Supporting details By the end of the lesson, you will have been able to: Differetiatethesis statement, topic sentence, and supporting details form one another; Write a thesis statement effectively; Wrte a topic sentence effectively; and Write supporting details effectively Thesis statement Isthe central idea of a multiple- paragraph composition. It is one sentence summary that guides, controls, and unifies ideas when writing a paper. Remember that a thesis statement unlike a usual topic or title, uses a complete sentence. Consider the following statements: “Necessity of a college education" This is more of a title than a thesis statement “College education is important” Although it is a sentence, this statement is broad. “Getting a college degree is important because it will equip a student to become a professional in his/her chosen field and it will widen his/her perspective of the world” This is an example of an accurately written thesis statement; it has one subject and at least two arguments. Generating a thesis statement can be done through various methods Topic: Jogging Question: Why jogging is beneficial? Thesis statement: Jogging is beneficial because it positively affects physical wellbeing and mental fitness One strategy that you can use in writing a thesis statement is asking a question. Identifying the topic, ask a question that would entail multiple details. Topic: Tagaytay City Question: (1) Is tagaytay City an enthrailling city of the south? (2) Why is tagay tay City considered an enthrailling city of the south? Thesis Statement: (1) Tagaytay City is an enthrailling city of the south. (2) Tagaytay city is an enthrailling city of the south because its beautiful landsacape, amazing people, cumputuous food. The topic is “tagaytay City.” The first question which was generated may be answered by a thesis statement with implied or abstract details. Second Question on the other hand, may be answered by a thesis statement with explicit and concrete details. Note the both versions of thesis statement are acceptable. How to write an effective Thesis Statement 1. It should be written in a complete sentence with a clearly stated subject. 2. It should not be too narrow nor too broad, and it should contain at least two details. You can also try list ideas to check the scope of your topic. If you cannot list at least two details, it is too narrow; if you list too many information to be able to discuss it well, your topic is too broad. 3. Avoid an awkward thesis statement witch states the obvious. These statement usually start with the phrase “ I will tell you…”or ‘I will talk about…” 4. Enumerate details should have the same level of significance. If one of the details can e classified under another detail, you can omit it. 5. It should not state an absolute fact, because it will not present any central idea that can be developed further. It should have a point. Topic Sentence
A topic sentence guide controls, and unifles ideas in
paragraph. It develop one argument of the thesis statement. A topic sentence can either be explicitly or implicitly stated. An explicitly stated topic sentence can be placed in four different locations: at the beginning, at the middle, at the end of a paragraph, or at the start and end of a paragraph. An implied topic sentence, on the other hand, is not directly seen in a paragraph. It is up to readers to deduce what the topic sentence is. Topic: Jogging Question: Why is jogging beneficial?
Thesis Statement: Jogging is beneficial because it positively affects physical
wellbeing and mental fitness. Topic Sentence 1: Jogging positively impacts one’s physical wellness by preventing hypertension and other disease. Topic Sentence 2: Another benefit of jogging is that it maintains mental Topic: fitness Tagaytay City Question: Why Tagaytay City considered an enthralling city of the Thesis Statement: South
Tagaytay City is an enthralling city of the South because of
Topic Sentence 1: its beautiful landscape, delicious food, and amazing people. Topic Sentence 2: Tagaytay City attracts tourists with its magnificent Topic Sentence 3: landscape.
People go back to Tagaytay for its delecous food.
The warmth of the city’s amazing people is also another
reason why Tagaytay is alluring. Tips in writing an effective Topic Sentence 1. It should follow the basics already discussed in the thesis statement. a. Its must be written in a complete sentence and with a clear subject. b. It should not be phrased awkwardly and it should not state the obvious. An awkward topic sentence is characterized by sentences that start with “ I will tell you…” 2. If should contain one detail which is related to one of the details in the thesis statement. 3. It should vary in structure across paragraph. If the topic sentences are uniform throuhout your essay, they might seem monotonous to read. Varying the structure will also enable you to important parts. 4. If the composition is just one paragraph, the topic sentence should be staraight forward. Supporting details A composition is incomplete without the supporting details. These details of information necessary to better understand the main idea. They can be facts, reasons, testimonies, statistics and experiments that support the topic sentence. Arha Baliwas Jheslyn Sanchez Marlo Magtibay