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Written by
Brian Connolly
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1 INT. LUXURIOUS HOUSE - ENTRANCEWAY - DAY 1
Mary watches him disappear into the kitchen. She admires the
home’s entranceway, gazes up at the silver turtles migrating
along the staircase wall. They lead to a wide painting of a
coastal town sunset.
2 DINING ROOM 2
Mary pours the champagne and tops them with orange juice.
David enters the room and places their food down. He pulls
out the chair for her to sit down.
MARY
(confused, upset)
The painting. It’s gone.
2.
MARY
The frozen ice. The sunset.
Mary’s stare lingers. There’s is only her and the empty wall.
David places his hand atop Mary’s left hand; a wedding band
and a steel bracelet.
3 KITCHEN 3
MARY
(convincing herself)
This isn’t perfect.
DAVID
Is it close? Close enough?
David and Mary lie in bed. She turns away to face the edge.
He sits and leans up over her concerned.
MARY
(emotionless)
This isn’t good enough.
DAVID
What’s wrong my love?
MARY
(upset)
Too much of this isn’t right.
Mary throws the blanket off and begins to gather her clothing
while sitting up. She uses them to cover up and make her way
to the bathroom.
3.
DAVID
(short temper)
Hey, where do you think you’re
going!?
5 MASTER BATHROOM 5
Mary is dressed and sitting atop the toilet lid. She stares
down at her hands as they tremble in her lap. She spins her
wedding band, then bracelet.
6 MASTER BEDROOM 6
DAVID
(slow, serious)
What were you doing in there?
Mary averts her eyes, shoves him out of the way to pass.
MARY
(defensive)
Nothing.
DAVID
(serious)
You lie.
DAVID
(slow, serious)
Why must you lie, all the time? I
thought you had told me everything?
Everything you’ve done.
4.
She pulls out a small silver remote. Hits the main button.
David removes his hand from the door suddenly and grabs his
head in agony -- a silent tone brings him to his knees.
Mary quickly exits the room and slams the door shut.
She fixes her now grayish hair and adjusts her pantsuit while
regaining her composure. She’s aged twenty years.
Mary notices the Woman. Mary then looks to her right to see
the MAN (20s) dressed in black in front of a similar door.
MARY
(exhausted)
Simulation unsuccessful.
WOMAN
(emotionless)
Opening log of faulty fragments --
MARY
-- Cancel, cancel.
WOMAN
Done.
(watches Mary)
The code was never built to
withhold such radical
modifications...
MARY
(under her breath)
I was never strong enough.
WOMAN
These improper fragments, the
variabilities will prove too great
to overcome.
MARY
(frustrated)
How many other rooms have reported
fragment issues?
WOMAN
Ninety-nine percent have resulted
in, unfortunate fatalities for
participants.
MARY
(surprised, intrigued)
One, one-percent? Who are they?
Which floor?
WOMAN
Sixth floor. A man, James Cooper.
FADE OUT.