Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Unit One
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Learning objectives
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The business
memorandum is
essentially an internal
business letter. The
“memo” as it is usually
called, is the key
internal communication
tool in most business
and institutions.
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1.1 Introduction about business memo
internal communication
Use memos rather than letters when you are communicating within your
organization,
Memos are used to: announce, inform, advise, quantify, delegate, direct,
discipline, instruct, request and transmit.
1.2 Layout of Memo
. Heading Segment
Body
Closing
Heading Segment
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①Begin
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MEMORANDUM
address the reader by her or his correct name and job title.
Use a job title after your name, and hand write your initials by your name.
Close with a courteous ending that states what action you want your reader to
take.
Signature Block Rather than a full signature, most memos will include the
initials of the writer.
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1.3 Keep these formatting ideas in mind:
Font sizes, underlining, bolding, and italicizing make headings and important
information stand out.
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1.4 Golden Rules
Be conversational.
Don't show off. Avoid scholarly words, technical jargon, and just plain words
Be sincere.
Keep paragraphs short. Limit each paragraph to five lines or less. Put each reason
in a separate paragraph rather than bunching them up .
Most memos specify exactly who should receive the information and are narrow, specific and
to the point. In most cases, memos are concerned with one subject: the issue described in the
subject line.
Memos are most effective when they connect the purpose of the writer with the interests and
needs of the reader. When planning your memo, be sure to think about it from your reader's
perspective: :
① How is this relevant to me?
② What, specifically, do you want me to do?
③ What's in it for me?
Use a short thank you to finish the memo. This need not be as formal as in a written letter.
. sample memo 1
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TO: All Departmental Managers
FROM:. T.C. HR Manager
DATE: 8/09/2022
SUBJECT: Meeting for Departmental Managers
Starting from 1 January 2023, we will institute our new policy of capping salary increase at 10%
for all employees. This is due to the economic downturn in our industry as a result of Covid 19 and
our need to curtail expenses in an effort to avoid further layoffs.
To help you prepare to answer any questions member of your department may have. I've called a
meeting which you all must attend.
Date: Sep.27
Time: 10:30am
Place: Conference Room 200
We wish you the best of luck in finding suitable employment. Please feel free to use me as a
reference.
Best wishes
Case 1
• To: All mumber of staff, Northern Branch
• From: ALP
• Date: 2 August 2022
• As you know, one of the reasons for the introduction of laptops in Northern Branch was to
provide us with feedback before we decide whether to provide laptops for staff in other
departments. The Board has asked me to submit a report on your experiences by the end of this
week. I talked to some of you informally about this last month. During my brief visit I noticed a
group of people in the canteen playing some kind of computer game and I heard from a senior
manager that he only used his for writing letters. So that I can compile a full report. I would like
everyone to let me know what they personally use their laptop for, what software they use and
how long per day they spend actually using it. It would also be useful to find out how their laptop
has not come up to expectations, and any unexpected uses they have found for their laptop, so
that others can benefit from your experience.
• The body of the email should contain all pertinent information and should be direct and informative.
• Make sure to include any call to action you desire, such as a phone call or follow-up appointment.
Then, make sure you include your contact information, including your name, title, phone and fax
numbers, as well as snail-mail address. If you have additional email addresses, you may want to
include these, as well.
Rules of writing Email
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Emails should be clear and concise. Sentences should be kept short and to the point.
DON’T TYPE IN ALL CAPS! Remember, if you emphasize everything, you will have
emphasized nothing.
Use bullets to convey lists of items or information; do not use numbers, unless there
is a need for sequence.
Use bold, italics and white space to make important information bits stand out, within
the email, such as times, locations, dimensions or specifications.
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Sample Email
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Dear Tao Ran,
Kind Regards
Victoria Harold
Admissions Officer
MBA, DBA, MSc Human Resource Mgt, GradDip Business Administration, PhD
Business School
University of Birmingham
0121 414 7909
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Sample Email 2
Dear Winson,
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My sincere apologies for the error that was made in the dispatch of
your study materials. The correct textbook has been sent to you
today via DHL and should arrive within the next week. I hope this is
of assistance. Good luck with your studies.
