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Ice Breakers p7
Brainstorming p8
Study Skills Survey p9
Multiple Intelligences p17
Metacognition p19
Critical Thinking p24
Critical Thinking Exercise – Crime and Punishment p27
Self-Motivation p30
Managing My Time p36
How to be Organised p39
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These skills generally fall into three sections which form the basic process of producing
academic work: sourcing information, analysing and organising the information, and using this
to produce essays, presentations or take examinations.
Lectures
Textbooks
The module focuses on the acquisition and mastering of these skills; students will research,
take notes, analyse and organise their research and present findings to their peers in the form
of formative assessment tasks. In this way they will become more familiar and comfortable
with what is likely to be expected of them at Higher Education level.
This module will have a heavy focus on the practical considerations of studying – students will
be explicitly introduced to the key metacognitive skills needed to acquire knowledge and
present what they know. Topics such as self assessment, goal setting, knowledge acquisition
and the theory of multiple intelligences will be covered.
Student Guide: Contains topic overviews and all of the suggested exercises.
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You are also encouraged to use other materials that might compliment,
or even replace, the suggested articles, if you believe these will be more
relevant to the particular needs of your students.
Classroom
Resources: The resources required are listed at the beginning of each lesson plan in
the Lecturer Guide. Some lessons will require preparation of materials
and most lessons in this module are supported by online content.
Teachers will also need internet access during preparation time.
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You can find lots of ideas for suitable icebreakers by searching for ‘ice breakers’ on any
search engine.
By Melissa Kelly
Although icebreakers can seem frivolous, they are an important first step to getting student
buy-in….Here are some great icebreakers that you can use in your classroom.
TAKE A STAND
The purpose of this activity is for students to get a feel about their peers' positions on various
matters. Unless you make the survey aspect of the exercise clear, students may think it is
ridiculous despite their enjoyment of the physical activity.
The teacher puts one long line of tape down the centre of the room, pushing desks out of the
way so that students can stand on either side of the tape. The teacher reads a statement
with "either-or" answers such as, "I prefer night or day," "Democrats or Republicans," "lizards
or snakes." Statements can range from silly trivia to serious content.
After hearing each statement, students agreeing with the first response move to one side of
the classroom and those agreeing with the second, to the other. Undecided or middle-of-the-
roaders, straddle the line.
https://www.thoughtco.com/fun-classroom-icebreakers
accessed May 2017
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For information about how to brainstorm in a group or individual, try searching for
‘brainstorm’ or ‘brainstorming ideas’ using any search engine.
Gather a group of people. Nominate one person to coordinate the proceedings, introduce
the purpose of the brainstorming session, outline the rules, ensure the rules are followed and
actively encourage participation.
With the purpose and topic of the brainstorming session established, everyone in the group
shouts out their ideas and they are all written down so they can be analysed later. The most
common method of recording the ideas is on flipcharts, but it’s fine to use a blackboard or
another method. A secretary or dedicated writer can be useful to ensure all ideas are
captured.
Since you cannot presume what will stimulate solutions in others, it is your duty to provide
them with as many original stimuli as possible.
There are several interactive study skills checklists to which you can direct your students.
The following were live in March 2017, but you can easily search for alternatives. Try
university websites as a good starting point.
http://www.lhps.org/studyskills/page1.htm
3. I spend as much time on my social activities as I want to, I don't have enough time left to
study, or when I study enough, I don't have time for a social life.
Concentration:
2. I can't sit and study for long periods of time without becoming tired or distracted.
3. I don't review my class notes periodically throughout the semester in preparation for
tests.
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1. When I get to the end of a chapter, I can't remember what I've just read.
3. I can't keep up with my reading assignments, and then I have to cram the night
before a test.
4. I often find myself getting lost in the details of reading and have trouble
identifying the main ideas.
Exams:
1. I lose a lot of points on essay tests even when I know the material well.
2. I study enough for my test, but when I get there my mind goes blank.
3. I often study in a haphazard, disorganized way under the threat of the next test.
Writing Skills:
1. When my teachers assign papers I feel so overwhelmed that I can't get started.
1. Have, maintain, and use a semester calendar to indicate when major projects will
be due, exams will be given, and events will be held. Plan ahead to minimize the
effect of "crunch" periods.
2. Keep and use a date book for appointments, meetings, classes, and errands.
3. Take time each week to review what is coming up the next week and plan time
for doing assignments, projects, errands, etc. Ask yourself, "What are my goals
for the week?"
4. Maintain an on-going list of things to do. Better yet, prioritize your "things to-do"
according to their importance.
5. Use small bits of time effectively. In 15 minutes you can review, edit, and revise
your notes from a recent lecture. Think about other ways to effectively use these
small bits of time between classes and meetings. Ask yourself, "What is the best
use of my time right now?"
6. Know what times of day are best for you mentally and physically. Use that
information to help you plan your time.
7. Handle each piece of paper once. Stop shuffling paper from one pile to the next.
Make a decision about what to do with the paper, and do it.
8. Have a tough task to do? Do it now. Don't procrastinate. If the task looks
overwhelming, use the swiss cheese principle: Bite off small holes in that block.
9. Take time for you: exercise, attend cultural activities, maintain healthy
relationships, and get plenty of rest, otherwise, stress will mount and your quality
of life will plummet.
Concentration
The study environment you choose can make the difference to how much
accomplish during that study session. A bad study environment is distracting and
takes away from your studies. A good study environment facilitates learning and
allows you to make the best use of your allotted time.
Lighting – there should be ample light to make reading and using a computer
easy.
Noise – the location you choose should have a low level of noise. Classical
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music has been shown to aid learning in some cases, but music can often be
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To fight boredom and burnout, try varying your subjects. Spend 45 minutes to
an hour on one then switch to another. Sometimes the changes of pace is all
you need.
Take a short break. Get a drink of water. Walk around a little. This can
stimulate better blood circulation and help you concentrate for longer.
Take some deep breaths. Breathe with your diaphragm. This allows more
oxygen into your system, which can help improve your concentration and
learning.
Active listening intentionally focuses on who you are listening to, whether in a group
or one-to-one, in order to understand what he or she is saying.
As the listener, you should then be able to repeat, in your own words, what they
have said. This does not mean that you necessarily agree with the person, but rather
that you understand what they have just said.
Listen Actively
One-to-One
If posing a question
Continued Development
Reading:
Periodically, look away from the text and ask yourself a question relating to
the text
Respond or restate what the text says in your own words.
If the reading is still a challenge, get help from your teacher or your classmates.
Exams:
1. Analyse how you did on similar tests in the past. Each test you take prepares
you for the next one.
2. Arrive early for tests so you’re calm and prepared when the test begins
3. Keep a good attitude and remind yourself that you are going to do your best
4. Read instructions on the test carefully to avoid careless mistakes
5. If there is time, read the test so you have an overview. Scan for keywords. If
permitted, jot down any notes that come to mind.
6. Answer questions in a strategic order. You might start with easy questions
first to build your confidence, then answer those with the highest point value.
7. Review your answer if you have time. Resist the urge to leave when you
complete the exam; check first if you have answered all the questions, then if
you have made any errors.
8. Change answers to questions if you have made errors
9. After the exam, review where you were successful and where you struggled.
Speak with your teacher or your peers.
Writing Skills:
Development
Establish flow from paragraph to paragraph – use transition sentences,
clauses, or words at the beginning of a paragraph to connect one idea to the
next
Use topic sentences in each paragraph
Make sure each paragraph develops a point – avoid one or two sentence
paragraphs
Write in the active voice eg He decided, rather than it was decided
Introduce, explain and cite each quote
Keep the primary focus of your essay in mind throughout
Don’t start summarising your work during the development phase
Conclusion
Read your first paragraph and the development
Summarise
Conclude your argument
Refer to the first paragraph and the development
Briefly restate your main ideas
Reflect the succession of your argument
Logically conclude the development of your essay
Edit the first paragraph to better set your development and conclusion
guides/writing.html
Accessed May 2017
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This simple grid diagram illustrates Howard Gardner’s model of the seven Multiple
Intelligences at a glance
See the Multiple Intelligences Survey in Excel format on our virtual learning system.
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A person’s ability to learn is mutable, not fixed. In fact, understanding this fact alone
can have a profound impact on students’ learning (Lovett, 2008). Teaching our
students to be strategic learners is therefore one of the most valuable skills we can
give them. Courses focusing on students' application of effective learning strategies
can improve students' performance in those courses, but can also improve long-term
performance and retention of students considered to be at risk (Lovett, 2008;
Weinstein et al., 2000). Surprisingly, self-regulating and adaptive behaviours can be
taught in minimal class time (literally a matter of minutes over the course of a
semester) and students quickly learn to apply these behaviours without prompting
(Lovett, 2008). Once the behaviours are internalized, students continue to use them
but focus their attention on the content they are learning. The page on teaching
metacognition summarizes the key factors in teaching metacognition and offers a
few strategies for doing so.
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References Cited
You may also wish to visit the selected references page.
www.serc.carleton.edu/NAGTWorkshops/metacognition/introduction.html
accessed March 2017
Teaching Metacognition
Expert learners consider their learning goals, plan accordingly, and monitor their own
learning as they carry out their plans. Novice learners, in contrast, don't have explicit
learning goals, fail to plan, and often have only one learning strategy, which they
apply without thinking about whether it's appropriate to the situation. Not surprisingly,
novice learners are often disappointed in the results of their studying, while expert
learners are generally satisfied with their results (and will make adjustments if not).
Step 1: Teach students that the ability to learn is not a fixed quantity
The key to a student's ability to become a self-regulated (i.e., metacognitive) learner
is understanding that one's ability to learn is a skill that develops over time rather
than a fixed trait, inherited at birth. Students who believe that the ability to learn can
improve over time earn higher grades, even after controlling for prior achievement
(Henderson and Dweck, 1990). These students set reasonable learning goals for
themselves and have the self-efficacy to choose and use productive learning
strategies. These strategies then result in learning gains. Moreover, students can be
taught that their ability to learn can improve over time; those who learn this simple
lesson show increased motivation to learn and improved grades (Aronson et al.,
2002; Blackwell et al., 2007).
Step 2: Teach students how to set goals and plan to meet them
Many students don't set explicit learning goals for themselves, or make plans to meet
any goals they might have. Yet students who received as little as half an hour of
training (in the form of one-to-one tutoring) on the process of self-regulated learning
outperformed students who did not receive the training in several important ways.
First and foremost, they learned more. In addition, they planned how they would
spend their time in the learning task, spent more of their time in goal-oriented
searching, and periodically reminded themselves of their current goal (Azevedo and
Cromley, 2004).
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References Cited
Aronson, J., Fried, C. & Good, C., 2002. Reducing the Effects of Stereotype Threat
on African American College Students by Shaping Theories of Intelligence. Journal
of Experimental Social Psychology, 38, 113-125.
Blackwell, L., Trzesniewski, K. & Dweck, C. S., 2007. Implicit Theories of Intelligence
Predict Achievement Across an Adolescent Transition: A Longitudinal Study and an
Intervention. Child Development, 78, 246-263.
www.serc.carleton.edu/NAGTWorkshops/metacognition/teaching_metacognition.html
accessed May 2017
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A statement by Michael Scriven & Richard Paul, presented at the 8th Annual
International Conference on Critical Thinking and Education Reform, Summer 1987.
Critical thinking is the intellectually disciplined process of actively and skilfully
conceptualizing, applying, analysing, synthesizing, and/or evaluating information
gathered from, or generated by, observation, experience, reflection, reasoning, or
communication, as a guide to belief and action. In its exemplary form, it is based on
universal intellectual values that transcend subject matter divisions: clarity, accuracy,
precision, consistency, relevance, sound evidence, good reasons, depth, breadth,
and fairness.
Critical thinking can be seen as having two components: 1) a set of information and
belief generating and processing skills, and 2) the habit, based on intellectual
commitment, of using those skills to guide behaviour. It is thus to be contrasted with:
1) the mere acquisition and retention of information alone, because it involves a
particular way in which information is sought and treated; 2) the mere possession of
a set of skills, because it involves the continual use of them; and 3) the mere use of
those skills ("as an exercise") without acceptance of their results.
