BENEFIT ESSAY

PERSONALITY GAME
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By NTHT - ULIS
 VSTEP WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Today there has been an increase in sex-related

problems among children, so sex education is being
taught in schools. Discuss the benefits of sex education
to society.
 
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant
examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words
 INTRODUCTORY PARAGRAPH

2 sentences
- Câu 1: paraphrase đề bài
today => nowadays
there has been an increase => the world has seen an increase
sex-related problems => sex-relevant issues
- Câu 2: mẫu câu dùng cho dạng benefit
From my perspective, there is no doubt that sex
education should be encouraged/developed/more
widespread among all schools because of its
immeasurable benefits.
 BODY 1

• TOPIC SENTENCE : Firstly, the schoolchildren who take sex

education as their main subject at school can greatly
benefit from it.
• Gain knowledge about their gender and relevant problems
They can be fully aware of their body parts and how to care for
them.
Physiological changes/hormonal changes when they reach their
puberty such as monthly menstruation with girls and voice breaking
with boys
Know signs of sex criminals such as pedophile, sex harassments or
sex abuse and learn ways to protect themselves from sex crimes
 BODY 2
• TOPIC SENTENCE : Aside from the advantages for children,
sex education also offers numerous values to the entire
society.
Þ Provide knowledge about safe sex or preventions of unwanted
pregnancy or sexually-transmitted diseases.
Þ Youngsters know how to develop healthy relationships
Þ Curb undesirable consequences caused by the lack of knowledge
about sex (i.e. a decrease in abortion rate and crime rate)
Þ Create a civilized community
 Take European countries as an example. This is where sex
education is an official subject and the abortion as well as crime
rates are not as high as in developing countries in Asia
 CONCLUDING PARAGRAPH

2 sentences
- Câu 1: restate the above-discussed benefits
In a nutshell, sex education should be listed as a vital part of school
curriculum thanks to all merits it can bring.
- Câu 2: offer your personal recommendation
I believe that the world will be better with a lower rate of children
falling victims of sex crimes in case this subject attracts more
concern.