Thank you.
Leeanne Carrick
Dispatch/Assignments Coordinator
Division of Learning and Teaching Services
Charles Sturt University
Boorooma Street
Wagga Wagga NSW 2678
Ph: 02 6933 2432
Fax: 02 6933 2797
lcarrick@csu.edu.au
www.csu.edu.au
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Sample email 3
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Dear Mr. Wong,
We are really sorry for the wrong delivery of 200 dozens of men’s socks. The right goods
have been sent to you today and they will arrive within this week.
For the 200 dozens of women’s socks, please send us before 3rd October. We’ll be
responsible for the freight.
In order to compensate for your loss, we’ll give you a special 2 % discount against your
next order.
We sincerely apologize for the inconvenience caused . We can ensure you that this will
never happen again.
Best regards
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Business Letters
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business «» business
business «» consumer
job applicant «» company
citizen «» government official
employer «» employee
staff member «» staff member
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Business Letters
Letters
• letters
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especially in formal and semiformal contexts.
Letters are an essential part of all business and technical communication because
they are more formal and reliable than electronic mail and more precise and
permanent than telephone or face-to-face conversations.
COMMON TYPES OF BUSINESS LETTERS
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Acknowledgement letter = This letter is meant to thank the reader for something they did for
you in the office.
Adjustment Letter = This letter should be used in response to a written complaint against
someone or something. The purpose of it is to inform the reader that actions are being taken
against the wrong doing.
Complaint Letter = this letter is just to let the reader know that an error as been found and
needs to be corrected as soon as possible.
Inquiry Letter = An inquiry letter is written as a request for a certain something or in response
to a request made by someone.
Order Letter = they are used to order material that is running low and will be needed soon.
This type of letter is commonly known as a PO (purchase order).
• Three letter styles are: the block style, the modified block style, the
semi-block style. the block style is frequently used in business letters.
1. The Heading
2. The Inside Name and Address
3. The Salutation
4. The Body
5. The Complementary Closing
6. The Signature
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The Heading
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This is an indispensable part of the letter and it aims to give some information
about the writer. This contains the sender’s address (usually two or three lines) with
the date.
Some notes:
(1) Usually centered at the top, or name of the firm in the middle of the top;
(2) If printing on blank paper, remember to print on the right corner;
(3) The date line is 2-6 spaces after the letterhead. It should always be typed in
full and figures should not be used for months.
The normal order of elements in the date line are month, day, and year, e.g.,
July 15, 2018.
15 July 2018.
In either case, abbreviations are not used.
The Inside Address. .
• This is the address you are sending your letter to. Make it as
complete as possible. Include titles and names if you know them. Skip
a line after the heading before the inside address. Skip another line
after the inside address before the greeting.
Sexist salutations, e.g., Dear Sirs, Gentlemen, etc., are not used.
The Body.
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The body is written as text. A business letter is never hand written.
Two lines below the salutation;
The text is single or double spaced, depending on letter length.
A blank line appears between paragraphs.
On each continuation page, the name of the addressee, the page number and the
date should be typed in either of the ways specified below;
(1) Mr. Wilson 2 May 20, 2018
(1) Yours faithfully etc (when you do not know the receiver’s name)
(2) Yours sincerely etc (when you know the receiver’s name)
(3) Best regards /Kindest regards/Kind regards
There are some differences between British and American English in this area, and these are shown below
British English
Opening Closing
Dear Sir/Madam Yours faithfully
Dear Mr Gates Yours sincerely
American English
Dear Sir/madam Sincerely yours
Respectfully yours
Dear Mr Gates Yours sincerely
Sincerely yours
The Signature Line. .
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Skip at least two lines after the complimentary close;
• It .is usually followed by a typewritten name;
No courtesy titles should be put before a man’s name except his academic degree or
social title (Professor, Doctor etc). If professional ratings should be given, they are
usually typed after the typewritten name.
