Professional Documents
Culture Documents
You know New York? You need New York. You know you need unique New
York!
#1 Just because it reads well, doesn’t
mean it will be easy to say naturally
Difficult Manageable
• The best people in life are • The most successful people in
selfless, vivacious, life are both selfless and willing
courageous, and contentious. to optimize opportunities.
• My first contention rests on • My first contentions is based on
upon the sanctity of truth. the principle of honesty.
Remove all diction that is difficult to say. If you can’t say clearly three time in a
row, choose another word.
#2 Enhance your adjectives and
verbs
“Skilled authors will avoid the word ‘Said’ like it
is a disease
• Best • Superior, paramount, unsurpassed
• Stupendous, Sensational, outstanding
• Amazing
• Articulate, Well-written, studious,
• Intelligent intellectual
• Successful • Affluent, wealth, well- monied
• Rich • Stunning, ravishing, regal, a head
turner
• Beautiful • Opulence, elegance, exclusive, lavish
• Luxurious
Pro tip: Words that are seldom used are always more appreciated in a speech
You don’t want to sound like a robot, but look for verbs and adjectives in your speech that can easily replaced.
1. Hook / Introduction
2. Thesis: Why should I care? I need three reasons.
3. Reason one: Weakest
4. Reason two: Stronger
5. Reason three: Strongest
6. Conclusion: Why is it important + A call to action
Pro tip: A hook needs to be interesting enough to capture your audiences interest
-Quote
-Humorous story or antidote
-Dramatic story or antidote
-Song
-Dramatic interpretation
-Interesting fact
- “I wise man once said nothing”
- What do me and ____ have in common? We are both love bamboo and (something funny or ironic)
-No matter how the wind howls, the mountain does not bow to it
-A recent study showed public speaking is the biggest fear among adults. More than dying in a plane
crash, more than drowning, and more than going on a date with a serial killer.
#3 Organize your content well
1. Hook / Introduction
2. Thesis: Why should I care? I need three
reasons.
3. Reason one: Weakest
4. Reason two: Stronger
5. Reason three: Strongest
6. Conclusion: Why is it important + A call to action
Pro tip: Your thesis should be painfully clear.
Imagine that you won’t receive credit if your judges
can’t identify it
Thesis:
1. Hook / Introduction
2. Thesis: Why should I care? I need three reasons.
3. Reason one: Weakest
4. Reason two: Stronger
5. Reason three: Strongest
6. Conclusion: Why is it important + A call to action
Pro tip: Your reasons should
organized from least to greatest
• Smoking can cause cancer, poor oral health, and bad breathe
vs
• Smoking can cause bad breathe, poor oral health, and even cancer. 4
• Today I will strive to convince you that waking up early can help you make more
money, live a healthier lifestyle, and get more accomplished
vs
• Today I will strive to convince you that waking up early assist you in living a
healthier lifestyle, accomplishing more in your day to day tasks, and eve make you
more money.
#3 Organize your content well
1. Hook / Introduction
2. Thesis: Why should I care? I need three reasons.
3. Reason one: Weakest
4. Reason two: Stronger
5. Reason three: Strongest
6. Conclusion: Why is it important + A call to
action
Pro tip: Your Conclusion is final
chance to make an impact but..
1. You cannot present any new information at all. It will
make you appear unorganized
2. You must tell the listeners what they can do to best utilize
your advice
3. You can call upon your audience to make conscious
actions for chance
4. You can remind the audience what is at risk if change is
not made.
Impromptu speech