QUESTION:

Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while
others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

OUTLINE
It is said by some people that art is an important school subject while others
argue that children learning art are wasting their time. There are valid
arguments on both sides, which will be discussed below.
BODY 1
Topic sentence:
On the one hand, there are justifiable reasons why some people
think that learning art is a wasteful use of time.
Idea 1: not a practical subject
Supporting: not help people much with making money

Idea 2: require a lot of time to master

Supporting: cannot see progress within a short time give up
 waste of time

BODY 2
Topic sentence:
On the other hand, other people suppose that students who receive
some training in art can benefit in a variety of ways
Idea 1: necessary for people’s work
Supporting: teachersdrawing to illustrate ideas
Idea 2: a way to express feelings
 Supporting: help people unwind

CONCLUSION
In conclusion, the benefits of learning art may not be easily recognized by all
people, but I think all children should be trained in the skills for the invisible
advantages discussed above.

LƯU Ý:
- phần introduction và conclusion viết đầy đủ như trong bài essay
- câu chủ đề viết đầy đủ S+V (main topic + controlling idea)
- idea và supporting có thể viết cụm từ