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Your claim or topic:

Tom Willson Elementary school lunches should be better tasting and higher quality.
1. Some good, others bad- Why can’t they all be the same?
2.More tasty healthy foods and variety so students can pick.
3.School should provide snacks in case students forget them.
Paragraph 1
Topic sentence: Reasons to support your claim. Evidence to back up the reason given
1. Some good, others bad- Why can’t they all be the same?
Body Sentences Reasons to support your claim. Evidence to back up the reason given
2. It’s wasteful if the students only pick the tasty selections.
3.The disgusting food will be leftover and untouched.
4. An equal number of students will choose both food types of they are good.
5.There will be less waste overall.
Paragraph 2
Topic sentence: Reasons to support your claim. Evidence to back up the reason given
1. More tasty healthy foods and variety so students can pick.
Body Sentences Evidence or supporting details.
2.Balenced meal with treats and healthy food.
3.School might get in trouble if students get sick from unhealthy food.
4. Students should be offered free water which is a healthy drink.
5. Somes students don’t like milk. chocolate milk is unhealthy to drink every day.
Paragraph 3
Topic sentence: Reasons for the change
1. School should provide snacks in case students forget them.
Body Sentences Evidence or supporting details.
2. Students might get really hungry without snacks.
3.Some students come to school without breakfast.
4.Students sometimes forget their snacks.
5.Teachers might get mad if students forget snacks. They might email students’ parents.
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