TASK ACHIVEMENT: SUDAH MEMENUHI ATURAN KATA, MANTAP SEKALI, SUDAH

MENJAWAB SOAL, YAKNI SURAT MENYARANKAN LIURAN DAN ESSAY MANFAAT DAN
KETIDAK MANFAATAN.

CHOERENCE AND COHENSION: HATI2 JANGAN LUPA BELI KOMA SEBELUM MEMULAI
IDE BARU.

VERB AND GRAMMAR: PENATAANN KATA BS DIPERBAIKI DGN KOREKSI YANG

SUDAH SAYA BERIKAN.

OVERALL SUDAH OKE, INGAT, MENJAWAB SESUAI DENGAN PERTANYAAN YG

DIBERIKAN THEN YOU WILL BE FINE.

MUST REMEMBER: DI PENUTUP SURAT ADA BEST REGARDS DAN NAMA KAMU DI
BAWAHNYA.

YPUR SCORE : 5
 WRITING TASK 1

Your best friend is planning a trip to a foreign country and has asked for your advice.
Write an email to your friend to:

 Recommend a city in the foreign country that you think would be perfect for their
visit.
 Share personal experiences or stories about the city to support your
recommendation.
 Provide information on the local attractions, food, and cultural experiences they
shouldn't miss.

Dear brother Johnson

Hi how are you brother Johnson?, I hope you fine I am (KASIH KOMA SETELAH FINE,
SEBELUM I AM) writing this latter for you, because I support your traveling in foreign I am
going to explain you the best place in Australia, the first you fisit In Marlboro because there's
much food, you can eats halal food like nasi padang and drink ice tie from java, but if you if you
want to drink non halal like bir you can ask the securty around Marlboro city, so they give you
the address bir shop.

Hi, how are you, Brother Johnson? I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to you to
express my support for your travels abroad. I want to share some information about the best
places in Australia.

Firstly, I recommend visiting Marlboro because there is a wide variety of food available. You can
enjoy halal options such as nasi padang and try the famous ice tea from Java. If you prefer non-
halal options like beer, you can inquire with the security personnel in Marlboro city, and they can
provide you with the address of a beer shop.

You can also come to cina Town because there story about travelers from China come to
Australia, and stay there forever, because they like Australia. If you want to know much about
story the China Town, you ask one of the man in there, because the old man in there much
know about it.

Another interesting place to visit is China Town. There are stories about travelers from China
who came to Australia and decided to stay there permanently because they fell in love with the
country. If you want to learn more about the stories of China Town, you can ask one of the
elderly men there, as they are likely to have a wealth of information.

In Australia gives you service for your traveling, so more asking what you don't know about
around you can asking with Google, securty people around, and police.

Australia offers excellent services for travelers, so if there's anything you are unsure about, feel
free to ask Google, the security personnel around, or the police.
If you want to know more information like night attraction you can download in Play store name
is "my Australia" you know all about Australia like location food, party, night club and best
beach.

For more information on night attractions, you can download an app from the Play Store called
"My Australia." It provides details about the location, food options, parties, nightclubs, and the
best beaches in Australia.

Have nice travel brother Johnson !

Have a fantastic trip, Brother Johnson!

Best regards,

Reid (JANGAN LUPA KASI NAMA KAMU YA DI PENUTUP)

Words: 221
 WRITING TASK 2

In many countries, the number of people working from home is increasing. Discuss the
advantages and disadvantages of working from home.

Now many country gives their people work from home like now because covid so I am going to
explain anvantagis and disadvantages

First advantages, The worker be come to easy to manage their time, because doesn't much
using their time like ini office, example from Jakarta to Bandung using car, and can work
around their family, so their family happy because not using much cost like put MRT cart, not
lunch restoran, so we can take vocation in Bali and work from Bali, like we see up to now many
tourist from Australia, America, German, england and others country, stay in Bali until tree years
because their job work from home, example wife work from home make she happy because not
far from this child and hasband so I agree work from home because make me using much cosh
like mush using go car, train, and using taxi.

So I am going to explain disadvantagis , we can't meet our friend work, manager, and partner,
so we not make the ekonomic be come low. Why? Because just little people using taxi, gojek,
train, airplane, and other. There also nothing worker lunch in restoran. That make owner sach
taxi owner, airplane owner can't pay the tax to government.

Work from home we can't full focus because there family in home like mom, papi, brother, sister,
and child, my be when you still working from home your mother playing Sumba music, so make
you not focus in your job.

And work from home not good for health because we always in front of computer, if every day
we work from home one day the sick will come.

Thank you very much 🙏🏻 ENGGA USAH BLG MAKASI YA

Words: 280

KOREKSIAN DI BAWA H YA
Corrected essay:

Now, many countries allow their people to work from home, especially due to COVID-19. I am
going to explain the advantages and disadvantages.

Firstly, let's explore the advantages. Working from home makes it easy for employees to
manage their time, as they don't have to spend much time commuting like in the office. For
example, commuting from Jakarta to Bandung by car takes time, and working from home allows
individuals to spend more time with their families. This reduces family expenses, such as MRT
fare and restaurant lunches. Some people even take vacations in Bali while working remotely.
We have observed many tourists from Australia, America, Germany, England, and other
countries staying in Bali for up to three years because of their remote jobs. For instance, a wife
working from home can be close to her child and husband, bringing happiness. I support
working from home as it reduces costs associated with commuting by car, train, or taxi.

Now, let's discuss the disadvantages. One major drawback is the inability to meet friends,
colleagues, managers, and partners, leading to a decline in economic activity. This is because
fewer people use services like taxis, Gojek, trains, airplanes, and others. Additionally, there are
fewer workers having lunch in restaurants, impacting the income of restaurant owners, taxi
owners, and airplane owners, thereby reducing tax revenue for the government.

Another disadvantage is the challenge of maintaining focus while working from home, with
family members like mom, dad, siblings, and children creating distractions. For instance, when
working from home, your mother playing Sumba music may hinder your concentration.
Moreover, working from home is not good for health, as constant exposure to a computer
screen may lead to health issues. If one works from home every day, sickness may eventually
occur.

In conclusion, while working from home offers benefits such as time management and family
proximity, it also presents challenges like reduced economic activity and potential health issues.
It is crucial to strike a balance and consider the long-term effects of remote work on individuals
and society.