Critical thinking varies according to the motivation underlying it. When grounded in
selfish motives, it is often manifested in the skilful manipulation of ideas in service of
one’s own, or one's groups’, vested interest. As such it is typically intellectually
flawed, however pragmatically successful it might be. When grounded in
fairmindedness and intellectual integrity, it is typically of a higher order intellectually,
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In a seminal study on critical thinking and education in 1941, Edward Glaser defines
critical thinking as follows “The ability to think critically, as conceived in this volume,
involves three things: (1) an attitude of being disposed to consider in a thoughtful
way the problems and subjects that come within the range of one's experiences, (2)
knowledge of the methods of logical inquiry and reasoning, and (3) some skill in
applying those methods. Critical thinking calls for a persistent effort to examine any
belief or supposed form of knowledge in the light of the evidence that supports it and
the further conclusions to which it tends. It also generally requires ability to recognize
problems, to find workable means for meeting those problems, to gather and
marshal pertinent information, to recognize unstated assumptions and values, to
comprehend and use language with accuracy, clarity, and discrimination, to interpret
data, to appraise evidence and evaluate arguments, to recognize the existence (or
non-existence) of logical relationships between propositions, to draw warranted
conclusions and generalizations, to put to test the conclusions and generalizations at
which one arrives, to reconstruct one's patterns of beliefs on the basis of wider
experience, and to render accurate judgments about specific things and qualities in
everyday life.
(Edward M. Glaser, An Experiment in the Development of Critical
Thinking, Teacher’s College, Columbia University, 1941)
Review the concept that critical thinking involves looking at a problem from
many points of view. Divide students into discussion groups for this
exercise. Have each group write a different point of view on the board. As
a summary, have students volunteer to state their personal values and
reasonable point of view at the end. This exercise is included in the printed
text and available as a supplement for the online edition.
You can use any interesting and complex current event or social issue for
this type of exercise. Copy interesting shows or news specials from TV
and use them for this exercise. Topics that have been good for class
discussion include elections, health issues such as smoking, welfare,
violence in the schools, and cults such as Heaven’s Gate. If they are
complex and controversial, you will get a variety of opinions and the
discussion will be interesting. This exercise works well if students respect
each other’s point of view. If it becomes a debate, students can get side
tracked and have difficulty going through the critical thinking process.
Doris said that in 1974 she was a “stupid little …hippie-ish girl…a pothead.” During the 34
years that Doris evaded prison, she worried every day that she would be caught. While
looking at a sunset, she would marvel at her freedom and wonder if the past would catch up
with her. She was very careful to lead the life of a model citizen and even volunteered for
Common Cause, an organisation that promotes government ethics and accountability. She
married an executive and had three children and lived a comfortable life in an upper middle
class neighborhood in California. She never told her family about her past. Her husband of
23 years stated that he loved his wife as much as the day they were married and that she
was a “person of the highest integrity and compassion” and had dedicated her life to raising
her children. She taught her children to be responsible citizens and to avoid drugs. Her
husband said that the arrest “was the next worst thing to having a death in the family.” Doris
worried about the effect of her arrest on her son who had just graduated from high school
and her older daughters. A neighbour commented that it would not be useful to society to
send Doris back to prison.
Undercover drug officers believed that Doris had connections to “higher ups” in the drug
world and was a teenage leader in a 1970’s drug ring. They found $600 in her apartment,
paraphernalia for cutting heroin and pictures of her with other drug dealers. Doris described
herself as a recent high school graduate who was strapped for cash, working at a minimum
wage job and driving a $400 car. She said that every day of her life she regretted getting
herself into this situation. She was extradited back to Michigan to serve her original prison
term. Her family and friends submitted a plea for clemency to the governor of Michigan.
Should the governor grant her clemency?
Use your critical thinking to analyse this situation. Your professor may use this exercise as a
group discussion. Use the Critical Thinking Worksheet that follows for your analysis.
This exercise is based on excerpts from “Former Fugitive Drawing Sympathy” and “Captured Fugitive Now
Waiting for Extradition, and to Learn Fate” from the San Diego Union Tribune, May 1 and 2, 2008.
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7. After discussing the issues and looking at different points of view, what is your
reasonable point of view? Why? Include a brief description of your values. Use the
back of this sheet of paper to explain your point of view.
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Motivating Yourself
As young children, we have a great ability to learn and to see past setbacks.
We try things, again and again, until we get them right.
Setbacks are only part of a successful process of learning.
Our drive, motivation, even curiosity to learn is personal, or intrinsic.
Take control and responsibility for your learning, and accept risks with
confidence, competence, and autonomy: Recognize that "failure" is success(!)
and that learning what doesn't work is on the same path as learning what does
work.
If you are intrinsically motivated, studies have found that you will...
- put in more effort
- try different ways to succeed
- be more persistent and learn more deeply
Examples:
I want to learn to text faster to communicate with my friends.
I want to explore Africa to learn about my family's history.
I want to work in a ski shop so I can learn to ski better.
I want carpentry skills to make my gaming centre.
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Independence Creativity
Intellectual pursuits New friends
Sports/athletics Dating
Religion Other
Curiosity is your desire to learn about something. In one or two words, what topic or
subject would you really like to learn about?
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This subject should fill a need that you have. Why do you think learning about it is
important?
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Challenge, curiosity, control, fantasy, cooperation, competition: These can move you
towards your goals and stimulate you.
Select one of the words above and write a couple of sentence about why it appeals
to you.
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Extrinsic motivation comes from outside yourself: It is immediate and not long
term, and can be in the form of a given reward even penalty. It includes the
requirements, goals, and values of others as they affect you.
Examples:
Who affects your choices about your education? Who do you think has control over
what, how and when you learn? Tick all that apply
If you wanted a clearer understanding of their influence, what third party would you
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go to? (do not use names, use titles such as friend, teacher, administrator etc)
An early American saying encourages us to ‘keep our eyes on the prize’ Focus on
day to day responsibilities with your goals (or the ‘prize’) in mind, especially when
things seem difficult.
Examples:
I learn dates for a history test; when I pass history, I'll graduate!
I complete work assignments well in order to get a raise to buy a car.
I learn this computer program as a job requirement, but this added skill will get me
that promotion.
I practice extra kicking to please my coach, but my skills will help the team win
games.
I turn off my cell phone so I concentrate better on the lecture.
I complete my reading assignments, but more reading will increase my vocabulary.
Whether or not you think you deserved it, what did you do to receive it?
Scenario 1
You are motivated to explore financial aid options to help pay expenses since you
moved near your school from your family home. You found that you probably qualify
for a scholarship and the due date is the first day of school. You call the financial aid
office and the administrator says he will send you the forms. However, the move
and beginning of school distract you, and after school starts you realize you have not
received the forms, and the deadline has passed. You call the administrator, and he
says he sent them to you, but that the deadline has passed and the applications are
already processed. What to do?
Keeping perspective is difficult when you are being penalised, or you have not met
your own expectations. But how will you learn from the experience?
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However, if you had scheduled completing the forms in your calendar, you would
have avoided the problem! When you went to complete them, you would have
noticed that you didn’t have them, and would have followed up.
You can schedule in your calendar applying for the next round of scholarships
You can meet with your financial aid officer and discuss other possible scholarships
and loans
You can discuss meeting your financial responsibilities with your parents or guardian
Learn from your experience: renew your motivation to resolve the problem with
additional strategies.
Scenario 2
You are highly motivated to study a subject and register for an entry-level course
with a teacher you really admire. The first test is coming up and focuses on
vocabulary necessary for its field of study. You are confident about acing the test.
The night before the test, your friends celebrate a birthday and you go out with them,
and stay out late. The next day you take the test. A few days later you get the test
results, and find that not only did you not pass, but that you were near the bottom of
the class. What to do?
We can be confident that you over-estimated what you knew, and did not take the
time for review and/or study. You did not consider the effect of celebrating and/or
staying out late. In this case, the exam and your friends were the outside agents that
affected your ability and motivation to continue in this class and field.
Prioritise your activities so that you have enough time to study and complete what is
required.
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Let's discover where this leads us... Answer the questions below.
1. What is one time that you through either that you did not succeed of could
have done much better at a challenge?
5. Who would be one neutral person who could help you evaluate what you did?
8. What one thing could you change to alter your performance, the impression it
made, or its result?
10. How would this fit into achieving your long term goals?
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Not at all (1), Rarely (2), Sometimes (3), Often (4), Very Often (5)
1. The tasks I work on are the ones with the highest priority
2. I find myself completing tasks at the last minute, or asking for extensions
3. I set aside time for planning and scheduling
4. I know how much time I spend on each of the various tasks I do
5. I find myself dealing with interruptions
6. I use goal setting to decide what tasks and activities I should work on
7. I leave contingency time in my schedule to deal with ‘the unexpected’?
8. I know whether the tasks I am working on are high, medium, or low value.
9. When I am given a new assignment, I analyse it for importance and prioritise
it accordingly
10. I am stressed about deadlines and commitments
11. Distractions keep me from working on critical tasks.
12. I have to take work home in order to get it done
13. I prioritise my To Do list or Action programme
14. I confirm my priorities with my boss/ teacher
15. Before I take on a task, I check that the results will be worth the time put in.
Goal Setting
Question 6, 10
6. I use goal setting to decide what tasks and activities I should work on (high)
10. I am stressed about deadlines and commitments (low)
The ideal is a high score for question 6 eg often (4) or very often (5) and a low score for
question 10 eg rarely (1) or not at all (2)
To start managing time effectively you need to set goals. When you know where you’re
going, you can then figure out what exactly needs to be done, in what order. Without proper
goal setting, you’ll waste your time on a confusion of conflicting priorities.
People tend to neglect goal setting because it requires time and effort. What they fail to
consider is that a little time an effort put in now saves an enormous amount of time, effort
and frustration in the future.
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1. The tasks I work on are the ones with the highest priority (high)
4. I know how much time I spend on each of the various tasks I do (high)
8. I know whether the tasks I am working on are high, medium, or low value. (high)
13. I prioritise my To Do list or Action programme (high)
14. I confirm my priorities with my boss/ teacher (high)
15. Before I take on a task, I check that the results will be worth the time put in. (high)
The ideal is a high score for all of these questions eg often (4) or very often (5)
Prioritising what needs to be done is especially important. Without it, you may work very
hard, but you won’t achieve the results you want because what you are working on is not
strategically important.
Most people have a ‘to do’ list of some sort. The problem with many of these lists is they are
just a collection of things that need to get done. There is no rhyme or reason to the list and,
because of this, the work they do is just as unstructured. So how do you work on To Do List
tasks – top down, bottom up, easiest to hardest?
To work efficiently, you need to work on the most important, high value tasks. This way you
won’t get caught scrambling to get something critical done as the deadline approaches.
Managing Interruptions
Questions 5, 9, 11, 12
The ideal is a high score for question 9 and a low score for the other 3 questions.
Having a plan and knowing how to prioritise it is one thing. The next issue is knowing what to
do to minimise the interruptions you face during your day. It is widely recognised that
managers get very little uninterrupted time to work on their priority tasks. Equally, if you are
studying lots of different subject, have a busy social life, play sports and have responsibilities
at home, lots of things can crop up unexpectedly. Some do need to be dealt with
immediately, but others needs to be managed.
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Question 2
1. I find myself completing tasks at the last minute, or asking for extensions (low)
‘I’ll get to it later’ had led to the downfall of many a good employee. After too many ‘laters’
the work piles up so high that any task can seem insurmountable. Procrastination is as
tempting as it is deadly. The best way to beat it is to recognise that you do indeed
procrastinate. Then you need to figure out why. Perhaps you are afraid of failing? (and some
people are actually afraid of success!)
Once you know why you procrastinate then you can plan to get out of the habit. Reward
yourself for getting jobs done, and remind yourself regularly of the horrible consequences of
not doing those boring tasks!
Scheduling
Question 3, 7
Much of time management comes down to effective scheduling of your time. When you
know what your goals and priorities are, you then need to know how to go about creating a
schedule that keeps you on track and protects you from stress.
