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You have good contextual understanding in all qstns. Good, keep it up!

Its good you attempted all 20 qstn. Keep it up.


The content of most of your answers is very good ( Q.3,6,7,13-17). There are
some small issues like no. of points is less in Q. 2,4 , Explaination of points'
can be improved in Q.5,9. Subparts have not been well addressed in Q.18,20.
Thus, improve on all these aspects. Try to add one extra effort in form of
map, diagram,way forward,govt scheme,case study or current aspect related
to topic in every qstn to get half or one extra marks and further inc your
score.
You can inc. no. of points in your ans usings SPEED-AT approach
( Socio,pol,eco, envrtal,data,administrative and technology). Also add
specific events.. data.. current examples and case studies to add value to
ans and make them more specific.

Your language is lucid and handwriting is also legible.

Your most of the intros are fine. Some of the definitions you have written are
good some generic. So improve this.
Your intro should be of a crisp single para with max 4-5 lines addressing KEY
DEMAND of the qstn. It could be a definition, data,report etc. Write standard
definitions whereever possible.

Structure and presentation of your ans is good. IBC format is visible. You
have some good maps and diagram. Continue it. You have underlined key
words, which is good. You have given Subheadings but put them in box too
to further highlight them. Always give subheadings before starting the main
body.
Always Draw diagrams and maps in geography qstn. Put your diagram/
maps within box and label them too.

Your conclusions are fine. Improve them.


A good conclusion should be of one para of 2-3 lines and forward looking
showing significance or consequence of the event asked in qstn.
fine intro,
instead you
can
mention
about his
political
philosophy!

good
specific
points!
good,
major
points
covered!
fine intro,
instead you
can mention
the reason for
launch of
movement!

good
point

what about
QIM?
good
points!

also mention
some imp
points like
parallel govt,
massive
violenece..

instead
mention
outcome of
movement!
not relevant
here!
fine intro,
instead
mention
world order
before ww2!

Good
points!
good, major
points
mentioned!
combine in
one line!

plz mention better


points! give key
point of bilateral
resolution of
Kashmir dispute!
not much relevant
points, add major
points like nuclear
confidence
building process..
etc
Good
Definition!

good points!

mention some limitation of of


economic empowerment only..
good points,
link these to
SS, how SS will
ensure all this..
good,
comprehe
nsive
definition!

good points, but


all are one
dimensional
only.. cultural. so
add other
dimensions too.
good
points!

good
diverse
points!

good
Conclusion!
fine intro,
make it
specific, add
some data
or report!

good
points!
good diverse
points , but add
socio pol eco
aspects also!

how?
mention
steps!
fine
Definition!

good
points!
fine points,
add specific
points like
recently
launched
nagarvan
scheme!

generic, plz
make it specific,
mention sdg, or
some case
study!
combine into
one! mention
some
features of IT
industry!

good
points!
good points!
also tell how
globalisation
has done all
this!
fine
Definition!

good
points, but
add some
more
points!
good
points!

mention
some
specific
points!
fine
intro..

good
points!
good
points and
good
examples!
effort!

add some
more points
of jain
architecture!
good you
mentioned
later
good significance of
relevant this
points! architecture!
fine intro..

good, major
policies
mentioned!
good
points!
major
policies
mentioned!

good
points!
good
intro..

good
points!
Good
specific
points!
good
specific
content!

good, all major points


covered and explained well!
good you defined
both key terms but
no need to go in
this detail!
good
relevant
points!
good
specific
points!

good you
mentioned
reverse
relationship
also!

good effort!
good
definition!

good
points!
good
specific
points and
examples!
you can also
mention role of
sanskritisation
globalisation
etc on caste
system!
mention
role of
caste
good
based
points!
political
parties
and
pressure
groups
good
definition!
but try to
write it in
single para
only..

this can be
added here!
good
points!

put
Subheadings
in box to
better
highlight
them!

good
specific
points!
good
points!

good
Conclusion!
good
comprehensive
definition!

good
points!
good
effort!
Good
points!

good
points!
good major
regions
mentioned!

good effort
first define a rift
valley!

give a Subheading, formation of rift valley..

good you
mentioned
key terms..
good
diagrams..
good,
formation of
rift valley
explained
well..

Add more about ARV, its


plates involved, extension
etc..
good you
mentioned
some data,
but also
mention
source of the
data..

good
specific
points!
good point!

good points!

how it is a
political factor?
good
points!

good
points!

in problem type qstn


always provide some
way forward!

also mention some Govt schemes in this regards..


define a
plateau first!

good, but this is


only one process of
plateau formation..
mention other 3
processes also..
good

what you are


mentioning is
entire
peninsular
plateau not
deccan
plateau,
deccan
plateau is a
section of
peninsular
plateau..
good
points!

good
points!

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