Examples are
John Doe,
John Doe, Manager
P. Smith
P. Smith
Director, Technical Support
R. T. Jones
R. T. Jones - Sr. Field Engineer
They appear two lines below the salutation and two lines above the first line of the
text, although the simplified letter format may have different spacing.
Subject lines are highlighted by boldface type, underlining, or the use of ALL
CAPITAL LETTERS.
JOB INQUIRY
Enclosures Line
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Placed at the left-hand margin,
Purpose: telling how many other pieces of paper are enclosed.
Following the identification initials
Enclosure
Enclosures: 3
Enclosures (3)
The following are examples of enclosure notation forms:
Enclosure Enc. Enclosures (3)
3 Enclosures Enclosures 3
Enclosures (3)
1. Invoice 6234-44
2. Graph of sales activity
3. Letter of authorization
C.C. Line
If only the inputter's initials are used, they are usually lowercase, e.g., rgn. If the
writer's initials are included, they are in all capitals, followed by a slash mark or
colon, and then followed by the inputter's initials in lower case, e.g., TLM/rgn or
TLM:rgn.
The N.B. and P.S
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N.B.: ( 留心 , 注意 )short for Latin word :Nota Bene’, aiming to call the reader’s
special attention to the following points.
P.S.: short for ‘postscript’, meaning an extra message added at the end of the
letter ( 又及,附笔 )
Forbes Plastics Ltd
7 West End Road, London, G14 2RR, United Kingdom
0044-Tel: 0044-020-73708687 Fax: 0044-020-73708685
e-mail: cic@forbes.co.uk
• 26 March 2022
• Thank you for your enquiry about our range of office storage products.
• Please find enclosed our current catalogue and price list, which I am sure you will find of interest.
• Your sales representatives will be visiting customers in USA next month and I will be very happy to meet you with samples of our products. I will contact
you with more details in the near future.
• If you require any further information, please do not hesitate to contact me.
• Yours sincerely,
• J. Nardi
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• Joe Nardi
• Sales Manager
• Enclosures: (1)catalogue
(2) price list
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Our refC2992
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Your ref FH/55
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27 March 2018
James Bachar
Purchasing manager
227 Boton Avenue 26 march 2018
New York 98986
USA
Thank you for your enquiry about our range of office storage products.
Please find enclosed our current catalogue and price list, which I am sure you will find of interest.
Your sales representatives will be visiting customers in USA next month and I will be very happy to meet you with samples of our products. I will
contact you with more details in the near future.
If you require any further information, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Yours sincerely
J. Nardi
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Joe Nardi
Sales Manager
Enclosures: (1)catalogue
(2) price list
Our refC2992 .
James Bachar Your ref FH/55
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Purchasing manager
227 Boton Avenue 26 march 2006
New York 98986
USA 22 March 2006
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Dear Mr. Bachar,
Thank you for your enquiry about our range of office storage products.
Please find enclosed our current catalogue and price list, which I am sure you will find of interest.
Your sales representatives will be visiting customers in USA next month and I will be very happy to meet you with samples of our products. I
will contact you with more details in the near future.
If you require any further information, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Yours sincerely
J. Nardi
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Joe Nardi
Sales Manager
Enclosures: (1)catalogue
(2) price list
• Dear all,
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I have a query regarding retrenchment compensation payable to employees who are shown an exit
on account of downsizing due to cost escalation.(ITES Company)
The Management has already served the notice to the employees and asked the employees to look
for some other job. And, also it gave an option to some of the employees to come for work till the
end of Notice period , but still promised to pay the notice period. Meanwhile, some of the
employees got job outside and joined them immediately.
1)Now, the question is whether Notice Pay and Retrenchment compensation payable to employees
who have joined other Comapnies.
2) If required, is it possible to revoke the Notice served and ask the employees to join back?
3) Whether Salary to be paid to the employees who are served Notice but asked to come for work.
4) What is the reason for separation to be mentioned in their service certificates?
If i have missed anything, please include your comments for the same also along with your query.
Thanks&Regards,
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M.T.K.S. Vasan
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Checklists for writing letters
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• 1. What is my purpose in writing this letter?
