Unit 5 feedback

Georgia East
LO1:
You do need to keep your pages organised Georgia so that people can find your work. Use
the guidance on Vibe when you start each unit and stick to it.
I can’t find your Task 3: Plan of Action.
You don’t have any secondary audience research.
LO2:
Georgia, your production has some very good elements. The use of music and Foley sound
generally works well as does the parallel edit with the courtroom scenes.
There are some sections where the Foley sound is confusing. I couldn’t work out what was
happening from 01:16 to 01:48.
You could also use aural signposting more often to highlight the scenes which take place in
the courtroom. The sound of the gavel does this effectively but could you use some other
courtroom sounds in the same way? Witnesses being called etc.
I like the choice of music which bookends the story. This helps set the scene and suggests a
time-period, but there are some pieces that are much more contemporary which gets a bit
confusing.