This mean understanding the factors that affect the time you have available for work. You
not only have to schedule priority tasks, you have to leave room for interruptions, and
contingency time for those unexpected events that otherwise wreak chaos with your
schedule. By creating a robust schedule that reflects your priorities as well as supports your
personal goals, you have a winning combination: One that will allow you to control your time
and keep your life in balance.
Key Points
Time management is an essential skill that helps you keep your work under control, at the
same time that it helps you keep stress to a minimum.
We would all love to have an extra couple of hours in every day. Seeing as that is
impossible, we need to work smarter on things that have the highest priority, and then
creating a schedule that reflects our work and personal priorities.
With this in place, we can work in a focused and effective way, and really start achieving
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1. Keep a Diary
This might seem old-fashioned, but keeping a diary might be a really useful
tool to keep you organised.
Use your diary to keep track of all the deadline you have ahead of you. You
can even put warning messages to yourself in the days before the deadline
(eg CS coursework due 1 week from now) so you don’t get any nasty
surprises.
Once you’re in the habit of checking your diary on a daily basis and using it to
keep note of every commitment and deadline, nothing will catch you out and
leave you rushing to get your work done.
2. Write To Do Lists
The best thing about a To Do list is the sense of achievement you feel as you
tick things off it.
If you feel you’ve got a lot of work piling up, break it down into smaller tasks
and split them across a few days. This way, even if you can only manage to
do a little bit of what you need to do each day, you’ll know that you’re still on
track to get everything finished by the deadline.
If you don’t managed to complete everything on your list for the day, transfer
any unfinished tasks to the next day (but do try to avoid this as much as
possible, or your list will keep on growing!)
You’re never going to feel like you’re in control of things if you’ve only
managed to get a few hours of sleep. It’s recommended that you get 8 hours
sleep a night, and you’ll be surprised how much better you feel when you’re
well-rested and alert.
If you have a deadline coming up that you’re struggling with, and a classmate
asks for your help – it’s okay to say that you can’t help. Don’t feel obliged.
Remember to prioritise your long term goals, so, if someone asks you to do
something and it will get in the way of your long term goals, just say no!
6. Don’t Panic
Last but not least – remember that panicking about having too much to do
won’t solve anything.
Take a deep breath and start tackling one thing at a time. Go back to the top
of this list, work your way through, and you’ll get back on track in no time.
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This handout lists a number of common abbreviations that may be helpful when note-taking,
especially from lectures. It also explains two common abbreviating techniques that can be
applied to almost any word.
You should remember, however, that you can and should also invent and use your own
abbreviations, especially for words or phrases that occur frequently in your subject area. The
key to success in using your own abbreviations is not to invent too many and, more
importantly, to use them consistently.
2. Remove all (or most of) the vowels from the word and use just the key consonants
bunched together e.g. mngmt for management
Mkt for market (mkting for marketing)
Dvpt for development
Example
“At the end of the twentieth century the United Kingdom’s population, at around sixty million,
was similar to that of Italy, but Italy’s population was shrinking because its birth rate had
fallen below its death rate. The UK’s population was still growing, albeit very slowly – at a
rate of 0.09% between 1995 and 2000.”
Your notes on this part of the lecture might look like this:
end 20 UK pop c60m ≈ I. BUT I. ↓ due BR < DR – cf. UK ↑ slow ie 0.09% 95–2K
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Day One
After you have read and recited the entire chapter,
write questions in the margins for those points
you have highlighted or underlined.
If you took notes while reciting,
write questions for the notes you have taken
in the left hand margins of your notebook.
Complete the form for a critical reading review
Day Two
Page through the text and/or your notebook to re-acquaint yourself
with the important points.
Cover the right hand column of your text/note-book
and orally ask yourself the questions in the left hand margins.
Orally recite or write the answers from memory.
Develop mnemonic devices for material which need to be memorised.
Make flash cards for those questions which give you difficulty.
Weekend
Using the text and notebook, make a Table of Contents - list all the topics and
sub-topics you need to know from the chapter.
From the Table of Contents, make a Study Sheet/ Spatial Map.
Recite the information orally and in your own words as you put the Study
Sheet/Map together.
As you have consolidated all the information you need for this chapter,
periodically review the Sheet/Map so that at test time
you will not have to cram.
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Divide your paper into 2 columns, one twice as wide as the other.
Label the smaller column ‘questions’ and the larger column’ notes
Create a section at the bottom of your paper labelled ‘summary’
Record: During a lecture or when reading a chapter, use the notes column to record the
lecture/ notes on the chapter. Don’t use complete sentences – use abbreviations and
shorthand.
Review and Clarify: As soon after class as possible, review the notes, pull out the main
ideas, key points, dates, people etc and turn into a summary to write in the section at the
bottom of your paper.
Questions/ cue words: As soon after class as possible, formulate questions based on the
notes and ‘cue words’ that remind you of the content of the lecture/ chapter. Writing
questions helps to clarify meanings, reveal relationships, establish continuity, and strengthen
memory. Also, writing the questions sets up a perfect stage for revision later.
Recite: Cover the notes column with a sheet of paper. Looking at the questions or cue words
in the question column say, aloud, in your own words, the answers to the questions, or the
facts or ideas prompted by the cue words.
Reflect: Reflect on the material by asking yourself questions, for example: What is the
significance of these facts? What principles are they based on? How can I apply them? How
do they fit in with what I already know? What’s beyond them?
Review: Spend at least ten minutes every week reviewing all your previous notes. If you do,
you’ll retain a great deal for current use, as well as for the exam
Much of a scientist’s work involves reading research papers, whether it’s to stay up to date in
their field, advance their scientific understanding, review manuscripts, or gather information
for a project proposal or grant application. Because scientific articles are different from other
texts, like novels or newspaper stories, they should be read differently.
Reading a scientific paper should not be done in a linear way (from beginning to end);
instead, it should be done strategically and with a critical mindset, questioning your
understanding and the findings. Sometimes you will have to go backwards and forwards,
take notes and have multiples tabs opened in your browser.
Here are some tips for reading and understanding research papers.
1. Skim
First, get the big picture by reading the title, key words, and abstract carefully; this
will tell you the major finding and why they matter
Quickly scan the article without taking notes; focus on headings and
subheadings
Note the publishing date; for many areas, current research is more relevant
Note any terms and parts you don’t understand for further reading
2. Re-read
3. Interpret
When reading the discussion and results, look for key issues and new
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findings
4. Summarise
Take notes; it improves reading comprehension and helps you remember key
points.
If you have a printed version, highlight key points and write on the article. If
it’s on screen, make use of markers and comments
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When engaged in some form of study or research, you will no doubt need to read
information and potentially lots of it.
When you are studying, reading should be seen as an ‘active’ exercise; in other words, you
need to actively engage with your reading to maximise your learning. One of the most
effective ways to do this is to make notes as you go along, linking points, pulling out key
pieces of information etc. By writing notes, in your own words, you will be forced to think
about the ideas that are presented in the text and how you can explain them coherently. The
process of note-taking should help you to retain, analyse and ultimately remember and learn
what you have read.
What NOT to do
It is important to understand that effective note-taking means writing notes on what you have
read in your own words
Copying what others have said is not note-taking, and is only appropriate when you want to
directly quote the author. It can be tempting to ‘copy and paste’ but you won’t engage with
the text if you don’t rewrite it in your own words. And remember, copied text that ends up in
your assignment is plagiarism and a serious academic offence.
There is not magic formula to taking notes when reading; you have to find out what works
best for you. Your note-taking skills will develop with practice and as you realise the benefits.
Here are some hints and tips to get you started:
A quick and easy way to be active when reading is to highlight/ underline pieces of text.
Whilst highlighting isn’t note taking, it’s a good first step. You could also use sticky notes or
similar.
Focus your attention on what you are reading and make it easy to see key points
when re-reading.
Think more carefully about what the key concepts and ideas in the text are
At a glance you will be able to see that you have already read pages or sections on
text
When you come across words or phrases that you are not familiar with it may be useful to
add them to a personal glossary of terms. Make a glossary on a separate sheet of notes, so
you can easily refer to it and update it as necessary. Write descriptions of the terms in your
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Although highlighting is a quick way of emphasising key points, it is no substitute for taking
proper notes.
Remember your main purpose for note-taking is to learn, and probably to prepare for some
form of writing. When you first start out note-taking you may find that you take too many
notes, or not enough, or that when you revisit them they are unclear, or which is your opinion
and which the opinion of author. You will need to work on these areas – like all life skills,
taking effective notes improve with practice.
IT is important to keep your notes organised and well-structured so you can easily find them
later. Use a notebook or set up folders on your computer.
Use headings or different sheets to separate different themes and ideas
Use bright colours to highlight important points in your notes. You may find it useful to have
a simple system of colour coding, using different colours for related content.
Top Tip: Always keep a record of your information source so you can easily find it
again. In academia it is ESSENTIAL that you reference your work.
When referring to a book, record the author’s name, the date of publication, the title of the
book, the relevant page number, the name of the publisher and the place of publication.
When referring to a magazine or newspaper, record the name of the author of the article, the
date of publication, the name of the article, the name of the publication, the publication
number and page number.
When referring to internet sources, record (At least) the full URL or web address and the
date you accessed the information.
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Concepts and sometimes links are labeled. Links can be non-, uni- or bi-directional.
Concepts and links may be categorised, they can be simply associative, specified or divided
in categories such as causal or temporal relations.
The concept mapping technique was developed by Prof. Joseph D. Novak at Cornell
University in the 1960s. This work was based on the theories of David Ausubel, who
stressed the importance of prior knowledge in being able to learn about new concepts.
Novak concluded that "Meaningful learning involves the assimilation of new concepts and
propositions into existing cognitive structures".
Mind Mapping® is a popular related technique, invented (and copyrighted) by Tony Buzan in
the UK. He describes mind maps as: "a mind map consists of a central word or concept,
around the central word you draw the 5 to 10 main ideas that relate to that word. You then
take each of those child words and again draw the 5 to 10 main ideas that relate to each of
those words."
The difference between concept maps and mind maps is that a mind map has only one main
concept, while a concept map may have several. This comes down to the point that a mind
map can be represented as a tree, while a concept map may need a network representation.
Here is an example of a concept map. In this example the nodes are labeled, the links are
also labeled and uni-directional.
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1. Don’t write down everything that you read or hear. Be alert and attentive to the main
points. Concentrate on the “meat” of the subjects and forget the “trimmings.”
2. Notes should consist of key words, or very short sentences. As a speaker gets side-
tracked you can go back and add further information.
3. Take accurate notes. You should usually use your own words, but try not to change the
meaning. If you quote directly from the author, quote correctly and record the citation.
4. Think a minute about your material before you start making notes. Don’t take notes just
to be taking notes! Take notes that will be of real value to you when you look over them
later.
5. Have a uniform system of punctuation and abbreviation that will make sense to you.
Use a skeleton outline and show importance by indenting. Leave white space for later
additions.
6. Omit descriptions and full explanations. Keep your notes short and to the point.
Condense your material so you can grasp it rapidly.
7. Do not worry about missing a point. Leave space and try to pick up the material you
miss at a later date, either through reading, questioning, or common sense.
8. Don’t keep notes on oddly shaped pieces of paper. Keep notes in order and in one
place.
9. Shortly after making your notes, go back and rework (not recopy!) your notes by adding
extra points, spelling out unclear items, etc. Remember, we forget quickly. Budget time
for this vital step just as you do for the class itself.
10. Review your notes periodically. This is the only way to achieve lasting memory.
What you bring to the printed page will affect how you understand what you read. So you
need to organise yourself before you read
Brainstorming:
Group Discussion:
Group discussion in and out of class will help you to discover what you already know about
what you’re about to read, and what your views and pre-conceptions already are, as well as
what the group know and think.
Pre-Questions:
Often chapters in texts provide organising questions. You can write out a series of questions
you expect to be answered when reading.
Eg
Definition : What is…..? Where does … fit with other similar ideas/ concepts?
Characteristics : How would I describe…? What does… look like? What are its parts?
