Nama: Muhammad Izzul Hikam

Nim : 052124623
Prodi : Ilmu Pemerintahan

TUGAS TUTORIAL KE-2

Soal Nomor 1

Perhatikan surat di bawah ini. / Please look at the letter below.

Linda Lau
123 Main Street, Anytown, CA 12345 · linda.lau@email.com

March 5, 2020

Oscar Lee
Managing Editor
Acme Graphic & Design 123
Business Rd.
Business City, NY 54321

1 Dear Ms. Lee,

I would like to invite you to attend our upcoming Liberal Arts department job networking event. The
event will be held on the afternoon of May 1, 2020. We wish to provide our graduating seniors with
an opportunity to meet business leaders in the area who may be looking for new hires who hold
degrees in the Liberal Arts.
2
The event will be held at the Cox Student Center at Northern State University, and will last about 2 to
3 hours. If you have an interest in attending or sending a company representative to meet with our
students, please let me know at your earliest convenience and I can reserve a table for you.
Thank for your time and I hope to hear from you soon.

Respectfully,

3 Linda Lau

Linda Lau
Liberal Arts Department Chair

Pertanyaan / Questions

Identifikasi bagian surat yang ditandai oleh nomor 1-3. / Please identify the part of the letter numbered
1-3.
Jawaban / Answer :

Identifikasi 1. Dear Ms Lee adalah tujuan surat ini diberikan kepada Ms Lee dan juga diperuntukkan
sebagai sipenerima surat tersebut

Identifikasi 2, adalah isi surat yang menyampaikan adanya sebuah undangan atau pengajakan
untukmenghadiri sebuah acara penting

Identifikasi 3, Linda Lau ketua department seni liberal adalah orang yang mengundang atau membuat
danjuga si pengirim surat tersebut

Identification 1. Dear Ms Lee is the purpose of this letter being given to Ms Lee and also intended as
therecipient of the letter

Identification 2, is the contents of the letter conveying an invitation or solicitation to attend an

importantevent

Identification 3, Linda Lau, head of the liberal arts department, is the person who invited or created it
and also the sender of the tetter

Soal Nomor 2

Perhatikan surat di bawah ini. / Please look at the letter below.

Bridgestone International Co.

1660 Maple Court

Kennett, MO 63857

July 21, 2021

William Reed

Purchase Manager

The Cooking Store

2175 Rivendell Drive

Mineral City, OH 44656 Dear

Mr. Reed,

Thank u for your letter of 4 july inquiring about our latest catalogue, price list, and terms of payment?

We are pleased to enclose our latest catalogue, price list, and terms of payment together with samples
of our promotional gifts. We hope you will find our prices n terms satisfactory.

I look forward to receive your order.

Yours sincerely,

Robert Brown

Robert Brown

Sales Manager

Pertanyaan / Questions

Identifikasi 3 (tiga) kesalahan pada surat di atas. / Please identify 3 (three) errors in the letter above.
Jawaban /Answer

Identifikasi kesalahan pertama adalah tidak menampilkan nama si penerima pada salam pembuka
pertama

Identifikasi kesalahan kedua adalah letak alamat si pengirim yang tidak tertata rapih dan mempunyai
banyakalamat

Identifikasi kesalahan ketiga adalah terletak pada isi surat yang menurut saya tidak sesuai karena isi
suratseperti penawaran dan terkesan pemaksaan secara tidak langsung

The first identified error is not displaying the recipient’s name in the first salutation

The identification of the second error is the location of the sender’s address which is not neatly
arranged andhas many addresses

Identification of the third error lies in the contents of the letter which in my opinion are inappropriate
because the contents of the letter are like an offer and indirectly seem to be coercive

Soal Nomor 3
Anda baru saja membeli biskuit secara online dan menerima produk yang kedaluwarsa. Tulislah sebuah
surat singkat sebanyak kurang lebih 100-200 kata yang menyatakan kekecewaan Anda dan bahwa Anda
meminta produk pengganti atau uang kembali.

You ordered some cookies online and received an expired one. Please write a body letter Please write a
body letter in approximately 100-200 words that explains your disappointment and you are asking for a
refund/exchange

Jawaban / Answer :

Dear Sellers,

My shopee order number is SPHE2853786089

After yesterday I bought biscuits at your shop, I was very disappointed because the biscuits I
receivedwere expired. I don’t know how this happened, but it seems that you and the team lacked for
notchecking the expiration date of the biscuits. Please help with a refund or replace it with a new
itemthat is not expired. Once again I am very disappointed, I hope this incident only happened to me
andthere are no complaints from other consumers. Next time, be more careful, so that all consumers
feelsatisfied and happy

Best Regards,

Izzul Hikam
Soal Nomor 4
Anda sedang menggalang dana untuk korban bencana alam dan ada seorang donatur yang memberikan
bantuan dalam jumlah besar. Tulislah sebuah email ucapan terima kasih terkait pemberian donasi
tersebut sebanyak kurang lebih 50-100 kata.

You initiate a fundraising event after a natural disaster and there is one person who donated a large
amount of money. Write a thank you email about the donation in approximately 50-100 words.

Number : 928/09/UVTB/2024
Attachments : 1 ( one ) Proposal

Subject: Raising Funds for Victims of Natural Disasters

DearPT. Gramedia Compass
In placeIn
connection with the Open University campus program to raise awareness among others, we asOpen
University Student Executives will hold a fundraiser for victims of natural disasters for victims offlash
floods in Tarogong, Garut, West Java.

This fundraiser is to help victims of natural disasters affected there.

Therefore, as a form of support, we ask for your company’s willingness to participate in
makingdonations. We also attach a detailed proposal related to this disaster fundraising activity.

Payment for participation is transferable

through a BANK account
Account number : 8962348972
On Behalf : The Open University
Bank Name : BCA

Confirmation of participation in participating can be contacted via the following telephone number
orwhatsapp 0815765183862 or you can email us at UniversitasTerbuka@gmail.com. Thus, we thank
youfor your attention and cooperation .
Yours faithfully,
Izzul Hikam
Chief Executive of the activity.