2. What does my reader want or need to know to understand my message?
3. Have I answered important questions and provided the necessary information for
the reader?
4. Did I accomplish my purpose?
5. Have I included boring, confusing, or distracting information?
6. What do I want the reader to do when he or she is done reading this?
7. Is that clear to the reader?
8. Have I included all the information necessary for the reader to take this action?
Business Communication
Establishing a professional ‘self’ through effective intercultural communication’
Clear
Concrete
Concise
Correct
Courteous
Convincing
Complete
Coherence
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September 7, 2022
In response to your query, I wish to state that we no longer have an original copy of the
brochure requested. Be advised that a photographic reproduction is enclosed herewith.
Yours sincerely,
Ahmad Mastor Ali
AMA:knt
Enclosure
Revised version
Regards
• Dear James,
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• I would like to talk to you about the ABC's project on XYZ. I had a
meeting with the design team yesterday and had discussed the
campaign requirments for this project.
• John Chan from your team has expertise in doing the social media
campaign for ABC, so I would like him to work on the XYZ campaign
too. Would you be available sometime tomorrow to discuss this
further? I am free at any time to meet tomorrow (date).
Concrete
• It is important to avoid being vague when communicating in a business
environment. Use concrete language that leaves no room for
misinterpretation. This can involve concepts as well as specific
instructions.
unit evaporateor
Best regards
Bella Lee
Dear Bella,
I just read your enquiry about our favourite holiday destination. Hilltop
resort is the best resort for us. It is situated at the top of the western hills,
and surrounded by waterfalls. The facilities are great too-there are 3
swimming pools, a bbq area, a gym and 2 small supermarkets.
It is a great way to escape from life's chaos and stress. Relax and rejuvenate
yourself at Hilltop. Let me know if you want more details.
Feel free to join us on our next holiday to the Hilltop Resort in June if you
like.
Coherent. Your reader needs to understand your message immediately. As
you set down your thoughts and ideas, do so in a logical manner and help
your reader to follow along by linking your ideas together sensibly.
result
why
1 2 3 4
Dear Anni,
Upon the completion in the 3rd quarter. Fiin will contact you
to arrange a date to discuss the budget for the 4th quarter so
the client can move on to complete the final stage of the
project.
Dear Anni,
• pursuant to your request, the physical inventory has been scheduled for May
3.
• As you requested, the physical inventory has been scheduled for May 3.
needless repetition: advance forward, it goes without saying, best ever, each and
every, dollar amount, hot water heater, looking forward to the future...
2. the editor checked the manuscript and found three glaring errors.
redundancy rewrite
This will help emhance our brand image. We'll talk in detail tomorrow.
correctness
ensure every word within the documents contains
accurant facts and figures. this includes
proofreading the letter to check for grammer and
spelling mistakes.
spelling
grammer
punctuation
information: facts and figure
tone
appropriate and correct language
Dear John,
regards
Anne
Dear John,
Further to our conversation today, I am attaching the plan for the first
stage of the project. Hope the one week deadline is okay with you
and your team.
Tone: addressing the your intended audience in an appropriate
manner. A letter to a board of directors would use much more
formal language than a memo to your supervisor.
courteous
2.we cannot ship your order until you send us full specification
negative tone
I cannot approve your transfer to our overseas operation.
subjunctive mood
if positions were available in our overseas operation, I would approve
your transfer.
You must cut down the price by 30%, otherwise we will not place an
order.
avoid “you”
Since I took the leadership role, the sales has increased by 20%
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general-specific
specific
Thank you for writing me about your problems with your creditors
and the possibility of filing bankcrupcy.
General
Thank you for your explanation of your financial status.
specific
Greg told me about the tragedy in your business.
general
Greg told me about what happened last week.
bad news-using indirect approach
Sincerely,
Mary De Cruz
Human Resource Manager
Dear Mr. Badrul Hisham;
Buffer
Thank you for your time and effort in applying for the position of account
executive at Bara Group of Companies.
Bad News
Since we needed someone who can assume the duties here with minimum of
training, we have selected an applicant with over ten years of experience.