Experience : What experience have I had with… ? What can I imagine about…?
Visual Aids :
Pictures and other visual material can activate your prior knowledge.
Use the Internet to search for pictures related to your title/ topic to give you visual images of
what you are about to read.
Advance Organisers:
Relate new reading material to something you already know, to your background, or
experiences. Ask your teacher for assistance in developing these.
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Discussing information about the selection or assignment prior to reading must take place.
This may take the form of class discussions, printed previews, photographs, outlines, or
films. Spend enough time before the students begin the assignment to ensure understanding
of it.
Vocabulary Previews:
Unfamiliar key words need to be taught to students before reading so that new words,
background information, and comprehension can improve together.
List all words in the assignment that may be important for students to understand. Arrange
words to show the relationships to the learning task. Add words students probably already
understand to connect relationships between what is known and the unknown. Share
information with students. Verbally quiz them on the information before assigned reading
begins.
Structural Organizers:
Before reading an assignment, basic frameworks which are included in the text should be
pointed out such as cause-effect or problem-solution. It can be beneficial to call attention to
specific plans of paragraph or text organization such as signal words, main idea sentences,
highlighted phrases, headings and subtitles. A review of skimming techniques might also be
appropriate as these various areas are covered.
When students have a purpose for reading a selection, they find that purpose not only
directs their reading towards a goal, but helps to focus their attention. Purposes may come
from teacher directed questions, questions from class discussions or brainstorming, or from
the individual student. Along with the question, it is a good idea to pose predictions of the
outcome and problems which need to be solved. These may be generated by the student or
the teacher, but the teacher should use these to guide students in the needed direction for
the assigned selection.
Author Consideration:
Depending upon the content area, a discussion of the author of the particular work can be
helpful to the understanding of it. What is the author trying to say? What is his point of view
and his reason for writing the particular work?
KWL: This strategy consists of three steps for students to use with expository text:
Develop a three column poster with each question in a column and list out responses.
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Strategy 1: Predicting
We make predictions all the time. For example, we predit how long it will take to write an
email, or how a friend will react to some news we have to give them.
When listening to a lecture, we can use two main types of information to help us to predict
what is going to be said next; Background knowledge and context
Background Knowledge:
Context:
Guessing ahead can help you to make notes of the most important aspects of a lecture
because you’re predicting what’s coming next and can prepapre yourself to capture the most
relevant information
Lecturers often use signpost markers to outline the structure of the lecture and list markers
to separate the points in each section of the lecture.
Signpost markers in lectures are words and expressions used by the lecturer to indicate the
direction their lecture is going to take. If you listen out for signpost markers you will hear the
‘heading’ or main themes and topics of the lecture. You can then note these down to give
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Listening out for list markers will help you to write notes that capture the key elements of the
lecture .
By looking at the sign-post markers and list markers you have noted down, you can see if
you have captured everything in your notes that you should have. For example, you might
have noted at the beginning of a lecture that the lecturer said that they were going to make 5
points. Have you captured all 5 points? You can return to the lecture or compare your notes
with a classmate.
It’s often useful to compare your notes with the notes of a classmate. They might have
included information that you have missed out and vice versa. Don’t copy their notes, or let
them copy yours, but do discuss what you’ve both chosen to leave out, or differences in
interpretation to make sure you have the best set of notes you can have.
Adapted from Cambridge Second Edition Study Listening – A course in listening to lectures
and note taking. Tony Lynch.
http://assets.cambridge.org/97805215/33874/sample/9780521533874ws.pdf accessed June
2017
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Decide whether you want to write our your speech or outline the speech on index cards
Consider your comfort level with the topic. If you know the topic well and can improvise
easily, then use index cards. Use 1 car for the introduction – this should include your
opening statement. Use 1 or 2 cards for each supporting point. Then, create 1 card for the
conclusion which ties back to the main ideas of your speech. Write brief sentence fragments
or even single words on your cards – these should contain key phrases that remind you of
what you want to say. If you’re not so certain about your knowledge of your subject, write out
more of the speech, and some sections perhaps just as you want to say them.
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Prepare handouts
If your subject is detailed and technical provide some handouts that cover the most
important points in your speech. This will give your audience a reference for the more
detailed points that they can return to later.
Set a timer
You should know how long your speech needs to be. If you can’t deliver yoru speech in the
given amount of time, you need to shorten it. This will actually strengthen it by making it
more succinct. Remember to include time for a question and answer period at the end if
appropriate.
Speak slowly
Speak slowly and enunciate clearly. Pause between the sections of your speech so your
audience can digest the information you’ve just given them.
Dress appropriately
If you need to appear authorative, choose formal business clothes. Don’t wear anything that
is too distracting, like very bold accessories.
Speak slowly
The natural adrebnaline rush you might get speaking in front of a group of people can cause
you to speak too quickly for your audience to hear you well. Remember to speak slowly,
enunciate clearly and smile. Having a confident smile can really help your audience connect
with you and pay more attention to what you’re saying.
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This article covers the planning stages of essay writing which as important to the overall
process.
Developing the skill of essay writing takes practice, time and patience, your essay writing
skills will improve and develop the more you write.
With the help of your teacher and your peers and from constructive feedback that you
receive when your work is marked, writing an essay will become easier as you progress
through your studies and your confidence increases.
Writing an essay helps you to consider the issues raised in your course and to relate them to
your own experience, way of thinking, and any wider additional reading and research you
may have undertaken in order to tackle the essay topic.
Writing an essay is an important part of the learning process. In the writing of an assignment,
learning occurs as you think through and interpret the points raised. Presenting your
experience and showing understanding within your assignment will, from the marker’s point
of view, demonstrate knowledge of the subject area.
Planning is the process of sorting out what you want to include in your essay.
We well-planned and organised essay indicate that you have your ideas in order and it will
make points clearly and logically. In this way, a well-planned and structured essay enable
the person reading and maybe marking your essay to easily follow the points being made.
As a question
As a statement that you are asked to comment on
As an invitation to ‘outline’, ‘discuss’ or ‘critically assess’ a particular argument or
point of view.
Remember: Always write your essay on the question that has been set and not on another
aspect of the subject. Although this might sound obvious, many students do not fully answer
an essay question or include irrelevant information. The primary aim of an academic essay is
to answer the task set.
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At this point, check whether you’re on track – if you’re not sure, speak with your teacher
or another student to sense check what you’ve written so far.
7. Skim through any course material or lecture notes and start to build a more detailed
outline.
8. Write down where you will find the necessary information on each of the points in
your more detailed outlined (eg research, lecture notes etc). Indicate if you need to
do further research to understand a particular part of your planned essay.
9. Note down further sources of information eg books, journals, webpages etc
Be careful not to let your outline become too complicated; stick to the main points and
make sure everything you note down is directly relevant to the essay question. If you
have been given a reading list or core text book, check the relevant sections of that.
10. Once your plan is complete, stop and think about the proportions i.e. how many
words in total you need to write and how many words to allocate to each part of your
essay.
Academic essays normally have a word limit and writing within that word limit is
important.
Think about the main things that need to be covered in the essay. Make sure you
allocate most of the words to the main issues, not to any subsidiary points (no matter
how interesting)
Though it might sound strange, many people have forgotten about using the library. Because
many libraries now offer their collections online, many people are forgoing the library in favor
of heading to their computers. While this makes sense for those who might not be in driving
distance of a high quality library, this also means many people are forgetting how to use a
library.
When you walk into a library, there are many resources at your fingertips. You just need to
know what to use, how to use it, and when to ask for help.
Orient yourself. If you have not been to a library in a while, you need to orient yourself
again. Most libraries are arranged in a similar pattern, so this section will help you learn
more about your local library as well.
New Books section: When you walk into a library, one of the first displays you might
see is the New Books section. This is where the latest books are on display so
that visitors can find them easily. Here, you might find the latest nonfiction books
to support your research topic.
Special display cases and tables: Sometimes there will be special displays during
holiday seasons or when an author comes out with a new book in a series.
Adult fiction: A large section, the adult fiction section is a place where you can find
books arranged by the author's last name.
Non-fiction and reference books: If you are looking for the reference section, you
will want to seek out nonfiction. This area is going to be arranged by the Dewey
Decimal system.
Card catalogues: You might also notice there are card catalogues or computers that
will allow you to find the books you need. These catalogues might allow you to
search by title, author, or subject, depending on your question.
If you have not been to the library in a few years, simply take a moment to walk around first
so you can go to the section you need without wasting time.
Ideally, you will go to the computers or the card catalogues to search for the books you
need, write down their numbers or authors, and then move into the sections to find the books
on the shelves.
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Depending on the topic you need to research, you might find that different libraries might
serve you better. Many people do not realize it, but there is more than one type of library in
most cities.
Public: This library is the typical library, funded by tax dollars and working to make
sure the local community has the books it needs without having to charge anyone
to read them.
Academic: If you need to research something that is more complicated, heading to
an academic library might be a wise choice. These libraries are often specifically
tailored to one subject. For example, you might go to a medical school library when
researching a health-related topic. Other possible academic libraries include
engineering, nursing, law, etc.
School: While universities and colleges have their own libraries, many other schools
and grade levels do, too. Depending on the research you need to do, you might
not be able to use these libraries because they may not have the items you need
in order to successfully research your topic. Think about your topic and what you
need to find before you head to a library for younger students.
Miscellaneous libraries: There are other libraries that are also available in your
local surroundings, though you might need to call to see if you can use them. For
example, if you need to research a local company, you might be able to see their
personal library for reports, statistics, financial records, etc.
Think about the topic you need to cover and what this might mean in terms of where you
need to be for your research. In most cases, a public library will work well, but when you
need to access cutting edge information, the universities offer a wider collection of resource
materials.
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You may not have used the card catalogue system before, so the computer systems are
more familiar to use. Set up to be accessible for anyone, these computers offer a wealth
of information.
To make sure you can find what you are looking for, here are some tips to make the
computers help you more effectively:
Have titles in mind. If you are heading to the library, it never hurts to have the titles
you want in your mind already. This will allow you to easily type in the title names
and then begin to use the books for your personal research. Double-check the title
names before you leave for the library.
Know author names. If you do not know the titles, perhaps you know the names of
authors and experts in the field. These will be easy to input into the computer to
see what you can find.
Pick out keywords. When you are researching a specific subject, try to choose one
to five keywords that come up frequently in the literature. For example, if you
research "weight loss," you might also type in "diet." Have this list of keywords
available to find as many related books as possible.
Have a question. Before you walk into the library, have a question or two that you
are trying to answer. This will focus your research and allow you to make the most
of your time.
Bring related book titles. If you already have done some research elsewhere, bring
those titles along with you. Even if you already have those books at home, look for
them in the library and then look to the right and the left of the book on the shelf.
More often than not, those adjacent books will offer you additional ideas and
information about your topic.
Use a notepad. As you walk along, make sure to bring your notepad. This will keep
track of the numbers and letters you need to find for each book or topic you
research. The more numbers you have, the more you will head in the proper
direction when you are in the library.
Using the library is easy and it only takes a little direction from you in order to fully realize
how many books can help you with your topic of study.
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At times, you may not know where to begin with a research topic. Though you might have
basic research skills, if you are not sure where to go or what questions to ask, it can help to
bring in a third party who is not attached to your research: the librarian.
Interested in learning more? Why not take an online class in Basic Research Skills?
Librarians are trained to help people find the books they need or the topics they are
interested in. By talking to librarians about what you want and what you need to cover in
your research, they may be able to point out additional resources you had not yet
considered.
have book titles that have been helpful to you. If you already have found helpful
books, show the librarian so she or he can look for similar books in the stacks.
have a question you need to answer. Yes, it can help to have a question in mind
when you talk to librarians. They will help you answer it.
introduce the problem you have. When you have a problem with your research, be
clear about what you are being troubled by. Chances are good the librarian can
point you in a better direction.
The librarians are there to help you with your research. They have gone to school and
received a master's degree in library sciences to learn how to use the reference materials
and how to ensure that you find the answers you need.
