STEP #3: Body Paragraph #2

TOPIC SENTENCE 2 The patriarchal structure of her family is blocking her desire of getting confidence as a young woman. EV 1 The young girl was describes as so pretty and the youngest of her family, a little late-comer, had been indulged by her mother and the grandmother, which reveals that they build up her confidence Introduce the quote, show what is happening in the story; make the quote shorter W1 Sentence #1: because Her mother is spoiling her to not be brave like other kids. Sentence #2: It shows that her mother was doing that because she was more beautiful than the other kids around her village.

EV 2 Furthermore when it is says in the story Her father might forbid her, if he was home, but he is away in the forest. W2 Sentence #1: because Her father might refuse to let her go in the forest alone in this late night. Sentence #2: It reveal that her father will not allowed her to leave home by herself without him giving her permission.

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