Goodwill
I am sure that with your excellent university record you will find a position in
another office.
Sincerely,
Mary De Cruz
Human Resource Manager
good news
Dear Mr. Badrul Hisham;
Good News
Congratulations. Please accept our offer of the position of account executive at
Bara group of Companies.
Explanation
If the terms we discussed in the interview are acceptable to you, please come
in at 9:30 a.m. on November 15. At that time we will ask you to complete our
personnel form, in addition……..
Goodwill
I, as well as the others in the office, look forward to working with you. Everyone
was very favourably impressed with you during your interviews.
Sincerely,
Mary De Cruz
Human Resource Manage
Dear Ann,
I undersand that the IT team is very busy with work and receives many requests
from every department in the organisation.
The Finance Department has completed its selection process for the MS in Financial Economics
Program entering class for 2023. The Department reviewed over 750 applications for only 30
open positions. Largely due to this we are not able to extend you an offer of admission. The
enrollment rate for the Masters in Financial Economics Program will likely be about 4%. I want to
assure you that your application was given an exhaustive and thorough review by our admissions
committee.
The selection of new students is always very difficult. This decision is not a negative assessment
of your training, interests, or ability. Nor does the outcome of our current search preclude you from
applying again, in the future, to our Program or others within Columbia University.
Sincerely,
MS Admissions
Columbia Business School
Columbia University
MS & PhD Admissions
David Geffen Hall, Room 483
645 West 130th Street
New York, NY 10027
completeness
I made a complaint to the Branch Manager on June 23, 2020 on the inordinate
delay at the cash counter. Can I get a response?
2. I want a room booked in your hotel for three days in the first week of the
month of July:
I want a single room accommodation for three days from
3rd July morning.Please do the booking in my name.
our flight will arrive in london at 8.00 pm.
let's meet tomorrow lunch to discuss the product lauch event. Please be
there on time.
Regards
Christine
Dear All,
Let us meet tomorrow (9th Sep) at 11am at the Annex Building , room909 to
discuss the product lauch event. We will have to decide the keynote speakers and
complete the event invitation draft tomorrow.
The Martin Northern sales division is holding its annual meeting soon. would you be
interested in supplying us with some promotional materis that we can use as gifts for
our sales representatives? Last year you were kind enough to provide key chains
engraved with your logo, which were a big hit with our people. I'm sure they were a
constant reminder that your hotels are good places for Martin Northon sales
representatives to stay while travelling on business. Our record show that 342 Martin
Norton people spent a total of 2345 nights with you last year, an increase of 37
percent over the year before.
convincing:
Good business communication relies on facts, not opinions. Once lost credibility is
hard to repair, so always check your facts and sources. When referencing facts, pay
attention to how the data was collected and whether the results were unbiased. Make
sure your information is up to date.
1. If the budget for advertising can be increased, this will significantly improve the
sales.
2. if we recommend the wrong product to the customer, we should give them 30%
discount for all their future orders.
1. We are happy to announce that transaction can be made even after 3.00 PM
till 5.00 PM at the teller-counter.
2.You will be (or customers will be) able to do transactions after office hours, at
the Teller counter till 5.00 PM.
2:The dues for cable TV connection for the month of July remain unpaid.
In business communication, receiver / reader benefit appeals to the
reader and so results in promoting business and building goodwill.
Consideration also means emphasizing positive and pleasant facts.
“Goods in bad condition and without the bill will not be exchanged “
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We sincerely apologize for the wrong delivery of 200 dozens of men’ socks. We
have dispatched the correct goods yesterday and they will arrive within three
days.
Can you please send us the wrong goods as soon as possible ? We will bear the
shipping cost/freight.
To compensate for your loss, we will give you a special discount of 2% off this
order ad next order. .
Inasmuch as as
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formal and conversational style
I need to
So instead of :
Our address records have been amended ...
write
We’ve changed your address in our records ...
Instead of
The company policy is ...
write
Our policy is ...
How to improve
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As we noted in the preceding section, if you purchased additional printer options,
such as the second printer tray, it is a requirement to verify its correct installation”.
