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as well. So, it is vital 至关重要 for the people including students to earn income
to make a living and bear the cost. According to a study conducted by HSBC
survey, there are nine from ten students in Malaysia working while studying.
One of the reasons commonly because the students need additional money for
their cost of living or for the studying fees. However, there are two sides to a
benefits from working part-time but there are some consequences 后果 to this
too. In light of this, there are many reasons to this issue namely instill 灌输
noble value 崇高的价值 , earn pocket money and unable to focus on studies.
(Thesis statement)
First and foremost, students who work part time may instill noble values
which are not taught in classroom. (Topic sentence) This noble value is
prominent 突出 especially among the students where they need to have personal
qualities to ensure high moral’s person when they grow up which to become more
meeting people from all walks of life 来自各行各业 which open one’s eyes about
experience of our colleague about particular issue, work or task that has been
to work part time which is a benefit gained by the students. (Topic sentence)
This is because they don’t need to depend on their parents for pocket money
which some of the students assume that it will reduce their parents’ burden, as
the money earned can be used to buy personal things such as books, stationaries,
uniforms and others. (Explanation 1) Other than that, the money can be saved
for the future uses which allow them to enjoy greater security. (Explanation 2)
For instance, the money can help them to prepare finance for higher education
or help in emergencies that are always unexpected. As the result, when students
earn their own money, they will learn on how to manage the money which
requires a lot of discipline. (Result) Hence, the students will value their money
and not squander 挥霍 the money for worthless things which may not give
However, this issue may also give some consequences to the students,
after classes they need to go to work whereby 由此 spending long hours working
from work as some of them work until late nights especially those working in
will make them too tired to revise or do their homework which may affect their
also give impact to the physical and mental health such as stress, fatigue,
work part time may lead to unfocussed in their studies which lead to poor