Subject English As a Second Language

Codes 0991, 0993, 0511, 0510

Skill Writing
Grade Boosters
Formal writing – Article

Introduction

Nature of the Question

1. School Related.
2. Teenagers related.
3. Globally related.

Planning

1. You must put in mind that your introduction must not exceed 2 sentences.
2. First sentence in the introduction is the generalization.

Example 1:

1.1 Nowadays schools use technology in the classroom to facilitate the learning process. However,
such a trend (as using mobile phones in class) has its own positives and downsides.

1.2 In the past (Time fixer) people didn’t have mobile phones, therefore communication was harder than
now (attack and defence technique). It might be true that mobile phones facilitated our life, however
such a device brought about many social as well as health problems.

1.3 These days, many countries not only seek fame but also financial rewards, therefore major sports
events are held. However, the organization of these events in my home country has its own downsides.

Two Body paragraphs

A minimum of 60 words

Sentence 1:

1.1 When it comes to positives of mobile phones…

1.2 ⁠To begin with, it is claimed/believed/thought that…

1.3 ⁠Looking at the bright side…

1.4 ⁠As far as the positives are concerned…

+ Explain your point.

Body Paragraph 1

Example 1:

When it comes to the positives of mobile phones, they give teenagers accessibility to get all types of
useful information either academically or socially. (The main idea) To further elaborate, students can
find answers to complicated problems in Math and Science without the need to consult a teacher. In
addition, theses smart devices render us a limitless supply of entertainment through online games that
make adolescents enjoy their time to the maximum.

Techniques used:

1. Sentence starter.
2. Cohesive device (in addition)
3. Developed idea (PEER: Point, Evidence, Explanation)
4. Rich vocabulary
5. Complex structure
6. Correct number of words

Body Paragraph 2

Example 1:

However, these digital devices are a great source of distraction to all students. In detail, it is commonly
noticed that much time as well as effort are spared on these devices, leading to the deterioration not
only in academic grades, but also in mental focus. Moreover, these pre-adults might not realize the
physical health issues such as back and elbow strains due to intensive use of these inventions.

Techniques used:

1. Sentence structure.
2. Cohesive device.
3. Developed ideas.
4. Rich vocabulary.
5. Complex structure.
6. Correct number of words.
7. The use of passive.

Conclusion

Make sure that you write two sentences.

Example 1:

All in all, I strongly believe in the word “balance” Where teenagers have to be sensible enough at the
use of digital devices. Therefore, much time and effort would be widely saved.