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“As we noted in the previous section, if you bought extra printer equipment, such as
second printer tray, you must check to install it correctly”.
choice of words and tone
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• . “The sales receipt must be enclosed with the merchandise before we can process
the refund.”
“Please enclose the sales receipt with the merchandise, so that we can send your
refund promptly.”
Please don’t send us the bad news.
We must reject your order for 100 tons of white
. sugar.
We can’t attend the seminar.
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revise the message
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Formal: I am writing in reference to your kind invitation to address the New York
chapter of the American Technology Association. I appreciate your regard for my
expertise. However, it is with deep regret that I must decline your kind invitation
Chatty: Many thanks the invite to chat with the American Technology Association.
Sorry-can’t make it. Have to be on the West coast then.
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Personal: thank you for asking me to speak at the New York chapter of the
American Technology Association. I would very much like to accept the invitation,
but I must be on the West Coast that week
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Get to the Heart of the Matter
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I wish to take this opportunity to thank you for taking the time to send us your
recent inquiry. As you no doubt are aware, your membership entitles you to all the
rights and privileges afforded to current members. Also , you will be receiving on a
monthly basis a copy of our newsletter, which we hope you will find to be of value,
please feel free to share this newsletter with any of your colleagues who you feel
might also find it worthwhile.
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thank you for your recent inquiry. your membership entitles you to all the
privileges of current members. Also , you will receive a monthly newsletter, which
we hope you will find to be of value, please share this newsletter with colleagues
who might also find it worthwhile.
Positive words
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Negative: this product is no more harmful than a hair dryer.
Positive: this product is as safe as a hair dryer.
Negative: participation for the month of January hasn’t increased.
It remained at 45%.
To avoid the loss of your credit rating, please remit payment within
a week.
A. The following sentences are correct, but there is still room for improvement.
Try to improve them with the techniques introduced in this chapter.
• Gentlemen,
• We are sorry to say that the price for your cigarette lighters is too high for us
to work on. So it is a pity we cannot place an order for your products.
• We have received a quotation from a German company and they quoted us a
price approximately 15% lower than that of yours. We admit that the quality of
their products dose not measure up to that of yours, but the price gap between
yours and theirs is too wide for us to accept.
• Although we are keen to do business with you, we regret that we cannot
accept your offer or even meet you half way.
• Sorry again for the rejection. We wish you can sell your high-priced lighters to
other importers successfully.
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C. Compare the following two letters and find out what methods have
been applied in the improved letter.
• Congratulations! Your, loan for US$ 120,000.00 has been approved. This money
should be enough to help rebuild your warehouse.
• This loan is for a 5-year period. The rate for the first year is the lowest possible we
can offer—12 percent. The interest on your loan after the first year is a low 14
percent, lower than that charged by any other bank in town. We can arrange the
payment dates and method of payment, and discuss other agreement details when you
come in to sign the loan agreement.
• Mr. Brown, your company seems to be on its way to becoming a very successful
business firm and may be interested in using our financial services, such as free
checking and low interest revolving credit accounts. Please ask about these benefits
on your next visit our bank.
• you may stop in at your convenience and complete the necessary paperwork for your
loan. Your business is certainly appreciated, and we are always pleased to help you
meet all your financial needs.
5 How to address an envelope
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Names and addresses on envelopes should be identical to those in the
letterhead, the inside address, and the signature block of the letter.
Business envelopes, regardless of size, must carry both the addressee's full
name and address and the sender's return address, both in block style..
Adhering to the following guidelines will ensure that letter mail is technically
compatible with these devices.
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Foreign mailings should have the country name, printed in capital letters, as the
only information on the bottom line. The postal delivery zone, if any, should be
included with the city:
MR JACK EDWARDS
103 CAMDEN DRIVE
LONDON W4P2HQ
ENGLAND
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Every house and business in the UK has a complete postal address that helps
Royal Mail deliver mail quickly, accurately and cost effectively.
We’ve laid out below the elements that make up a postal address and those that
are required for us to deliver mail.
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Address Is it Required? Information