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Allison Bochino
Writing 2
In this reflection, I will explain the different aspects of writing I’ve had the opportunity to
grow, reflecting on how Writing Project One allowed me to learn of genre conventions and their
universal usage throughout different genres. Following this, I will also address what I’ve learned
from Writing Project 2, an extension of the first Writing Project, enabling me to apply my novel
knowledge of genre conventions for my own purposes of creating a news article. Finally, I will
talk about my last assignment, the Writing Portfolio, in which I learned the significance of
revision and deeper reflection in my writing. Throughout all of this, I will ultimately address
what I’ve learned from these Writing Projects holistically and how I’ve come about the
conclusions of my own writing I’ve arrived at towards the end of this quarter.
Writing Project 1 saw me rigorously researching the different genre conventions of
research articles in academia, along with the respective discourse communities. Going into the
project, I’d only a vague description in mind of what a genre even was. In retrospect, the topic of
genre was truly one of the overarching themes of Writing 2 this quarter. In one of the first
readings introduced to us in the quarter, Bickmore delivers a concrete definition of genre: “A
genre is a typified utterance that appears in a recurrent situation.”1 Before seeing this definition
of genre, I didn’t really specifically know what a genre was. Sure I could give a few examples of
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Lisa Bickmore, “Genre in the Wild: Understanding Genre within Rhetorical (Eco)Systems,”Open English
LCC, August 1, 2016, accessed March 17, 2024,
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https://pressbooks.pub/openenglishatslcc/chapter/genre-in-the-wild-understanding-genre-within-rhetorical
-ecosystems/.
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the really popular genres, like fiction for example, but genres came broadly in all types of forms,
both in writing and in other types of communication. I hadn’t even considered a book to be a
genre itself before I learned how a genre was formally defined in writing. But really, a genre is
In Writing 2 specifically, the first Writing Project was mainly devoted to academic
genres. This meant analyzing and describing the genre of researcharticles. Around this time is
when we learnt of genre conventions and discourse communities. Melzer defines a discourse
community as having the following five properties: “A broadly agreed upon set of common
mechanisms to provide information and feedback, one or more genres that help further the goals
of the discourse community, [and] a specific lexis (specialized language).”2 Using this definition
of a discourse community, I could better analyze the genre conventions used between the
researchers of the 2 disciplines I’d chosen to research for my Writing Project 1: Economics and
Education. In this project, I closely analyzed the different genre conventions used in the genre of
writing research articles, and how the usage of these specific conventions expedited the process
of efficiently communicating ideas to others in the same discourse community. Most notably, I
focused on the differences between the audience and the types of evidence used between the 2
disciplines. Overarchingly, my primary goal with Writing Project 1 was to demonstrate how
Economists used data-heavy models to propel their quantitative research, in contrast to how
Throughout the process of this project, I learned how to analyze complex research,
disassembling the paper to learn: what the author's purpose was with the paper, how they went
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Dan Melzer, “Understanding Discourse Communities,” essay, inWriting Spaces: Reading on Writing,
vol. 3 (Parlos Press, n.d.), 102.
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about writing the paper, making use of genre conventions specific to their purpose, and what
audience they had in mind when writing their paper. I would use this newfound knowledge of
In the following Writing Project 2, I had to translate my choice of research papers to a
different non-academic genre. I figured the best way to go about this was to publish my very own
newspaper about the economic research of secondary education. Though I learned about
discourse communities and genres in the previous project, I was finally able to apply them
myself when creating my translation. Firstly, of course, I needed to research the specific genre
conventions of newspaper articles and how they were relevant to the purposes of delivering
news. Primarily referencing BBC Bitesize’s resources on writing newspaper articles, I concluded
that my news article would just deliver the highlights of the research article as concisely as
possible.3I found the translation itself to be relativelytrivial, as the newspaper was basically just
summarizing the main inferences made by the economists towards the end of their paper on the
effects of work during secondary school on later employment outcomes. The majority of my
growth in writing through Writing Project 2 came in the latter part of the project, the
metacognitive reflection. I think the process of criticizing oneself is naturally tedious as it can
often be hard to find strengths and weaknesses in one's own writing. I do ultimately find the
process to be enriching once the writer has concluded their reflection as it sometimes allows a
breakthrough in their writing. By this, I mean that it allows the writer to find their own style of
writing. I found my style of writing to change dramatically over the course of Writing 2. I now
find myself to be a lot more assertive in my writing, rather than implying some ideas in my
writing, I can now confidently express them. A common example of this change is in the form of
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“Writing a News Story - News Writing - GCSE Journalism (CCEA) Revision - BBC Bitesize,”BBC News,
n.d., accessed March 16, 2024, https://www.bbc.co.uk/bitesize/guides/zpmq9qt/revision/3.
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my thesis. I often found my argument to be implied in the thesis, but this time around I make an
effort to explicitly state my argument, even using the first person at times to emphasize my point.
Overall, Writing Project 2 offered me a chance to reflect on my writing, and in turn, revise my
work. The greatest revisions, however, were made during my portfolio project.
The revision process involving the portfolio project was comprehensive, covering all
types of revisions from the global to the local scale. Most of the revisions I made throughout the
writing portfolio revision were in the form of modifying my analysis and reasoning. I found my
thesis and evidence to be strong as is, if not slightly lacking, but my analysis was substantially
lacking in quality. Though my analysis did explain how my evidence supported my overarching
argument, it didn’t elaborate enough. A lot of the space used in my essays were essentially
wasted conveying relatively trivial ideas in larger phrases. Hence, a major part of my revision for
this portfolio project was cutting down on the word count to integrate more ideas in fewer words.
A smaller, but still significant amount of the revision was devoted to the minor grammatical
errors. These errors often made my paper less smoother to read and at times even awkward. I
especially focused on errors made towards the start of the paper, as these errors often slow down
more writing strategies and skills to further bolster my writing and give it more meaning.
Between the 2 Writing Projects and Portfolio assignment, I’ve learned how to write for specific
audiences and how to integrate specific conventions to communicate my ideas more effectively
to others in my discourse community. I’ve also learned how to be more critical of my writing and
improve upon reflection. Lastly, I’ve also learned how to revise my papers to address issues
ranging from as minor as a spelling error, to as large as my argument or line of reasoning itself.
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Bibliography
Bickmore, Lisa. “Genre in the Wild: Understanding Genre within Rhetorical (Eco)Systems.”
Open English SLCC. Open English @ SLCC, August 1,2016. Last modified August 1, 2016.
https://pressbooks.pub/openenglishatslcc/chapter/genre-in-the-wild-understanding-genre-within-r
hetorical-ecosystems/.
Melzer, Dan. “Understanding Discourse Communities.” Essay. InWriting Spaces: Reading on
“ Writing a News Story - News Writing - GCSE Journalism (CCEA) Revision - BBC Bitesize.”
BBC News. BBC, n.d. Accessed March 16, 2024.
https://www.bbc.co.uk/bitesize/guides/zpmq9qt/revision/3.