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Writ 2 - Revision Matrix
Writ 2 - Revision Matrix
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connection to the history described the reliable, primary source Gilbert’s evidence is
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articles and the history discipline; discipline. It explains how
evidence they used, history needs to be the usage of credible
but what does this tell supported by credible sources are paramount to
us about the materials to construct history, and it builds
disciplines? accurate narratives of credibility and solidifies
the past. In the field of her argument.
history, the authenticity
of a source is
paramount, as it
provides direct evidence
of historical events.
Gilbert, by relying on
these dependable
sources, is able to
effectively establish her
argument and
credibility. The
materials used by
Gilbert enhance the
credibility of her
r esearch and solidifies
her argument about
fashion history.
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connection to the described the discipline requires mistake as the history
engineering discipline structure of the reliable, scientific discipline of not
articles and the scholarly literature as explaining the evidence
evidence they used, their evidence, since it and how it connects to the
but what does this tell serves as a foundation engineering discipline,
us about the to explain technological adding this sentence
disciplines? advancements. One of ensures a further
engineering endevours connection to my thesis
is developing practical and overall engineering
solutions to problems, discipline.
which rely on empirical
data, experimentation,
and scientific literature.
By utilizing these
credible sources,
engineers ensure
accuracy and credibility
on their research,
facilitating the
advancement of science.