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Author: __________________________________

Revisor: __________________________________

Questions to ask during revision:

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1. Does all of the writing address the

Be as SPECIFIC as you can in your responses!

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2. What doesn't make sense? Explain.


3. Is the hook interesting enough? Ex-

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4. Has the author taken compositional


risks with vocab./dialogue? Explain.
5. Could the author use more careful/
precise/sophisticated word choice? How?
6. Is there enough imagery, description,
or elaboration? Explain.
7. Is there a life lesson, moral, or point to
the story? Explain.
8. Is the story within the realm of reasonable possibility? Explain.

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Author: __________________________________
Revisor: __________________________________

Questions to ask during revision:

______________________________________________________________

1. Does all of the writing address the

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______________________________________________________________
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______________________________________________________________
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Be as SPECIFIC as you can in your responses!

prompt?
2. What doesn't make sense? Explain.
3. Is the hook interesting enough? Explain.
4. Has the author taken compositional
risks with vocab./dialogue? Explain.
5. Could the author use more careful/
precise/sophisticated word choice? How?
6. Is there enough imagery, description,
or elaboration? Explain.
7. Is there a life lesson, moral, or point to
the story? Explain.
8. Is the story within the realm of reasonable possibility? Explain.

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