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PUBLIC SPEAKING

RE:Hope English Speech Contest 2023 -


Ami Muarifah - Change Your Habit Change Your
Life
Nama : Delfi Rohayani
NPM : 22520007
https://youtu.be/x9yH8qPECzo?
si=Y7wvEAU8Rn6BeBjf
RE:Hope English Speech Contest 2023 with the theme
"Change Your Habit, Change Your Life" delivered by
Ami Muarifah. This contest is possibly an English
speech competition in which Ami Muarifah presented
her ideas and ideas related to how a change in habits
can positively change one's life.
A. Strengths
1. Good selection of title or theme.
=> It can attract viewers' attention and provide motivation. The title of the information,
"Change Your Habits, Change Your Life," indicates a potentially impactful and relevant
message, which is likely to catch the attention of viewers looking for inspiration. In
addition, this information indicates a potentially motivating and impactful message with
viewers.

2. The information is concise and easy to understand.


=> not long-winded and straight to the purpose of the information, as well as a good
delivery structure. In my opinion the need to provide information in a concise and
straightforward manner is so that viewers can understand the information easily
according to a good delivery structure.

3. Fluent language in conveying information.


=> not complicated in speaking English and easy to understand. Here the meaning is that
in conveying information even though using English, he is very fluent and not
B. Weakness
1. Common title
=> Although the title is motivational, it is quite general. Needing to add a
unique angle can increase its appeal so that it is slightly different from the
general information.

2. Limited or incomplete information.


=> Without specific details about the content or delivery of the
information. Although the delivery is brief but without specific details
about the content or delivery, it is difficult to assess the potential in terms
of clarity of message or impact on the audience.

3. No live audience
=> Lack of presentation structure. Lack of a live audience, so the structure
of the presentation is not maximized. Preferably, if there is a live audience,
there will be interaction between the presenter and the audience, such as
THANK YOU
FOR YOUR ATTENTION

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