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The increasing availability of low-cost airlines now lets people travel around the

world. Some feel this is a positive development while others think it is negative
overall. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Opening:
1,The advent of budget airlines has revolutionized global travel, democratizing
accessibility to this one elusive traveling method.
Ubiquity-omnipresence/ubiquitous/omnipresent.
2,Travelling by planes, once an elusive mode of travel, has a become ubiquitous as it
democratizes accessibility to air travel, helping millions of individuals fly around the
planet.
3,Travelling around the planet has become significantly accessible as budget airlines
remove the financial challenge that once made this method of travel exclusive.
Disagree:
Some individuals claim that this tendency is highly beneficial, while others oppose it
and suggest that it has negative implications.
Body 1:

1, On the one hand, there is one benefit associated with increasing international
travel thanks to having more budget airlines. In the past, due to expensive
operations from insufficient engine designs, air travel was highly expensive, limiting
tourism activities. As the field of aerodynamics improves drastically, travelling by air
becomes much more affordable, directly boosting tourism travel. As a result, people
can explore exotic and significant cultures around the world, while contributing to
the development of these locations.
2, On the one hand, there is one benefit associated with increasing international
travel thanks to having more budget airlines. In the past, traveling across the planet
was only reserved for extremely wealthy individuals as the cost of operation of
airline was excessively expensive. Nevertheless, as budget airlines remove this
financial obstacles, people can travel for recreational purposes, enriching themselves
with cultural knowledge and benefiting the lives of local people.
3, On the one hand, there is one major benefit associated with the development that
traveling by air has become easier thanks to having more budget airlines.In the past,
traveling by air was not frequent as the cost was highly expensive, limiting
accessibility. As a result, people failed to have the chance to explore exotic cultures
around the world as the distance was too great for other methods of travelling. After
the advent of budget airlines, people can now visit any place they want, enriching
themselves and contributing to the lives of local people.

Body 2:
1, On the other hand, there is a major drawback associated with increasing air travel.
The dynamic of plane travel requires planes to burn massive amounts of fossil fuels
to give enough force to lift them up. This process is highly costly from an
environmental perspective as it releases a lot of pollutants. These pollutants are also
released very far up into the atmosphere, increasing the risk for global warming. As a
result, if traveling by air becomes too frequent, our planet could be environmentally
devastated.
2, On the other hand, there is a major drawback associated with increasing air travel.
When planes travel, they require the fast burning of massive amounts of fossil fuels
to give them the force to go up against the strong gravity of the planet. This process,
unfortunately, releases a lot of pollutants up into the atmosphere of our planet. If
people travel by air too much, our world could be heated due to the effects of these
greenhouse gases.

Vocab:
Critics: ng phan doi
Some people are being critical of--> critics
Cultural dilution: hoa loan van hoa
Pristine : hoang sơ

Conclusion:
1,In my opinion, while the concerns are valid, the benefits of low-cost airlines are
substantial. It bridges distances and enables experiences that enrich human life and
understanding. However,it is imperative that the industry, along with consumers,
take responsible steps to mitigate the negative environmental and cultural
impacts.This includes investing in sustainable aviation technology and promoting
responsible tourism practices.
2, In conclusion, the proliferation of low-cost airlines has significantly positive
aspects,such as economic growth and social benefits. Yet, it is crucial to address the
accompanying environmental and cultural challenges. Balance, therefore, is key to
ensuring that the advantages continue to outweigh the disadvantages.

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