Read the letter and then rewrite it in your notebooks.

How many errors can you correct?

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Hi Ms. Capmany!

My name is Sara and I have eighteen years. I am writing to you why I am interested
in the work as Summer Camp monitor. I will give you some informations about
myself.

First of all, I’m go to talk about me. Im from Catalonia, more especially in Cornellà. I
live with my fathers and my 2 siblings. My brother is 7 and my sister is 11 so I am the
older. We don’t have a pets. I live in Sant Ildefons since I was born.

So, how am I? Well, I love paint and draw. Too, I like doing a variety of sports like
basketball, futbol, swiming… Last summer I go to a summer camp for to play hockey,
was great! I have other hobbys to, like learn languages. I am actually learning french
and I talk english and arab.

In the question of my personality, my friends says I am kind and outgoing. I thing Im

hard-working and sportif. After finish my studys, I want be a sport coach and work
whit childrens. I am responsible, creative and more things. My father is from Morocco
and my mother is from Barcelona.

I don’t have some experience working as a monitor but I have recently begin a
monitor course. I thing I would be a good candidate why I like staying with childrens
and do funny activities with they. I would appreciate the oportunity to work with you
this sumer and win some money. Moreover, I’m interested for meeting new people
and gaining work experience in this field.

I’ll wait for your answer! Have a good day!

Sara