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Hadith of the Day on Truthfulness:

Abdullah ibn Amr reported:


The Messenger of Allah, peace and blessings be
upon him, said, “Those who are merciful will be
shown mercy by the Merciful. Be merciful to those
on the earth and the One above the heavens will
have mercy upon you.”
Source: Sunan At-Tirmidhi 1924
Grade: Sahih (authentic) according to At-Tirmidhi
“If you are eating you
are licking, if you are
not eating you are
crying”
Don’t Regret it!! Try
it!!
Adaptation
Meeting of the Minds
Foundation of Adaptation
Sentences should be adapted to reader.
Use simple sentence structures for those less able to
understand;
Use more complex structures when appropriate.
Emphasis on Short Sentences
Short sentences communicate better
Short means about 16-18 words
Excessive use of short sentences is bad.
Flesch Reading Ease
90-100 : Very Easy
80-89 : Easy
70-79 : Fairly Easy
60-69 : Standard
50-59 : Fairly Difficult
30-49 : Difficult
0-29 : Very Confusing
Flesch–Kincaid Grade Level
Two Ways to Make Short
Sentences
(1)Limiting Content
Avoid overdoing this suggestion.
Too many short sentences give a choppy effect.
Two Ways to Make Short
Sentences
(2) Seek shorter way of saying things.
Avoid cluttering phrases
 In the event that payment is not made by Jan., operations
will cease.
Eliminate surplus words
 It will be noted that the records of the past year show a
steady increase in special appropriations.
Avoid roundabout way
 It is essential that the income be used to retire the debt.
Shorter Ways of Saying
Repeat words only for effect and emphasis.
 We have not received your payment covering invoices
covering June and July purchase.
Avoid repetition of ideas (Redundancies)
 Please endorse your name on the back of this check
 We must assemble together at 10:30am in the morning.
Determining Emphasis in Sentence
Design
Short sentences emphasize contents.
Long sentences de-emphasize contents.
Determining emphasize is a matter of good
judgment.
Giving Sentences Unity
Determining emphasize is a matter of good
judgment.
All parts of a sentence should concern one thought.
Care in Paragraph Design
Contents of a paragraph should concern one topic or
ideas (unity).
Unity can vary in breadth. Paragraph unity concerns a
narrow topic.
Keeping Paragraphs Short
Generally, paragraphs should be short.
Short paragraphs show organization better than long
ones.
Most readers prefer to read short paragraphs.
About eight lines is a good average length.
A good practice is to question paragraphs over 12
lines.
Make Good use of Topic Sentence
Topic sentences can help make good paragraphs.
Placement of the topic sentence depends on the
writer’s plan.
Placement of Topic Sentence
The topic sentence can come first.
It can come last.
Or it can come in the middle.
Leaving Out Unnecessary Detail
Deciding what to include is a matter of judgment.
Each paragraph should move an additional step
toward the goal.
Discussion on Next Class
Male Students: Yes, female
Workers should NOT follow a
dress code at a work place.

Female Students: Yes, male


Workers should follow a
professional dress code at a
work place.
Thanks Much!!!

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