One of the best innovations of the library system is that you can now communicate with
other libraries in the same way that librarians can. If you go to a computer terminal and you
find a book you want, but it is not at that library, you can have the book sent to your home
library.
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The library system is designed to help you get the book you want as quickly as possible. You
can take control of the process by telling the computer what you want it to do with the books
you need.
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Always begin writing essays with an introduction that clearly sets out the aims of what you
are about to write and references the title of the piece of work. State what the essay will try
to achieve and briefly mention some of the main points you will consider. The idea is to give
the marker an overview of your argument, to show that your thought process is logical and
coherent and that you have carefully thought the question through. Don’t try to go into any of
your key points in depth in your introduction – they will each be covered by a full paragraph
later on. If the question is an ‘either or’ or a ‘how far do you agree’ question, it is useful to set
out both sides of the argument briefly in the introduction in preparation for exploring the two
sides later in the essay.
For example: if the essay title is “The main purpose of Gothic fiction is to break normal moral
and social codes. Discuss”
“It is certainly true that many works of Gothic fiction manifest the transgression of normal
moral and social codes as their major theme. Their emphasis on female sexuality, their
breaking of the boundaries between life and death and their shocking displays of immoral
religious characters would all suggest that this is indeed the case. However it is also
important to consider other major aspects of the genre that might be considered equally
important in purpose, such as its fascination with the supernatural, its portrayal of artificial
humanity and its satirical social attacks. This essay will explore these conflicting purposes
with reference to several different Gothic texts to discover what might be best described as
the ‘main’ purpose of the genre.
You should start a new paragraph for each major new idea within your essay, to clearly
show the examiner the structure of your argument. Each paragraph should begin with a
signpost sentence that sets out the main point you are going to explore in that section. It is
sometimes helpful to refer back to the title of the essay in the signpost sentence, to remind
the examiner of the relevance of your point. Essay writing becomes much easier for you too
this way, as you remind yourself exactly what you are focusing on each step of the way.
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Further sentences in this paragraph then go on to expand and back up your point in greater
detail and with relevant examples. The paragraph should not contain any sentences not
directly related to the issue set out in the signpost sentence. So you are writing an essay that
clearly separates its ideas into structured sections.
Every well-structured essay ends with a conclusion. Its purpose is to summarise the main
points of your argument and, if appropriate, to draw a final decision or judgement about the
issues you have been discussing. It is important not to introduce any new ideas in the
conclusion – it is simply a reminder of what your essay has already covered. It may be useful
again to refer back to the title in the conclusion to make it very clear to the examiner that you
have thoroughly answered the question at hand. Make sure you remind them of your
argument by very concisely touching on each key point.
“Overall, whilst it is certainly true that the characters, plots and settings of Gothic fiction
seem firmly intended to break normal moral and social codes, the great incidence within the
genre of the depiction of the supernatural, and in particular its insistent reference to social
injustice and hypocrisy might suggest that in fact its main purpose was the criticism and
reform of society.”
To check over the structure of your finished essay, see if you can write a summary of it
where you state in one sentence what each paragraph is about. If you need to write more
than one sentence for a paragraph your structure isn’t clear enough, you need to split that
paragraph into two to separate the key points out. Your essay writing should come on in
leaps and bounds if you follow these top tips to good essay structure.
Your tutors will have no doubt stressed to you the importance of using academic journals as
a key source of information for your essays and research projects, but why are these
journals so important?
Put simply, academic journals are academic magazines. Like magazines they are
periodicals, meaning they are published periodically e.g. monthly or bi-monthly, and contain
a series of articles in each published issue. However, unlike the kind of popular magazines
that you would buy on the high street, journals are written by and for experts in their chosen
field. They are used as a means for scholars and researchers to share their research with
the academic community. Whilst there are many popular magazines on more ‘serious’
subjects e.g. New Scientist, The Economist, which can be excellent sources of background
information, they are written with the lay person in mind and do not include the depth of
coverage that an academic researcher would need. For in-depth examination of a topic,
academic journals should be your first choice.
Primary research
Academic journals are the main forum by which research is published. Often the articles in
academic journals will report in detail the finding of research studies. Whilst text books will
frequently make reference to key pieces of research, this will be secondary commentary on
the research rather than allowing you to read the actual findings of the study. Important
studies published in academic journals may be reported in more mainstream magazines
such as New Scientist and The Economist or in newspapers, but the reports of the studies
may greatly simplify the findings so that they are easily accessible to the lay person.
Focus
Each article published in a journal will also explore a very narrow, specific topic in depth.
You can learn about a particular aspect of your topic in far greater detail than that which
would be afforded in a text book or if it was reported in a popular magazine or newspaper.
Currency
The process of writing an academic book may take a long time, even years. While the
information contained within them is clearly very useful, it may not be very up to date. As
issues of journals are published more frequently they are the best way of keeping up to date
with the latest research in your field. This is particularly pertinent if your topic is subject to
frequent changes and developments.
Quality
The process of getting published in an academic journal, therefore, is very different to how
an article in a popular magazine or newspaper is published, where decisions on what to
publish are solely at the discretion of an editor.
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You can use these guides in your writing process to check for common errors, language
used, formatting, reference and citations, and much more.
Key issues:
Focus:
Sentence/ word level
Academic voice – Have I avoided using emotional language, is my style and choice
of words formal, have I written in the active voice, have I avoided using ‘I’ (remember,
everything in an essay needs to be supported – ‘I think’ isn’t evidence!)
Navigation, linking words and topic sentences
Structure – Statement/ assertion, evidence, evaluation/ explanation of significance
Reduce – check for duplication, extra unnecessary words, and think about including
fewer examples if you have too many
Increase – where are the gaps? Have I answered the question? Do I need to do
more reading? Have I considered any counter arguments properly?
Questions:
What is the main focus?
How can I show the structure of my argument?
Does every sentence do something to support my thesis?
Am I clear?
Have I met all the requirements?
Proofreading
Key issues:
Details
Accuracy
Any specific requirements
check referencing.
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Questions:
Is there a house style ie is there a specific way you’ve been asked to present your
work?
Does it read well?
Am I clear?
Have I used the right referencing system and have I used it consistently?
Does every citation have a reference?
Does every reference have a citation?
Does it make sense?
Have I used appropriate technical vocabulary?
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A citation is the part of the reference that you include within the main body of your work
whenever you directly quote from, paraphrase, summarise or refer to work produced by
another author. In the Harvard style, the citation includes the author's surname and year of
publication.
You should include page numbers if you quote directly from the text, paraphrase specific
ideas or explanations, or use an image, diagram, table, etc. from a source.
It is good practice to vary the way you incorporate in-text citations; this will help enhance the
flow and style of your academic writing.
You may sometimes use the author's name in the text or just refer to the author in brackets
and citations might appear at the start, middle or end of your sentences.
You can also refer to multiple authors at once; this will not only help to make your writing
more succinct, but will also improve the synthesis of sources, research or ideas within your
assignments.
Examples
Ramirez (2010), Schneider (2011) and Roberts (2013) discuss the challenges faced by...
There seems to be a correlation between students' use of the library and high degree marks
(Stone and Collins, 2012)
A number of studies have shown that ... (Chan, 2012; Elston, 2011; Graham, 2009;
Richards, 2007)
Quoting is where you copy an author's text word for word, place quotation marks around the
words and add a citation at the end of the quote. Quotes should be using sparingly as over
quoting can suggest a lack of understanding of the text you are referring to.
In scientific writing, it is generally the case that you should paraphrase from sources, rather
than quote directly. Quoting more extended sections of text tends to be more common in arts
and humanities subjects where it may be appropriate to quote frequently from the literature
that is being analysed.
As you take notes, ensure you clearly mark where you have quoted directly from the source.
Direct quotations
If however you are quoting from a website or webpage that does not have page numbers,
you do not need to include anything to indicate this in the citation.
Example:
"Language is subject to change, and is not caused by unnecessary sloppiness, laziness or
ignorance" (Aitchison, 1981, p.67).
It is separated from the rest of the paragraph by one free line above and below
It is indented at left and right margins
It may be in a smaller point size
It is preceded by a colon
It does not use quotation marks
The citation includes author, date and page number(s) that the quotation was taken
from.
Example:
One answer to this is that language has always been subject to change, just as everything
else in the world is, and we should not feel that this is a bad thing. As Aitchison (1981, p.16)
puts it:
Language, then, like everything else, gradually transforms itself over the centuries. There is
nothing surprising in this. In a world where humans grow old, tadpoles change into frogs,
and milk turns into cheese, it would be strange if language alone remained unaltered. In
spite of this, large numbers of intelligent people condemn and resent language change,
regarding alterations as due to unnecessary sloppiness, laziness or ignorance.
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You may want to make minor changes to a direct quotation. This is possible (as long as you
don't change the meaning), but you must follow the rules.
If you omit parts of the quotation, use an ellipsis. An ellipsis consists of three dots
(...). Do not begin or end a direct quotation with ellipsis points. The reader already
assumes that the quote has been excerpted from a larger work
If you want to insert your own words, or different words, into a quotation, put them in
square brackets [ ]
If you want to draw attention to an error in a quotation, for example a spelling mistake
or wrong date, do not correct it; write [sic] in square brackets
If you want to emphasise something in a quotation that is particularly relevant to your
essay, put the emphasised words in italics, and state that the emphasis is your own
If the original has italics, state that the italics are in the original.
Example 1:
Language changes are natural and inevitable. It has been argued that language:
gradually transforms itself over the centuries. In a world where [everything changes], it would
be strange if language alone remained unaltered. In spite of this, large numbers of intelligent
people condemn and resent language change(Aitchison, 1981, p.16, my italics).
Example 2:
According to Smith (1992, p.45), "Aitcheson [sic] appears to believe that everything
changes; but this is questionable" (italics in original).
Citation details
One Author
When the author name is not mentioned in the text, the citation consists of the author's
surname and the date of publication in brackets:
Example:
It was emphasised that citations in a text should be consistent (Jones, 2011).
If you have already named the author in the text, only the year needs to be included in
brackets.
Example:
Jones (2011) emphasised that citations in a text should be consistent.
You should also include page numbers if you quote directly from the text, paraphrase
specific ideas or explanations, or use an image, diagram, table, etc from a source.
Two Authors
When the authors' names are not mentioned in the text, the citation consists of the authors'
surnames and the date of publication in brackets:
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Example:
It was emphasised that citations in a text should be consistent (Jones and Baker, 2011).
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Example:
Jones and Baker (2011) emphasised that citations in a text should be consistent.
You should also include page numbers if you quote directly from the text, paraphrase
specific ideas or explanations, or use an image, diagram, table, etc from a source.
If a source has three or more authors, the name of the first author should be given, followed
by the phrase "et al".
Example:
When the authors' names are not mentioned in the text, the citation consists of the first
author's surname and "et al.", followed by the date of publication, in brackets:
It was emphasised that citations in a text should be consistent (Jones et al., 2011).
If you have already named the authors in the text, only the year needs to be included in
brackets.
Example:
Jones et al. (2011) emphasised that citations in a text should be consistent.
You should also include page numbers if you quote directly from the text, paraphrase
specific ideas or explanations, or use an image, diagram, table, etc from a source.
You should include page numbers if you quote directly from the text, paraphrase specific
ideas or explanations, or use an image, diagram, table, etc from a source.
Example:
"It was emphasised that citations in a text should be consistent" (Jones, 1998, p.24).
When referencing a single page, you should use p. For a range of pages, use pp.
Example:
p.7 or pp.20-29.
If the page numbers are in Roman numerals, do not include p. before them.
Example:
When citing part of a work that has been written by someone other than the author (eg an
introduction written by an editor), give the name of the section author:
If the page numbers are in Roman numerals, do not include p. before them:
In your reference list, the reference would be given under the name of the author of the
section.
Examples
Malcolm, N. 2012. Introduction. In: Hobbes, T. Leviathan. Malcolm, N. ed. Oxford: Oxford
University Press, pp. 1-6.
Amis, K. 1958. Foreword. In: Ulanov, B. A handbook of jazz. London: Hutchinson, i-iv.
Government Document
Bills, Acts and Statutory Instruments
The full title of the document is used as the citation.
