Analysis

In this piece, which was a part of my pillow book, I really like my usage of pillow book-like
grammatical sequences, like never ending sentences. A sentence has sixty seven commas in it, and it is
still going, and I am just praying for the end of the sentence to come, but it does not come. I tried this
technique out in my piece, but it was nowhere near as effective as I could have been. ne thing I did not
like about this piece was that my friend who was a noisy eater saw it, and told me that it was stupid to
be angry about. !ecause of this I added the last line, just to make him happy, and I do not like this line,
as I am fairly sure that my sanity dissipates a little bit each time I hear someones mouth open.