HERMAN G.

BARCELONA March 2, 2024

MBA-NT Professor: Dr. Alfie Maria
Custodio
BA 312 Operations Management

CRITICAL ANALYSIS
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Title : “Challenges in Quality Assurance: A Ten-Year Journey”

Authors: Jenny Mochtar and Gan Shu San
Petra Christian University, Jl. Siwalankerto 121–131,
Surabaya 60236, Indonesia.

The paper emphasizes the vital role of academic quality in private

universities like Petra Christian University. It examines the university's
decade-long efforts in implementing internal and external quality
assurance practices to enhance educational standards.
The research reveals that academic quality, which encompasses
students' knowledge, skills, and abilities, is closely linked to both
internal and external quality assurance measures. Internal practices
involve the institution's policies to monitor and improve educational
quality, while external measures ensure quality standards are met by
external parties.
While Petra Christian University has made progress in internal quality
assurance, challenges from technological advancements like the Fourth
Industrial Revolution and Society 5.0 remain. The study underscores the
need for continuous assessment and improvement in higher education,
emphasizing the importance of adapting to changing societal and
technological landscapes to ensure efficiency and maintain high
educational standards.
HERMAN G. BARCELONA March 2, 2024
MBA-NT Professor: Dr. Alfie Maria
Custodio
BA 312 Operations Management

CRITICAL ANALYSIS
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1. The article thoroughly explores how Petra

Christian University has navigated its quality
assurance efforts over the course of a decade.
It covers a wide range of topics, including the
challenges the university has faced, the
solutions it has implemented, and its future
plans. This comprehensive coverage gives
readers a complete picture of the university's
quality assurance journey, which can be
valuable for both professionals and researchers
in the field.

2. The research goals are clearly stated, making it

STRENGTHS easy for readers to understand the study's
purpose. By outlining the aim of investigating the
challenges encountered by the university in its
quality assurance journey, the article
establishes a clear focus for the research,
making it more organized and relevant.

3. The article provides a detailed explanation of the

research methodology used, including where
the data came from and how it was analyzed.
This transparency enhances the study's
credibility by helping readers fully grasp the
research process. Additionally, it makes it easier
for others to replicate or build upon the study in
future research endeavors.

1. A notable weakness of the study is its limited

generalizability stemming from its sole focus on
Petra Christian University. The exclusivity of the
case study restricts the applicability of its
WEAKNESSES
findings to other institutions. A broader sample
encompassing diverse universities would enrich
the study's insights, augmenting its external
validity and practical relevance.
HERMAN G. BARCELONA March 2, 2024
MBA-NT Professor: Dr. Alfie Maria
Custodio
BA 312 Operations Management

CRITICAL ANALYSIS
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2. While the article identifies challenges and

discusses implemented solutions, it lacks critical
analysis of their effectiveness. A deeper
exploration of potential drawbacks or
unintended consequences of the solutions could
enhance the study's depth and provide nuanced
insights for improvement. Incorporating critical
reflections would enrich the scholarly discourse
on quality assurance practices in higher
education.

3. The presentation of data in the article could be

enhanced for clarity and accessibility.
Integrating visual aids such as tables or figures
could facilitate the comprehension of complex
information, thereby improving the readability
and impact of the article. Clear and organized
data presentation is imperative for effectively
conveying the study's findings to readers.

1. One significant drawback of the study is that it

focuses solely on Petra Christian University,
limiting the generalizability of its findings to other
similar institutions. By broadening the scope to
include a more diverse range of universities, the
study could offer richer insights that are
applicable to a wider context, thereby increasing
its relevance and practical utility.
STRUCTURE
2. Although the article identifies challenges and
proposes solutions, it lacks a thorough analysis
of how effective these solutions are. Exploring
potential downsides or unintended
consequences of the proposed solutions would
add depth to the study and provide valuable
insights for improvement. Including critical
reflections would enrich the academic
HERMAN G. BARCELONA March 2, 2024
MBA-NT Professor: Dr. Alfie Maria
Custodio
BA 312 Operations Management

CRITICAL ANALYSIS
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discussion surrounding quality assurance

practices in higher education.

3. The article could improve its data presentation

to make it clearer and more accessible to
readers. Utilizing visual aids such as tables or
figures would help simplify complex information,
making it easier for readers to understand and
engage with the content. Ensuring that the data
is presented in a clear and organized manner is
essential for effectively conveying the study's
findings.

