Candidate displays a poor/incomplete/flawed/ no knowledge of the text.
• The essay is vague, muddled and lacks focus.
• Little/ no/flawed substantiation.
• Paragraph links problematic.
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• Reliance on narrative.
• Essay not signposted.
• Introduction and/or conclusion flawed/missing, with further development
and synthesis required.
• Writing is marred by errors that impede understanding.
• Weak command of spelling, language and punctuation.
INCOMPETENT
6 (Prestructural Level)
5
4 LACKING ABILITY/INEFFECTUAL
1 0 – 19 3 A totally incompetent essay that displays no link to the text or the
2 question.
1 • This piece will not meet the requirements of the task on any level.
0 • Vague, irrelevant, flawed.
• Inappropriate response to the topic.
Global marking, giving credit for concise and coherent sentences expressed in the
candidate's own words.
Below
Very Good Good Average Very Weak
Average
8½ 7 5½ 4 1
9 7½ 6 4½ 2
10 8 6½ 5 3
Very Good: Candidates producing a very good summary will demonstrate that they
can successfully select relevant information from the different parts of the text/s.
Candidates will expertly synthesise that information to suit the new context and fulfil
the specific requirements of the summary task. The register will be consistently
appropriate, and the summary will stand alone as a successful, cohesive text.
Expression will be excellent and will demonstrate a mastery of the language. Full
and coherent sentences will be used resulting in a well-crafted, stylistically superior
text. A summary in this category that exceeds the word limit can be awarded a
maximum of 9.
Good: A candidate producing a good summary will be able to discern which aspects
of the text are relevant, and will be able to synthesise these and convey them in his/
her own words. The summary will successfully meet the requirements specified in
the instructions. Candidates will use the appropriate register and this will be well-
sustained throughout the summary. The expression in such summaries will
demonstrate clarity that is not evident in the average summary. Full and coherent
sentences will be used and will be well-sustained throughout the summary. A
summary in this category that exceeds the word limit can be awarded a maximum
of 7.
Very Weak: Summaries in this category will show extremely limited – if any –
understanding of the text. This will be evident through an inability to select
appropriate parts of the text to summarise or through excessive cutting and pasting.
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When the word 'text' is used, it has the widest possible meaning, including all oral,
written, visual, audio, audio-visual and multi-media forms. In all language teaching,
texts should be used as a starting point, and certain types of texts will be produced as
a product of the process.
Texts are, therefore, the main source of 'content' and 'context' for the communicative,
integrated learning and teaching of languages.
The full range of texts used and produced should expose the learner to:
• rich and appropriate social, cultural and historical settings that develop
understanding of the heritage of the language;
• challenging and stimulating themes that develop critical understanding of values
and appreciation of the important socio-cultural and ethical issues which are
relevant to the lives of South African learners;
• a wide range of points of view;
• models of written and spoken language with a wide variety of structures to help the
learner develop correct and appropriate use of language;
• analysis of stereotypes, bias and generalisations to develop critical thinking;
• persuasive and manipulative language;
• power relations within and between languages;
• developing awareness of audience, purpose and context with appropriate mood,
tone and register;
• features and elements of a wide range of texts, including literary texts;
• visual and audio-visual elements;
• varieties of style and stylistic devices, such as a wide range of figurative and
creative language.
The text-based approach and the communicative approach are both dependent on
the continuous use and production of texts. A text-based approach to language
learning explores how texts work. The purpose of a text-based approach is to enable
learners to become competent, confident and critical readers, writers, viewers and
designers of texts. It involves listening to, reading, viewing and analysing texts to
understand how they are produced and what their effects are. Through this critical
interaction, learners develop the ability to evaluate texts. The text-based approach also
involves producing different kinds of texts for particular purposes and audiences. This
approach is informed by an understanding of how texts are constructed.
Texts are produced in particular contexts with particular purposes and audiences in
mind. Different categories of texts have different functions and follow particular
conventions in terms of structure, style, grammar, vocabulary and content. These are
referred to as genres. Learners need to be able to understand and to produce a range
of different genres.
Texts also reflect the cultural and political contexts in which they are created. The
language used in texts carries messages regarding the cultural values and political
standpoints of the persons who have written or designed them. Thus texts are not
neutral. Learners need to be able to interpret and respond to the values and attitudes
in texts.
Thus, in a text-based approach, language is always explored in texts, and texts are
explored in relation to their contexts. The approach involves attention to formal aspects
of language (grammar and vocabulary) but as choices in texts and in terms of their
effects, not in an isolated way. In order to talk about texts, learners need a 'meta-
language' – they need to know the words that describe different aspects of grammar,
vocabulary and style, and that talk about different genres.
Texts can be categorised as texts used and texts produced. These are detailed in
the lists that follow. These lists cannot cover all the possible text types – the teacher is
welcome to add texts that can be used in integrated language teaching. The intention
of the lists is to give the teacher a wide choice of what could be used or produced.
Detail of what is required in terms of complexity of texts and relative formality of register
is given in the Learning Programme Guidelines.
ANALYSIS GRID
Question Which SKILL/s in What is the subject What is the What is the difficulty rating of What is the mark
the CAPs does the specific content that cognitive level of the question? allocation?
question assess? the question the question?
assesses?
Example Can infer author’s Seen poem: Ruth Blooms level 5 2 – moderate 3
opinion Miller’s Penguin on
the Beach
BLOOM'S TAXONOMY
BLOOM'S TAXONOMY
Knowledge:
• observation and recall of information
• knowledge of dates, events, places
• knowledge of major ideas
• mastery of subject matter
Question Cues:
list, define, tell, describe, identify, show, label, collect, examine, tabulate, quote, name,
who, when, where, etc.
Comprehension:
• understanding information
• grasp meaning
• translate knowledge into new context
• interpret facts, compare, contrast
• order, group, infer causes
• predict consequences
Question Cues:
summarise, describe, interpret, contrast, predict, associate, distinguish, estimate,
differentiate, discuss, extend
Application:
• use information
• use methods, concepts, theories in new situations
• solve problems using required skills or knowledge
Questions Cues:
apply, demonstrate, calculate, complete, illustrate, show, solve, examine, modify,
relate, change, classify, experiment, discover
Analysis:
• seeing patterns
• organisation of parts
• recognition of hidden meanings
• identification of components
Question Cues:
analyse, separate, order, explain, connect, classify, arrange, divide, compare, select,
explain, infer
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Synthesis:
• use old ideas to create new ones
• generalise from given facts
• relate knowledge from several areas
• predict, draw conclusions
Question Cues:
combine, integrate, modify, rearrange, substitute, plan, create, design, invent, what
if, compose, formulate, prepare, generalise, rewrite
Evaluation:
• compare and discriminate between ideas
• assess value of theories, presentations
• make choices based on reasoned argument
• verify value of evidence
• recognise subjectivity
Question Cues
assess, decide, rank, grade, test, measure, recommend, convince, select, judge,
explain, discriminate, support, conclude, compare, summarise