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2 GS1 - Shubham
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You have good contextual understanding in all qstns. Good, keep it up!
Your most of the intros are fine. Some of the definitions you have written are
good some generic. So improve this.
Your intro should be of a crisp single para with max 4-5 lines addressing KEY
DEMAND of the qstn. It could be a definition, data,report etc. Write standard
definitions whereever possible.
Structure and presentation of your ans is good. IBC format is visible. You
have some good maps and diagram. Continue it. You have underlined key
words, which is good. You have given Subheadings but put them in box too
to further highlight them. Always give subheadings before starting the main
body.
Always Draw diagrams and maps in geography qstn. Put your diagram/
maps within box and label them too.
good
specific
points!
good,
major
points
covered!
fine intro,
instead you
can mention
the reason for
launch of
movement!
good
point
what about
QIM?
good
points!
also mention
some imp
points like
parallel govt,
massive
violenece..
instead
mention
outcome of
movement!
not relevant
here!
fine intro,
instead
mention
world order
before ww2!
Good
points!
good, major
points
mentioned!
combine in
one line!
good points!
good
diverse
points!
good
Conclusion!
fine intro,
make it
specific, add
some data
or report!
good
points!
good diverse
points , but add
socio pol eco
aspects also!
how?
mention
steps!
fine
Definition!
good
points!
fine points,
add specific
points like
recently
launched
nagarvan
scheme!
generic, plz
make it specific,
mention sdg, or
some case
study!
combine into
one! mention
some
features of IT
industry!
good
points!
good points!
also tell how
globalisation
has done all
this!
fine
Definition!
good
points, but
add some
more
points!
good
points!
mention
some
specific
points!
fine
intro..
good
points!
good
points and
good
examples!
effort!
add some
more points
of jain
architecture!
good you
mentioned
later
good significance of
relevant this
points! architecture!
fine intro..
good, major
policies
mentioned!
good
points!
major
policies
mentioned!
good
points!
good
intro..
good
points!
Good
specific
points!
good
specific
content!
good you
mentioned
reverse
relationship
also!
good effort!
good
definition!
good
points!
good
specific
points and
examples!
you can also
mention role of
sanskritisation
globalisation
etc on caste
system!
mention
role of
caste
good
based
points!
political
parties
and
pressure
groups
good
definition!
but try to
write it in
single para
only..
this can be
added here!
good
points!
put
Subheadings
in box to
better
highlight
them!
good
specific
points!
good
points!
good
Conclusion!
good
comprehensive
definition!
good
points!
good
effort!
Good
points!
good
points!
good major
regions
mentioned!
good effort
first define a rift
valley!
good you
mentioned
key terms..
good
diagrams..
good,
formation of
rift valley
explained
well..
good
specific
points!
good point!
good points!
how it is a
political factor?
good
points!
good
points!
good
points!