Examples:
(Access to Justice Act 1999)
(Anti-social Behaviour, Crime and Policing Bill 2013-14)
(The Bathing Water Regulations 2013)
Command papers, Departmental circulars, House of Commons/Lords papers
Use the Government department/committee/organisation in place of the author.
Examples:
(Home Office, 2003)
(Lord Chancellor's Department and Department of Health, 1993)
(National Audit Office, 2005)
Film, Video or Broadcast
If you refer to a film, video or broadcast, you should cite the title and the date.
When the title is not mentioned in the text, the citation should consist of the title and the date
in brackets:
Example:
The way the characters interact reveals... (The Godfather, 1972)
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brackets.
If you are referring to a particular scene or quote, you should include in the citation the times
(hours, minutes and seconds) between which it takes place in the film.
Example:
The conversation between the characters Rhett Butler and Scarlett O'Hara reveals... (Gone
with the Wind, 1939, 01:32:03-01:33:05).
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Many people think of plagiarism as copying another's work or borrowing someone else's
original ideas. But terms like "copying" and "borrowing" can disguise the seriousness of the
offense:
ACCORDING TO THE MERRIAM-WEBSTER ONLINE DICTIONARY, TO
"PLAGIARISE" MEANS
to steal and pass off (the ideas or words of another) as one's own
to use (another's production) without crediting the source
to commit literary theft
to present as new and original an idea or product derived from an existing source
In other words, plagiarism is an act of fraud. It involves both stealing someone else's work
and lying about it afterward.
According to U.S. and British law, the answer is yes. The expression of original ideas is
considered intellectual property and is protected by copyright laws, just like original
inventions. Almost all forms of expression fall under copyright protection as long as they are
recorded in some way (such as a book or a computer file).
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Teachers, examiners and exam markers are very experienced in detecting plagiarism. It is
often obvious from what you say or how you say it that you have plagiarised an idea, a
quote, some text or similar from someone else.
There is also sophisticated software, such as Turn It In, that can detect any kind of
plagiarism, whether you have copied from a book, a website, your cousin or a classmate,
even if you have translated the material from another language!
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Occasionally, Web sites pretending to be objective have a hidden agenda and may be trying
to persuade, promote, or sell something.
What is the purpose or motive for the site? (e.g., educational, commercial,
entertainment, promotional)
Is the site trying to sell you something?
How easy is it to differentiate advertisement from content?
Based on your knowledge, is the information factual, opinion, propaganda, et cetera?
Who is the intended audience, and how is this reflected in the organization and
presentation of the site?
Authority
Is the author identifiable? Look for links that say "Who We Are," "About This Site" or
something similar.
Is there contact information for the author? (e.g., e-mail address, mailing address,
phone number)
What is the author's background? (e.g., experience, credentials, occupation, whether
he or she has written other publications on the topic)
Does the author cite his or her sources?
Is this site linked to often by other sites?
Do links on this site lead to other reputable sites?
Are there spelling errors or incorrect use of grammar?
What domain does the site belong to? (e.g., .edu, .gov, .com, .net, .org)?
Reliability
When was site last updated or revised? If you cannot find a date on the page,
type javascript:alert(document.lastModified) in the address bar and hit Enter. A
pop-up window will display the date and time when the page was last updated.
How often is the site updated?
Do the links on the site work?
Coverage
Evaluating resources
When using a book, article, report, or Web site for your research, it is important to gauge
how reliable the source is.
Initial appraisal
Author or creator: What are the author's credentials (educational background, past
writing, experience) in this area? Have you seen the author's name cited in other
sources or bibliographies? Respected authors are cited frequently by other scholars.
For this reason, always note names that appear in many different sources.
Year of publication: Is the source current or out of date for your topic? Topic areas of
continuing and rapid development, such as the sciences, demand more current
information. Topics in the humanities often require material that was written many
years ago.
Edition: Is this a first edition? Later editions indicate a source has been revised and
updated. Multiple printings or editions may indicate that the work has become a
standard source in the area and is reliable.
Publisher: Is it a university press or a large reputable publisher?
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Intentions: Read the preface (book) or abstract (article) to determine the author's intentions.
Scan the table of contents and the index to get a broad overview of the material covered.
Note whether bibliographies are included.
Intended audience: What type of audience is the author addressing? Is this source too
elementary, too technical, too advanced, or just right for your needs?
Objective reasoning:
Is the information fact, opinion, or propaganda? It is not always easy to separate fact
from opinion.
Does the information appear to be valid and well-researched, or is it questionable
and unsupported by evidence?
Is the author's point of view objective and impartial? Is the language free of emotion-
rousing words or bias?
Coverage:
Does the work update other sources, substantiate other materials you have read, or
add new information? You should explore enough sources to obtain a variety of
viewpoints.
Is the material primary or secondary in nature? Primary sources are the raw material
of the research process; secondary sources are based on primary sources.
Writing style: Is the publication organized logically? Are the main points clearly presented?
Do you find the text easy to read? Is the author repetitive?
Locate critical reviews of books in a reviewing source, such as Book Review Digest.
Is the book considered a valuable contribution to the field? Does the reviewer
mention other books that might be better? If so, locate these sources.
Do the various reviewers agree on the value or attributes of the book, or has it
aroused controversy among the critics?
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Journals and magazines are important sources for up-to-date information in all disciplines. In
this guide we have divided periodical literature into four categories:
Scholarly
Substantive news or general interest
Popular
Sensational
Scholarly
Scholarly journals generally have a sober, serious look. They often contain many
graphs and charts but few glossy pages or exciting pictures.
Scholarly journals always cite their sources in the form of footnotes or bibliographies.
Articles are written by a scholar or someone who has done research in the field.
The language of scholarly journals is that of the discipline covered. It assumes some
scholarly background on the part of the reader.
The main purpose of a scholarly journal is to report on original research or
experimentation to make the information available to the rest of the scholarly world.
Examples of scholarly journals: American Economic Review, Archives of Sexual
Behavior, JAMA: The Journal of the American Medical Association, Modern Fiction
Studies
Popular
Popular periodicals come in many formats, although they are often somewhat slick
and attractive in appearance and have many graphics.
These publications rarely, if ever, cite sources. Information published in such journals
is often second- or third-hand, and the original source is sometimes obscured.
Articles are usually very short, written in simple language, and designed to meet a
minimal education level. There is generally little depth to the content of these articles.
Articles are written by staff members or freelance writers.
The main purpose of popular periodicals is to entertain the reader, sell products (their
own or their advertisers'), and/or promote a viewpoint.
Examples of popular periodicals: Ebony, Parents, People, Reader's Digest, Sports
Illustrated, Time, Vogue
Sensational
Sensational periodicals come in a variety of styles but often use a newspaper format.
The language is elementary and occasionally inflammatory or sensational. They
assume a certain gullibility in their audience.
The main purpose of sensational magazines seems to be to arouse curiosity and
cater to popular superstitions. They often do so with flashy headlines designed to
astonish (e.g., "Half-man Half-woman Makes Self Pregnant").
Examples of sensational periodicals: The Globe, The National Enquirer, The Star,
Weekly World News
Adapted from
https://www.library.cornell.edu/research/introduction#2Findingbooks,articles,andothermater
accessed June 2017
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To improve your academic writing skills, you must first understand possible problems with
sentence structure so that you can not only recognize but write effective sentences.
To understand sentences, you must first understand clauses, which make up sentences. A
clause is defined as a group of words containing both a subject and a verb.
An independent clause contains both a subject and a verb and can stand alone as a
sentence.
A dependent clause contains both a subject and a verb, but cannot stand alone as a
sentence.
Dependent clauses are introduced by subordinating conjunctions such as because, that,
what, while, who, which, although, if, etc.
1. SIMPLE: A simple sentence consists of one main (or independent) clause. To be complete,
a simple sentence must have at least one SUBJECT and one 'verb'.
Example:
The MAN 'went' to the store.
A simple sentence may also have a compound subject and/or a compound verb.
Example:
The MAN and his SON 'went' to the store and 'bought' some milk.
2. COMPOUND: A compound sentence has at least two main (or independent) clauses,
connected by coordinating conjunctions (such as and, but, or, nor, for, so, yet). Each clause
has its own subject(s) and verb(s). The second clause should be separated from the first by
a comma in front of the coordinating conjunction.
Example:
The man went to the store, and the sales clerk sold him some milk.
3. COMPLEX: A complex sentence has one main (or independent) clause and one or more
dependent (or subordinate) clauses.
Example:
When an atom is split, it releases neutrons.
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NOUN CLAUSES function as nouns in the sentence and can be used as subjects, objects,
predicate nominatives, and objects of prepositions.
Example:
WHAT IS MOST IMPORTANT TO HIM is his family. (subject) That critic writes THAT AL
PURDY IS THE BEST POET IN CANADA. (object)
You are WHAT YOU EAT. (predicate nominative)
She is very suspicious about WHAT HE SAID. (object of preposition about)
ADJECTIVE CLAUSES start with a relative pronoun( such as who, which, or that) and
function as adjectives.
The pronoun refers to a noun that usually precedes it directly.
Example:
The woman WHO BOUGHT THE RED DRESS is my aunt. That dress, WHICH IS MY
FAVOURITE, was expensive. The problem THAT HE SOLVED was a difficult one.
NOTE: Use commas around the adjective clause to indicate that the information there is not
essential to the sentence, i.e., not needed to identify the subject (see Improving Your
Punctuation).
Absence of commas, on the other hand, indicates the information is essential to the
sentence.
Example:
The bull that is in the pasture belongs to Joe. (suggests that, of all the other bulls on the
farm, the one in the pasture is being identified as belonging to Joe)
OR
The bull, which is in the pasture, belongs to Joe. (suggests that there is only one bull on the
farm, so the writer is giving non-essential information by mentioning that it is in the pasture)
NOTE: The word THAT is used to introduce an essential clause (without commas), whereas
WHICH is used to introduce a non-essential clause (with commas). Some grammar
textbooks suggest WHICH can be used for either essential or non-essential clauses.
NOTE: A pronoun (such as which, that) must always refer specifically to one noun. The word
WHICH is often used incorrectly.
Example:
NO:
Your essays should be submitted on time, WHICH is one way to be a successful student.
(Vague reference because the word which in this sentence refers to neither time nor
essays.)
YES:
One way for you to be successful as a student is to submit your essays on time.
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1. Sentence Fragments
A sentence fragment is not a complete sentence. It usually lacks either a subject or a verb,
or both, or contains only a dependent clause.
Example:
For example, three dogs and a goat. (no verb – what did the animals do?)
Studying too hard on weekends. (no subject – who was studying?)
Because I couldn’t find my shoes. (contains a subject and verb, but is a dependent clause)
A run-on sentence is one in which two or more independent clauses are inappropriately
joined. Remember that the length of a sentence does not determine whether it is a run-on
sentence: a sentence that is correctly punctuated and correctly joined can be extremely long.
Two types of run-on sentences are fused sentences and sentences with comma splice
errors.
A comma splice refers to the error of placing only a comma between two complete
sentences, without a connecting word (such as and, but, or because).
Example:
The experiment failed, it had been left unobserved for too long.
To correct a fused sentence or a comma splice error, you can use either a period, semi-
colon, colon, coordinating conjunction, or subordinating conjunction.
Example:
The experiment failed. It had been left unobserved for too long.
The experiment failed; it had been left unobserved for too long.
The experiment failed: it had been left unobserved for too long.
The experiment had been left unobserved for too long, SO it failed.
The experiment failed BECAUSE it had been left unobserved for too long.
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NOTE: When the conjunctive adverb is within the clause rather than at the beginning, place
it between commas.
Example:
He wasn’t prepared to defend a client who was guilty; he could be persuaded, however, to
accept a bribe.
3. Loose Sentences
A loose sentence may result if you use too many “and ” connectives when other conjunctions
would convey a more precise meaning.
Example:
John had a weight problem, and he dropped out of school. (what is the most accurate
connection: John had a weight problem so he dropped out of school or because he dropped
out of school?)
