INSTRUCTION:

Paraphrase all the model essays below

with your group. Make sure that you only
have about 50 words for each essay.

MODEL ESSAY 1

PARAPHRASE:

Currently, there are quite a few students who cannot go to

university because they cannot afford to pay tuition fees, so
everyone will be equal regardless of rich or poor if college
tuition is eliminated.So society will become fair to all students
It is a fact that most students work part-time to pay for college
tuition,so eliminating college tuition fees will help them
invest in their studies better

MODEL ESSAY 2

PARAPHRASE:

Education should be develop about practice life skills for

student empathy and self-discipline and the most important
thing you need to do is community service Example like
student go to participate in volunteer activities to improve
their work ethic so that student will have more opportunity to
the college now companies need this type of experience

MODEL ESSAY 3
PARAPHRASE:

MODEL ESSAY 4
PARAPHRASE:

To solve the issues of obesity and weight, the most effective

approach is to take a long-term view and introduce more sport
and exercise to schools. This method will ensure that the next
generation will be healthier and will not encounter such health
problems. Currently, the average child in the West can play
sports twice a week, which is not enough to combat their
sedentary lifestyle. However, by incorporating more sports
classes into the curriculum as well as encouraging
extracurricular sports activities, children will inevitably
become healthier and more active.

Another factor to think over is that having more sports lessons

for children in schools will probably result in children
developing an interest in exercise which might filter through
to other members of their family and have a longer lasting
effect. In order to motivate their sporty children, parents are
likely to become involved in the same sport. By both parents
and children being active in sports, it will ensure that children
become accustomed to physical activity in their day-to-day
lives. This is certainly a natural and lasting way to improve
public health.