IELTS 4_M_Writing

Day 3_P.115
Analysis

1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.

2. Write a general over for the map.
Include the major changes and group
them generally.
3. Include a second sentence to be safe.
Analysis

Intro:
- The map – describe – changes to X

Overall:
- 1950: fewer buildings – next to residential
and agricultural area
- 2010: more facilities + a large car park
Intro & Overall

1. The map describes changes to X…

2. Overall, X contained fewer buildings
3. be located …
4. …had been added
5. …. the notable addition of X
Intro & Overall

1. The map describes changes to West Park

Secondary School over a period from 1950 to
2010. 2. Overall, West Park Secondary School
contained fewer buildings in 1950 and was
located nearer residential and agricultural
land. 3. By 2010, several facilities had been
added for students and there was the
notable addition of a large car park.
Details 1
1. Begin to describe the changes.
2. Be sure to compare as much as
possible.
3. In this one I separated inside and
outside the town itself.
Details 1
1. ………….., 3 rows of houses were located…
2. X was attached to the school.
3. …………significant alterations related to…..
4. X was replaced by ...
5. X was removed in favor of Y.
6. X remained unchanged.
Details 1
In 1950, 3 rows of houses were located to the left
of the school, just above a large section of
farmland and a playground attached to the
school. By 1980, there were significant alterations
related to housing. The former houses were
replaced by a car park and science block and the
farmland was removed in favor of a sports field.
The playground remained unchanged.
Details 2
1. Switch to another part of the map.
2. Don’t include any opinion and don’t
forget any areas.
3. Nothing should be left out!
Details 2
1. …. be reduced in size
2. in order to make room for….
3. The most significant change by this time
was …..
4. the expansion of ….
5. previously occupied entirely by….
6. Other structures were unaltered…
Details 2
By 2010, the playground had been reduced
in size in order to make room for a small
sports field. The most significant change by
this time was the expansion of the car park
overtaking the area previously occupied
entirely by the sports field. Other structures
were unaltered from 1980.
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