1. While the critical review and reflection method

chosen aligns well with the research question,
considering other methods such as surveys or
interviews could deepen our understanding and
strengthen the study's methodology.

2. While the data collection and analysis methods

appear reliable, providing more detailed
explanations of the specific steps and
techniques would enhance transparency and
reproducibility. Clearly outlining how data was
RESEARCH gathered and analyzed would bolster the study's
METHODOLOGY credibility and influence.

3. The article acknowledges certain constraints,

such as its focus on a single institution and
potential biases in retrospectively examining
past data. It's crucial to bear these limitations in
mind when interpreting the study's findings and
applying them to different contexts. Additionally,
discussing strategies to mitigate these
limitations would improve the study's rigor and
practical relevance.
HERMAN G. BARCELONA March 2, 2024
MBA-NT Professor: Dr. Alfie Maria
Custodio
BA 312 Operations Management

CRITICAL ANALYSIS
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Recommendations:

Incorporating comparative analysis with other

institutions or industry benchmarks could provide a
more comprehensive understanding of Petra Christian
University's performance and identify areas for further
improvement.

To enhance the rigor of data collection and analysis,

the researchers should consider incorporating external
stakeholder perspectives, such as student feedback or
accreditation reports, to validate and complement
internal observations. Furthermore, integrating
quantitative data, such as performance metrics or
satisfaction surveys, could provide a more objective
assessment of quality assurance practices.

Providing a more thorough discussion of potential

biases and limitations, along with strategies to mitigate
them, would enhance the credibility and transparency
of the study. Additionally, considering alternative data
sources or methodologies to address gaps in historical
records could strengthen the validity of findings.

1. To make the data clearer and easier to

understand, it would be helpful to include visual
aids like tables or figures. These visuals can
help readers interpret complex information more
easily, improving the overall readability and
DATA AND impact of the article.
RESULTS
2. While the authors' explanation of the data
seems reasonable, taking a closer look at other
possible explanations and factors that could
affect the results would add depth to the
discussion. Considering different viewpoints and
interpretations would make the study more
HERMAN G. BARCELONA March 2, 2024
MBA-NT Professor: Dr. Alfie Maria
Custodio
BA 312 Operations Management

CRITICAL ANALYSIS
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rigorous and provide a more detailed

understanding of the findings.

3. The results seem trustworthy based on the

methods used. However, conducting additional
studies to confirm the findings or comparing
data from different sources could further validate
the results and enhance the study's credibility.
This would strengthen the internal validity and
reliability of the research.

Recommendations:

Incorporating visual aids, such as charts or diagrams,

to complement the narrative description could enhance
the presentation of data and facilitate better
understanding for readers. Additionally, providing
summaries or key takeaways at strategic points within
the text may help readers navigate complex
information more effectively.

To enrich data interpretation, the authors should

consider incorporating diverse perspectives from
stakeholders, such as faculty, students, and external
evaluators. Engaging in reflexivity and acknowledging
subjective biases could also enhance the robustness
and credibility of interpretations.

1. The discussion adequately explores what the

findings mean and looks at other possible
explanations. However, going deeper into
DISCUSSIONS potential limitations and future research
AND directions could make the discussion better.
CONCLUSIONS Also, considering different viewpoints and
admitting uncertainties would make the study
stronger and help us understand the topic
better.
HERMAN G. BARCELONA March 2, 2024
MBA-NT Professor: Dr. Alfie Maria
Custodio
BA 312 Operations Management

CRITICAL ANALYSIS
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2. The conclusions make sense based on what

was found and answer the original research
question. But they could be stronger by talking
more about what the findings mean for real-life
practices and policies. Also, discussing where
future research could go based on what we've
learned would make the conclusions more
complete and important for future studies.

Recommendations:

Strengthening the discussion by integrating relevant

theoretical frameworks or empirical studies could
enhance the theoretical contributions of the article and
provide a more nuanced understanding of quality
assurance challenges in higher education.

Providing actionable recommendations based on the

identified challenges and lessons learned would offer
practical guidance for universities navigating similar
quality assurance issues. Additionally, outlining
avenues for future research or areas requiring further
investigation could enrich the conclusions and
stimulate scholarly discourse.