You can do it mom

by Autumn Irick

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201 797

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07-NOV-2013 01:16PM 370759398

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GRADEMARK REPORT FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS You did a good job with this. Content is good.

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You need to proofread carefully. There are too many grammar/sentence errors. Capitalize title correctly.

Proofread This part of the sentence contains a grammatical error or misspelled word that makes your meaning unclear. 1. because 2. caused by S/V This subject and verb may not agree. Proofread the sentence to make sure the subject agrees with the verb. 3. run-on 4. run-on 5. run-on 6. run-on 7 . delete 8. no comma 9. ." 10. wrong word

RUBRIC: PEP TALK PARA. FORM

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Commendable Proper margins. Indentation of first line. Continuous writing. Variety of sentence starters, appropriate transitions, and title. Contains proper margins and indentation of first line and continuous writing. Lacks some variety in sentence starters and/or appropriate transitions. Title is not capitalized correctly. Missing one of the following: Proper margins. Indentation of first line. Continuous writing. Variety of sentence starters. Appropriate transitions. Title. Missing two or more of the following: Proper margins. Indentation of first line. Continuous writing. Variety of sentence starters. Appropriate transitions. Title. Exceptional Student has written a pep talk that contains all 5 ingredients. The ingredients are interesting, and the student has used good detail where necessary. We feel encouraged by reading this speech. Student has included the 5 ingredients, but information could be more informative. Some of the information is too generic. Students speech is too general. One or more of the ingredients is not fully developed. There is no organization to the material. Student has not addressed the required components. Unacceptable Proper capitalization. Proper punctuation. Correct sentence structure. Proper capitalization. Proper punctuation. Has a few sentence structure problems. A few errors in capitalization, punctuation, and/or sentence structure. Too many errors in capitalization, punctuation, and/or sentence structure.

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