A loose sentence also results from weak sentence construction and the inclusion of many
phrases and clauses in no particular order.
Example:
In the event that we get the contract, we must be ready by June 1 with the necessary
personnel and equipment to get the job done, so with this end in mind a staff meeting, which
all group managers are expected to attend, is scheduled for February 12.
NOTE: Writing the previous passage as several sentences would be more effective.
4. Choppy Sentences
A succession of short sentences, without transitions to link them to each other, results in
choppy sentences.
Example:
NO:
Our results were inconsistent. The program obviously contains an error. We need to talk to
Paul Davis. We will ask him to review the program.
YES:
We will ask Paul Davis to review the program because it produced inconsistent results.
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NO:
Doug thought that he was prepared but he failed the examination which meant that he had
to repeat the course before he could graduate which he didn’t want to do because it would
conflict with his summer job.
YES:
Doug thought that he was prepared, but he failed the examination. Therefore, he would have
to repeat the course before he could graduate. He did not want to do that because it would
conflict with his summer job.
6. Parallel Structure
Parts of a sentence which are in sequence must all follow the same grammatical or
structural principle.
Example:
NO:
I like to swim, to sail, and rowing.
YES:
I like to swim, to sail, and to row.
YES:
I like swimming, sailing, and rowing.
NO:
This report is an overview of the processes involved, the problems encountered, and how
they were solved.
YES:
This report is an overview of the processes involved, the problems encountered, and the
solutions devised.
Writing well composed academic paragraphs can be tricky. The following is a guide on how
to draft, expand, refine, and explain your ideas so that you write clear, well-developed
paragraphs and discussion posts:
Step 1:
Decide the Topic of Your Paragraph Before you can begin writing, you need to know what
you are writing about. First, look at the writing prompt or assignment topic. As you look at the
prompt, note any key terms or repeated phrases because you will want to use those words
in your response. Then ask yourself:
• On what topic am I supposed to be writing?
• What do I know about this topic already?
• If I don’t know how to respond to this assignment, where can I go to find some
answers? What does this assignment mean to me?
• How do I relate to it?
After looking at the prompt and doing some additional reading and research, you should
better understand your topic and what you need to discuss.
Step 2:
Develop a Topic Sentence
Before writing a paragraph, it is important to think first about the topic and then what you
want to say about the topic. Most often, the topic is easy, but the question then turns to what
you want to say about the topic. This concept is sometimes called the controlling idea.
Strong paragraphs are typically about one main idea or topic, which is often explicitly stated
in a topic sentence. Good topic sentences should always contain both (1) a topic and (2) a
controlling idea.
The topic – The main subject matter or idea covered in the paragraph.
The controlling idea – This idea focuses the topic by providing direction to the composition.
Read the following topic sentences.
They all contain a topic and a controlling idea. When your paragraphs contain a clearly
stated topic sentence such as one of the following, your reader will know what to expect and,
therefore, understand your ideas better.
Examples of topic sentences:
• People can avoid plagiarizing by taking certain precautions.
• There are several advantages to online education.
• Effective leadership requires specific qualities that anyone can develop.
Step 3:
Demonstrate Your Point
After stating your topic sentence, you need to provide information to prove, illustrate, clarify,
and/or exemplify your point. Ask yourself:
• What examples can I use to support my point?
• What information can I provide to help clarify my thoughts?
• How can I support my point with specific data, experiences, or other factual material?
• What information does the reader need to know in order to see my point?
• Here is a list of the kinds of information you can add to your paragraph:
• Facts, details, reasons, examples • Information from the readings or class
discussions
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Step 4:
Give Your Paragraph Meaning
After you have given the reader enough information to see and understand your point, you
need to explain why this information is relevant, meaningful, or interesting. Ask yourself:
• What does the provided information mean?
• How does it relate to your overall point, argument, or thesis?
• Why is this information important/significant/meaningful?
• How does this information relate to the assignment or course I am taking?
Step 5:
Conclude
After illustrating your point with relevant information, add a concluding sentence. Concluding
sentences link one paragraph to the next and provide another device for helping you ensure
your paragraph is unified. While not all paragraphs include a concluding sentence, you
should always consider whether one is appropriate. Concluding sentences have two crucial
roles in paragraph writing: First, they draw together the information you have presented to
elaborate your controlling idea by:
• Summarising the point(s) you have made.
• Repeating words or phrases from the topic sentence.
• Using linking words that indicate that conclusions are being drawn (e.g., therefore,
thus, resulting). Second, they often link the current paragraph to the following
paragraph.
• They may anticipate the topic sentence of the next paragraph by:
• Introducing a word/phrase or new concept which will then be picked up in the topic
sentence of the next paragraph.
• Using words or phrases that point ahead (e.g., the following, another, other).
Step 6: Look Over and Proofread
The last step in good paragraph writing is proofreading and revision. Before you submit your
writing, look over your work at least one more time. Try reading your paragraph out loud to
make sure it makes sense. Also, ask yourself these questions:
• Does my paragraph answer the prompt and support my thesis?
• Does it make sense?
Does it use the appropriate academic voice?
Adapted from
https://awc.ashford.edu/PDFHandouts%5CHow%20to%20Write%20a%20Good%20Paragra
ph_final.pdf accessed June 2017
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Conclusions are often the most difficult part of an essay to write, and many writers feel that
they have nothing left to say after having written the paper. A writer needs to keep in mind
that the conclusion is often what a reader remembers best. Your conclusion should be the
best part of your paper.
A conclusion should
Suggestions
Strategies
Example
Introduction
From the parking lot, I could see the towers of the castle of the Magic Kingdom standing
stately against the blue sky. To the right, the tall peak of The Matterhorn rose even higher.
From the left, I could hear the jungle sounds of Adventureland. As I entered the gate, Main
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Street stretched before me with its quaint shops evoking an old-fashioned small town so
charming it could never have existed. I was entranced. Disneyland may have been built for
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I thought I would spend a few hours at Disneyland, but here I was at 1:00 A.M., closing time,
leaving the front gates with the now dark towers of the Magic Kingdom behind me. I could
see tired children, toddling along and struggling to keep their eyes open as best they could.
Others slept in their parents' arms as we waited for the parking lot tram that would take us to
our cars. My forty-year-old feet ached, and I felt a bit sad to think that in a couple of days I
would be leaving California, my vacation over, to go back to my desk. But then I smiled to
think that for at least a day I felt ten years old again.
Challenging the reader: By issuing a challenge to your readers, you are helping
them to redirect the information in the paper, and they may apply it to their own lives.
Example
Though serving on a jury is not only a civic responsibility but also an interesting
experience, many people still view jury duty as a chore that interrupts their jobs and
the routine of their daily lives. However, juries are part of America's attempt to be a
free and just society. Thus, jury duty challenges us to be interested and responsible
citizens.
Looking to the future: Looking to the future can emphasize the importance of your
paper or redirect the readers' thought process. It may help them apply the new
information to their lives or see things more globally.
Example
Without well-qualified teachers, schools are little more than buildings and equipment.
If higher-paying careers continue to attract the best and the brightest students, there
will not only be a shortage of teachers, but the teachers available may not have the
best qualifications. Our youth will suffer. And when youth suffers, the future suffers.
Posing questions: Posing questions, either to your readers or in general, may help
your readers gain a new perspective on the topic, which they may not have held
before reading your conclusion. It may also bring your main ideas together to create
a new meaning.
Example
What is stress?
Stress is one of the body's natural responses to something that is threatening or frightening.
It is something that we all experience from time to time. Many aspects of life have the
potential to cause stress, including adjusting to a new living environment, fulfilling academic
requirements, developing friendships and preparing for and sitting exams.
Stress is not necessarily harmful: mild forms of stress can motivate and energise you.
Slightly increased stress levels may make you more alert and motivated to do your work.
However, if your stress level is too high then it can cause difficulties, including impairing your
ability to prepare for and perform during exams.
To understand what produces the responses associated with anxiety and stress, think about
how your body responded at times when you felt threatened or frightened. It is likely that you
will have experienced the following physical responses:
extra alert senses to produce a reaction from the slightest touch or sound.
All these reactions happen automatically when we are under stress; they are driven by the
production of hormones, including adrenaline. This is called the flight or fight response
because it equips you to fight or escape from situations which are dangerous or threatening;
your body is alert and ready for action. Once the danger has gone, your body will gradually
return to normal.
People also respond similarly to situations that feel threatening but which cannot be resolved
by fighting or running away. Imagine that it is a few weeks until the start of your exams, your
revision is not going well and you are starting to feel "stressed out". In this instance there
may be some time between when you start to feel stressed and the end of the "danger"
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(which may be the completion of the exams). During this time your body may remain
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mentally overactive and physically tense. It is when you are in this uncomfortable state that
There is a whole range of different signs which may indicate that someone is feeling
stressed. The signs could include: strong feelings such as feeling scared or irritable;
changes in your thinking such as being unable to concentrate and remember things;
behavioural changes such as changes in your appetite, increased use of drugs or alcohol
and sleeping difficulties; physical changes such as headaches or other pains from muscles
that have become tense. People vary greatly in the way that they react to stress, and you
should therefore try to become aware of how your body and behaviour change and take
action to minimise any negative effects.
Friends can often take on an important supportive role during the exam periods and at other
times of stress; often very simple things can help.
Accept that your friend is anxious, whatever the cause of the anxiety and whether or not you
feel they have a good reason to be anxious.
Help them to build up a group of people, including friends and family who can support them.
Encourage them to relax and to try and follow the strategies outlined below.
Unfortunately there is no magic wand that will remove the impact of stress on your life.
Controlling stress is an active process which means that you will have to take steps to limit
its impact. However, there are some very simple steps that you can take to do this which
may help your stress levels work for you instead of against you.
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Try to eat a well-balanced diet, eating at least three regular meals a day. Eat foods which will
release energy slowly and are likely to have a calming effect. Food or drink high in sugar
may give you instant energy, but in the long term may wind you up leaving you feeling more
nervy and edgy than you did before.
Limit your consumption of caffeine particularly found in tea, coffee, fizzy soft drinks and
"Proplus" tablets. Excess caffeine tends to heighten arousal and increases "jittery" feelings;
it can also impair your concentration and may keep you awake at night.
Try to also limit your use of alcohol and to avoid all use of non-prescribed drugs. These may
make you feel better in the short term, but can prevent you from sleeping properly; they can
also impair your ability to remember the work that you are trying to revise. Some people
drink alcohol and / or smoke more to control their stress levels, but it would be a good
decision to try to develop more healthy ways of controlling your stress.
Make sure that you get plenty of rest; six to eight hours a night are recommended. If getting
to sleep is a problem, ensure that you have at least a half an hour break from your revision
before going to bed. Use this break to do anything relaxing which will take your mind off your
work such as:
writing a letter;
Exercising regularly will not only help to keep you physically healthy, but also uses up the
hormones and nervous energy produced when you are stressed. Exercise will also help to
relax the muscles which become tense when you are stressed, and, as exercise increases
the blood flow around the body, it can help you to think more clearly.
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If you notice that you are starting to feel very stressed, for example as you wait for the
examination to start, try to regulate your breathing by concentrating on breathing out to a
slow count of four; the breathing in will take care of itself. It will be helpful if you practise this
exercise when you are not stressed so that you are very familiar with the technique when
you need actually need it.
Build leisure time into your revision days and the days that you sit your exams. Get involved
in a non-academic activity, such as sports, crafts, hobbies or music. Anything that you find
relaxing or enjoyable which will give you a break from thinking or worrying about your exams
will be beneficial.
Effective study skills can reduce stress by making you feel more in control of your work and
more confident that you will succeed. It may be useful to talk to your course tutor to get
subject specific advice to help make your revision more focused.
Remember that most of your fellow students will be feeling the same way as you do. Tell
your friends and family how you feel and find ways of relaxing with them which will help to
support you.
Have a good but moderate breakfast and lunch, remembering not to drink too much caffeine.
Try to do something relaxing for the last hour before the exam. Last minute cramming could
cloud your ability to remember the overall concepts.
Try to avoid fellow students who may increase your anxiety levels by asking what you
have or have not revised etc.
