This memo is to inform All employees meet you that all employees today. meet today. I am writing this letter to Thanks to everyone who say thanks to everyone voted. who voted.
avoid a long lead-in. This e-mail message is to inform you that in all probability we will finish in two weeks. We will probably finish in two weeks.
avoid a long lead-in. There are many companies who are certain that these products are absolutely safe. Many companies are certain that these products are absolutely safe.
these examples, the word in italics is not needed. adequate enough new beginning advance warning past history big in size red in colour each and every repeat again exactly identical true facts
slang, clichés, and redundant words. Because of the advance warning, we made a killing in the stock market . Because of the warning, we were successful in the stock market.
instead of general ones. Market researchers said that profits would improve. What more precise verbs could replace said? Market researchers forecasted improved profits. Market researchers promised improved profits. Market researchers predicted improved profits.
How to Proofread Routine Documents Print a copy, preferably double-spaced, and set it aside. Allow adequate time. Be prepared to find errors. Read once for meaning and once for grammar/mechanics. Reduce your reading speed. Use standard proofreading marks.