Report: Hashir

Hashir
by IPE Pakistan

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3,100 550 50 2 min 12 sec 4 min 13 sec
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Score Writing Issues

26 100 59 41
Issues left Critical Advanced

This text scores better than 26%

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Writing Issues
59 Correctness
14 Misspelled words
3 Incorrect verb forms
10 Wrong or missing prepositions
2 Confused words
10 Determiner use (a/an/the/this, etc.)
6 Faulty subject-verb agreement
1 Pronoun use

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2 Improper formatting
4 Comma misuse within clauses
7 Incorrect noun number

3 Clarity
3 Wordy sentences

Unique Words 42%

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Rare Words 20%

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words.

Word Length 4.5

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Sentence Length 11
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Hashir
Task 1

Question

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Your family is going to move to another town. Write a letter to the Principal of a
local school asking if they will accept your son. Describe his academic
achievements and scope of interests.
You do NOT need to write any address.
You should write at least 150 words.

Answer

Dear principal,
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I think you are good. Sir my family is going to move to another town and i want
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to admission at your school so tell us about this school and give is information.
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The other thing is my son have very achiements and have interest in studies so i
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am writing this letter to you to give admission to my son he is very intteligent. I
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think you will accept my son. My son is very good in manners. His writing is very
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fast. He is very cute and have great experinece.He is very bright student. His
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recent class is class V . and i want to get his admission in class VI.
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Please let me know the proceduresof admission and whom we can contact for
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this process and also tell us about admission fee.
I am waiting for your reply. Thanks

Task 2

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Question

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist
knowledge of the following topic:
There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need
music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the
International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
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Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments
with examples and relevant evidence.
You should write at least 250 words.

Answer
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Most of people listen to the music. There are many different type of
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music in this world. There are different type of languages in music. eg:
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English, Urdu, Spanish, Punjabi. Most of people listen to english
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musics because it is very good for speaking in english. In pakistan
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most of people listen to punjabi musics. I like english music it give us
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opptunities how to speak in english and how to listen the music. Most
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of people like to listen the music when he/she was driving a car. Now
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every country have its own international music nowadays. The
importance of international music, which was always debatable, has
now become more controversial, with many people claiming that it is
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beneficial while other reject this notion.This essay will further
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elaborate my views for uses of music in this world. Analyzing the
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statement and explaning further, the first and the foremost reason
behind the cause is music. Another striking cause in this regard is that
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international music. Categorically discussing, it cannot be ignored
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that the main reason behind this is that music. Probing ahead, one of
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the main underlying reason is that people have craze of listening of
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music. Apart from the reason mentioned above, it can clearly above, it
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can be clearly stated that, it can be clearly stated that, why many are
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agreed of this trend. In conclusion tp the argument aforementioned,
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one can reach to a gist that the benefits of music is that time spend
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very fast. and some people indeed to ignore the music.

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1. i→I Misspelled words Correctness

2. admission → be admitted Incorrect verb forms Correctness

3. at → to Wrong or missing prepositions Correctness

4. is → us Confused words Correctness

5. the information Determiner use Correctness

(a/an/the/this, etc.)

6. have → has Faulty subject-verb Correctness

agreement

7. achiements → achievements Misspelled words Correctness

8. have → has Faulty subject-verb Correctness

agreement

9. an interest Determiner use Correctness

(a/an/the/this, etc.)

10. his studies Pronoun use Correctness

11. i→I Misspelled words Correctness

12. intteligent → intelligent Misspelled words Correctness

13. in → at Wrong or missing prepositions Correctness

14. have → has Faulty subject-verb Correctness

agreement

15. experinece → experience Misspelled words Correctness

16. . He Improper formatting Correctness

17. a very Determiner use Correctness

(a/an/the/this, etc.)

18. i→I Misspelled words Correctness

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19. proceduresof → procedures Misspelled words Correctness

20. for admission Wrong or missing prepositions Correctness

21. the admission Determiner use Correctness

(a/an/the/this, etc.)

22. own Wordy sentences Clarity

23. , and Comma misuse within clauses Correctness

24. , and Comma misuse within clauses Correctness

25. the people Determiner use Correctness

(a/an/the/this, etc.)

26. type → types Incorrect noun number Correctness

27. type → types Incorrect noun number Correctness

28. of Wrong or missing prepositions Correctness

29. english → English Misspelled words Correctness

30. musics → Incorrect noun number Correctness

music, kinds of music, pieces of music

31. english → English Misspelled words Correctness

32. of Wrong or missing prepositions Correctness

33. punjabi → Punjabi Misspelled words Correctness

34. musics → Incorrect noun number Correctness

music, kinds of music, pieces of music

35. english → English Misspelled words Correctness

36. give → gives Faulty subject-verb Correctness

agreement

37. opptunities → opportunities Misspelled words Correctness

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38. english → English Misspelled words Correctness

39. of Wrong or missing prepositions Correctness

40. have → has Faulty subject-verb Correctness

agreement

41. own Wordy sentences Clarity

42. other → others Incorrect noun number Correctness

43. . This Improper formatting Correctness

44. for → on Wrong or missing prepositions Correctness

45. the uses Determiner use Correctness

(a/an/the/this, etc.)

46. explaning → explaining, explain Misspelled words Correctness

47. the foremost Determiner use Correctness

(a/an/the/this, etc.)

48. discussing Incorrect verb forms Correctness

49. that music Determiner use Correctness

(a/an/the/this, etc.)

50. reason → reasons Incorrect noun number Correctness

51. a craze Determiner use Correctness

(a/an/the/this, etc.)

52. of → for Wrong or missing prepositions Correctness

53. of → to Wrong or missing prepositions Correctness

54. clearly Wordy sentences Clarity

55. that, Comma misuse within clauses Correctness

56. conclusion, Comma misuse within clauses Correctness

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57. tp → to Confused words Correctness

58. to Wrong or missing prepositions Correctness

59. a gist → the gist Determiner use Correctness

(a/an/the/this, etc.)

60. benefits → benefit Incorrect noun number Correctness

61. is → are Faulty subject-verb Correctness

agreement

62. to Incorrect verb forms Correctness

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