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Have a plan for how you will use your time in the exam hall
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Revision must be one of the most individualised processes within academic life. Students
begin it with:
different psychological and life contexts into which to fit the revision.
While it is possible to get ideas from others and from books, about how to revise, you also
need to get to know what your own personal strengths and weaknesses are. How much do
you already know? How do you revise? What are the factors that usually cause problems for
you in managing your revision?
The following list may be useful in identifying combinations of contexts in which you prefer to
revise.
Early-mid morning
Mid-late morning
Early-mid afternoon
Mid-late afternoon
Early-mid evening
Mid-late evening
In the library
In a cafe
On a bus/train journey
At home
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In a revision tutorial
Different stages of revision can fit with different contexts. Early on you may prefer to work
individually; mid-morning, in silence, at home. Later, you may prefer to work mid-afternoon,
interactively, in a café. The important thing is that you match the type of revision you are
doing with the context in which you, personally, are able to do that best.
Taking control
It is easy to feel overwhelmed. You may feel that the task is too big, and that whatever you
do you will not succeed. It is important to appreciate the size of the task, but it is also
important to be realistic about what you can do in the time available. The revision and exam
period will inevitably involve stress. You need to monitor this and, ideally, make it
work for you not against you.
The key is to be realistic. Yes, you will have less free time temporarily. No, you will not
have to go without free time completely.
If you find yourself feeling generally worried, give yourself 10 minutes to write down exactly
what it is that you are worrying about. You are then in a better position to devise some
strategies for addressing those specific concerns. You can compare the concept of ‘revision’
with that of athletic ‘training’. First read the following list as it stands. Then try reading it
again but substituting: ‘students’ for ‘athletes’; ‘revision’ for ‘training’; and ‘exams’ for
‘competition’.
Athletes in training
Athletes need to consider both the quantity and the quality of their training.
Training volume is essential, but so is planned recovery time, otherwise athletes will
experience ‘burn-out’, and performance in competition will drop.
Training needs to be tailored closely to what will be required in competition, rather than just
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Athletes need a high degree of self-awareness to know how they personally respond to
training and to recovery, so they can optimise their performance on the day.
By planning training sensibly, it will be possible to schedule in high quality sessions close to
competition, but also to schedule in appropriate rest to support top performance on the day.
It is important to focus on the quality rather than just the quantity of your revision. This
means that, whatever time you do spend revising, you try to make sure that it:
is quality time;
Just as recovery has to be built into physical training sessions to optimise the training effect
of the effort, so breaks need to be built into the revision schedule to give the brain time to
consolidate the learning.
Set a realistic, definite time to stop each revision session. This should help to maintain
the quality of each session. The session should be short enough to guarantee your full
attention throughout. You could:
agree with yourself that you will exclude other distractions for that period of revision;
allow yourself to be totally focussed for that period, knowing that, when it ends, you can walk
away.
Another way to use short specific time slots to do quality revision sessions is to look for
opportunities to mix revision productively with other activities. For example:
a bus or train journey could give you a defined and limited block of time during which you
could rehearse in your mind an explanation of a topic;
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you could take an exam question or two on a walk or a run with you.
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Active revision is much more effective than passive revision. Passive revision is associated
with such activities as reading notes, and copying material. Active revision is concerned
with using and organising material.
Unfortunately, the basic revision technique, on which most other ideas are built, of:
reading and understanding the material; ‘reducing’ it to a smaller amount of material in note
form; reviewing this again; reducing it again perhaps to a list of bullet points
…can become a passive, time consuming exercise if you aren’t careful.
While this kind of activity may legitimately form the foundation of your revision, you need to
make sure you do not spend huge amounts of time copying material in a passive way.
Active and passive learning can be compared with the concepts of recognition and recall. It
is much easier to recognise someone’s name when you are told it, than it is to recall their
name without any clues. Similarly it is much easier to read through a page of notes and
think, “Yes, I know this”, than it is to cover up the page and to give a talk on the topic.
Words associated with an active approach to revision
organise
select
interpret
link
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explore
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explain
recall
categorise
teach
reorganise
develop
argue
diagnose
The University of Edinburgh has a useful section on revision on its website. It gives some
suggestions for ways of making your revision active:
“Revising actively implies making a real effort to understand what you are learning, rather
than simply memorising by rote. Even if your exams require you to remember a lot of facts,
you are much more likely to retain detailed information if it is related to an underlying
understanding. There are many ways to achieve this; here are some suggestions you might
like to try:
Thinking how the solution to one problem may help you solve others.
There are several different stages in revision, and it is likely that you will want to cover some
elements of your syllabus several times in slightly different ways. When you are preparing
your revision timetable you need to build in repeat sessions where possible. Here are three
timetable designs you might find useful.
2. block out time that you already know will be unavailable e.g.: sporting event, concert etc.
3. work back from each exam and schedule in repeat and last minute revision sessions for
each topic, close to the relevant exam.
4. within the exam period itself you will probably be able to schedule in revision sessions for the
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later exams, once earlier exams are out of the way: this should free up time earlier on.
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It is vital to monitor regularly how your revision is going, and to modify your plans
accordingly. If you find that it is taking longer than you anticipated, there are several options:
if you really have to, then be more selective and reduce the amount you plan to do.
By monitoring your experiences in the early days of revision, it should be possible to modify
your revision timetable for the remaining time so that it works most effectively for you.
You may find that revision techniques you have used very successfully in the past now need
to be modified, extended, or changed in some way to cope with new challenges. Take a
critical and honest look at your revision habits. If you find they are not up to the task ahead,
find new ways of working. You may find you can make significant improvements. It may even
feel as if you have created more time.
Memory techniques
In addition to reading, understanding, and making revision notes, you may feel that you need
to use some specific memory techniques to remember collections of facts, or processes.
Discover the potential of mnemonics. A mnemonic is a device by which you think of
something quite easy to remember, which then prompts you to remember material that is
more difficult to remember. A famous mnemonic based on the initial letters of words is
‘Richard Of York Gave Battle In Vain’ for the order of the colours of the rainbow. Two
musical examples are: ‘Every Good Boy Deserves Food’ for the names of the lines on the
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treble clef; and ‘Father Charles Goes Down And Ends Battle’ for the order in which sharps
appear in a key signature.
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As you revise you could create a list of questions relating to what you’ve just revised.
When you come back to that topic you could start by seeing how you do with those
questions. This will highlight where you need to pay particular attention.
It’s always a good idea to see how much you can remember about a topic before you look at
your notes again. You could try allowing yourself time to think through as much as you can
before returning to your notes. Thinking hard through a topic like this means that, when you
finally check out your notes, you can quickly identify which elements you had forgotten
about, and be ready to slot them firmly into your memory.
‘Mind maps’ or ‘thought maps’ are useful if you want to find out how much you can
remember on a topic. After you have written down everything you can remember, try to
extend the map by adding more to each branch e.g.: a link, an idea, a query, extra
description, references, a debate point, or a conclusion.
Explaining
A particularly effective way of engaging actively with what you are revising is to learn about a
topic then to try to explain it in your own words. You don’t necessarily need any audience
except yourself. By trying to explain a topic you quickly discover which aspects you
understand and remember well, and which you need to investigate and revise further. Be
prepared to have a good go at the explanation before reaching for the answers.
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Although revision is very much an individual process, it is surprising how much you can gain
by working with others for some revision sessions, either in pairs or in larger groups. Some
of the work is best done face to face, but some can be done using electronic communication.
Ideas include:
revising different but closely related topics in advance, then each giving a short talk on their
topic, with the others asking questions;
revising the same topic and coming together to talk about what you’ve learnt and what you
can’t understand/remember;
creating practice exam questions as you revise and putting these into a collective pool of
questions that you can all dip into;
swapping mnemonics you’ve made up. When you ask someone else to explain something
that you don’t understand you will gain from their help.
When someone else asks for your help, you gain by having to provide a comprehensive,
clear and informed explanation.
If your exam will involve tackling a problem, or doing calculations, active revision is
crucial. Passive revision would be to read through a completed calculation, or the solution to
a problem, and to say to yourself, ‘Yes, I can follow that’. Active revision involves working
through a new question or problem on your own. For example:
in mathematics, it is not enough to follow through calculations: you need to practise doing
them on your own;
in medicine, it is not enough to learn material by rote within each topic: you need to practise
making links across topics;
in law, it is not enough to read through cases: you may need to find or create case studies to
practise on;
in psychology it is not enough to read through examples of how statistical tests can be used,
you need to try to work through them for yourself.
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More useful than practising writing full essays is to practise creating essay plans, or
‘skeleton essays’. These are a bit like a site map for a website: they will include the main
headings relating to the planned structure of your essay, and the associated sub-headings of
examples, arguments, and references, etc, but the full content would not appear unless you
wrote the full essay.
Allow yourself ten minutes to prepare a detailed plan for your essay, so that writing it would
then be straightforward. You will thus have practised the hard part of remembering and
selecting information, and creating the best structure for its presentation, but will have taken
only ten minutes.
Remember that there may be several ways to answer to a question, and you need to identify
the most effective approach to take. Practise identifying the biggest turning point / the
information of most consequence / the best examples / the most powerful evidence.
When you practise creating essay plans for exam questions, a four-stage approach can be
useful:
Squeeze everything you can out of the essay title to make sure that you fully understand it
and that you are addressing each element of it.
Brainstorm all relevant ideas onto paper, including references, examples, arguments,
queries, links…
Match up ideas to aspects of the title and organise them into the most powerful order.
Squeeze out more ideas using a systematic approach of, for example, adding dimensions or
asking why, where, who, what, where, when etc, or whatever questions are appropriate to
your subject.
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It is useful to plan how you will allocate your time within the exam. This is not necessarily
relevant for exams where short answers are required. Where you will need to write essays,
however, it is important to know how much time you can allocate to each individual essay.
Here is an example of a timings plan for a 2 hour exam: 13.00-15.00; where you need to
write 3 essays.
13.00-13.05 = settling in; reading instructions; noting down your timings plan; making initial
essay choices.
Make sure that you make as good an attempt as you can for ALL of your responses. In
general it is considerably easier to get the first 50% of marks for each question than it is
to get the second 50%. So, for example, make sure that you make a significant effort for
each essay rather than using too much extra time on your favourite ones. With an essay-
based exam it can be useful to begin with the question for which you can think of the most
material. This can boost your confidence and get your thoughts flowing. In a paper with no
choice of questions, it can be most productive to go through the paper answering all of the
questions that you are sure of. This will stimulate your thoughts and help you recall
information, putting you in a more active frame of mind for when you go back to the start and
give more thought to the remaining questions.
On the start line
When you are waiting to go into the exam room there is no point looking backwards over
what you haven’t covered; what you never understood; or what you thought you’d learnt but
can’t seem to remember. All you can influence now is the future. You are where you are:
now you have to make the best of what you’ve got. Athletes at the start of a race can’t do
anything about the training they missed. There is no point in worrying about whether they are
less well-prepared than they had hoped. All they can influence now is what happens after
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the starting gun goes off. They need to concentrate fully on the race ahead, and use their
training as best they can.
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Where there is a choice of tasks or essays, check out the potential of all of the options
before making your decision.
For an essay-based paper, it can be helpful to begin with the title for which you have the
most to write. This can boost your confidence, and get you into the swing of planning and
writing exam essays.
Do not be rushed into starting to write your first essay. Remember to take adequate time to
prepare a strong essay plan first.
Even if you have already written a similar essay before, try to bring fresh energy on this
occasion.
Don’t waste energy judging a question. You may think it’s irrelevant, or boring, or badly
phrased, but put those feelings to one side. Re-read the question to check if there was
anything you missed.
Respect the question. Take time to 'listen' to the question before thinking of the answer,
rather than assuming that you know what the question will be. It may be slightly different
from what you expect.
Read all parts of a question before beginning to answer. In that way you can see how the
examiner has divided the knowledge between the different parts of the question, so you can
be sure to focus on the specific response needed for each part.
If there is a question you cannot answer, leave it and continue with the rest of the paper.
Come back later to make your best effort with the question(s) you left out