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Blog Author: Charlotte Smith Blog Assessor: Tom Bentley Date: 17/10/13 Question 1-The formatting of the blog.
The blog is formatted very well, and with appropiate colours. I also like the style of the background and style of the text. The colours of the background are bright and some are dark, but do really contrast well together particularly with the main background colour which is black. I like the colour black background also because the the style and colour of the text and subtitles stand out on top of the black colour background. The size of the text in the central part of the blog is a particularly good and appropiate size as you are able to read the text.
Improvements:
for improvements on the formatting of your blog, I'd suggest that you make the size, style, and font of the text in the side tab bar a little more appropiate. To do this i think you should change the text to something plain and easy to understand, so that the text isn't all hard to understand.
Mark: 8/10
Improvements:
For the improvements on your welcome, I'd suggest that you express your interests in media and say why you have chosen it and your particular interests within the subject. Mark: 8/10
Improvements:
For the improvements on your camera movements post, I'd suggest that you explain more about the camera movements and go into a bit more depth about them. Another improvement I'd suggest is to put a bit more description in your opening sentence defining about camera movements. Mark: 8/10